Go ahead

Everything on looperman can be used commercially, just as my loops including this one. But thank u for asking instead of just trying to steal it

Thank u ;)

This is really great. I dig the slow drum, the stuttering and over vibe I get. The arp in the background seems a little of key but for a first track this is certainly great. Keep going on !

You're welcome ;)
But about the song. I really dig the visual and the little conversation going on. The drum however doesn't have the same bpm as the song, making out of sync with the loop. Which isn't good

The drum is of grade A and it is certainly not bad. But if u feel as if u could have done way more then do way more. Go further and try to provide great music each time u put out something. It's a good song now but it could have been a great song. Either way i like it

It starts good but after the intro it's just too busy. I have no idea of what is happening. The bass drum just "Bams" in the song. Try to build up your song and use something called 'sidechains' to keep your drum in control hehe

If feel as if the beat is to upbeat. I tried to make the loop as chill as possible and the beat just does the opposite. It's a good beat but maybe not for this loop ?

This is great. I really dig the conversation going on and the overal vibe. Keep going

Peeped it. The drums are quite sloopy, meaning they are sometimes of beat. But maybe that's the point ? Also the wobble in the beginning set me quite off. The dialogue is nice but there's no need to stop the audio completely each time someone speaks. But all of it is rather opinion then hard truth. Keep doing what you love

I would try to throw in more elements. The beat works with the loop and the snippets of dialogue are nice but not something I would listen for 2 minutes. Experiment with sounds, melodies,basslines anything. Keep on improving

Nice beat. It will added something to the loop. Shame there isn't something else to really call it a track. Maybe weird request but can you not link the sample ? I would like to keep the samples I make within the looperman community

Great use of the loop but there's some off key thingy in the background ? I can't tell what it is but it isn't pleasant. I really dig the glitchin effect paired with the drum. Also the speech is a really nice touch. Keep growing and making music !!

Make surely to comment the song. I will be waiting !!

AND ENJOYED I DID..Damn son. This might be the best version there is including my own. You should be teaching me. Thank YOU for sharing this beauty. I like it a lot.

For a first track this is pretty good. (Mine was absolute shite) I like the use of loop and the unorthodox drums. Kept nice and viby. Keep them coming!!

If you want to put out quality music you need to put your time and energy into it. Otherwise your music will never what it could be btw. I don't like the track because the second hi-hat (i am guessing it's a hi-hat) is a bit loud. But the drum followed by that doesn't fit the song. If it could be smoother I would like to hear that version. Make music with passion !!

Hehe I already now this one because I follow you. But nice use of the loop. Really dig the subtle background noises. Just the whole creating a vibe is done really well. Keep up the excellent work

You can definetely tell the joji vibes. It's a great start i would mind the volume of the tom as it sounds pretty sharp and the vinyl effect is also a bit loud. I can't to hear the full track though. Keep them coming

Very well done. I have no say expect keep up the great work. Also like the interesting trap drum. It's different than most trap drums I heard. I like it.

Me neither :p
But I don't think the loop fits in. Maybe some synth would be better ? Apart from that the song itself is very nice, you own added components do the trick. Focus on those !!

The change in tempo in the begin set me off a bit. But Like how you really experimented with the loop and made it you own !!

J O H N D O N' T M A K E F I R E

The tempo change surely works but maybe fill up your song a bit ? Change it up throw in new element to keep it interesting to listen to !

I used the built-in Grand piano on Ableton live. Turned down the 'bright' option till zero though

Same thing as with @n3ka
I used the built-in Grand piano on Ableton live. Turned down the 'bright' option till zero though

Well your song fits perfectly with the loop and I like the voice at the beginning. Together with the sudden switch with the drum incoming makes it great. I feel though as if the song is too long. After a while nothing news gets added and that may be boring to some.
Keep up the great work

The song is nice to listen but i feel like the bass doesn't exactly fits with the chords of the piano. The drum is a great addition though. Keep going