MrShores

Description : Ok guys, I need help. Aside from the obviously poor mixing job, I need feedback on this as I approach the ending stages of producing the track. If you hear something off, please tell me (and how to fix it please). I do know that I need to clean up my chords, but other than that, PLEASE. I have inadequate playback equipment.

Description : S/O to 40a. I noticed I had a few of his loops so I used a couple of them. This sounds fine with lyrics, but I still feel like this is missing something, so please comment. I need help.

Description : This is a beat I made, and then I added an acapella I found here on looperman.

Description : Hmu if you REALLY want to use this. Otherwise it's available elsewhere. It's been a while so I thought I'd upload something. This is a track based off of JainamYRAL's loop ( https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/71301 ). I was just trying to be a little creative. It can be downloaded here http://mrshores.bandcamp.com/releases

Description : I make weird music, so brace yourself. This is a somewhat emotional beat; RnB/hip hop type song. This is my first attempt at making a rap instrumental. I know the bass is kinda like in your face, but other than that all criticisms are WELCOMED. I made this a while back, so cut me some slack, I've made progress. Regardless, please give me as much advice as you see fit.

Also, feel free to rap or sing to this or whatever you do.I'd love to hear what people do with it. Just put a link in a comment. And thanks to Chefboydee for the drums.

Description : UPDATE: I fixed my panning issue and the strings

Alright, after some helpful advice from my fellow loopermen(and women) I have attempted to fix the mixing issue I was having. As before, this was supposed to be like dreaming on a rainy day; one of those dreams that makes you reflect on life. PLEASE feel free to add vocals,they can make this track even better.
As usual, please give any criticisms you see fit. You won't hurt my feelings. Please comment a link if you wind up making something with this. I'd love to hear it.
TIP: The hook/chorus is the best part (and the part I fixed)

Description : I'm baaack! It's been a while, but here's another track in my usual, emotional, style. I was thinking more of a "I made a mistake, and now I have to live with the consequences" type vibe during production. Reminds me of a car accident, hence the name. Oh, and thanks to Joefunktastic. I sampled a little bit of his I need it girl piano loop. (https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/59798)

As usual, please leave any criticisms. They're welcomed.

GOOD GOD my mix is terrible. Gotta adjust my levels and panning. But other than that, please.
HMU IF YOU WANT TO USE THIS