You're out there 4 sure...Word, those toms L-R are just a touch too big, they
are not distorting but that dynamic range is cluttered, with them that loud
as opposed to a clean big sound...If you get my drift...
They will still be big but they won't be, like a wrecking ball disturbing and
unbalancing the harmony they could provide...To enhance the track not to
be the track....
Track has potential toms just a bit overdone...
I like your chopping process with this one, nicely done....
Well I love all the sounds 1st of all super clean sounds all arounds...
But I do find that the Acoustic and the keys, at the top of the song
when the play the same phrase, in the turnaround chord of that phrase
they seem out of tune, with one another
Sounds as if the guitar is playing a minor and the keys are playing a diminished or a major 9th...
Believe me it just a little thing that tweaked my ear, I may be wrong in
saying so, but you asked for truth...
I love the work you've put into this, it shows you're talented....
oh good catch, you got some nicely calibrated ears it seems. will check that out, thanks.
please feel free to point out any errors like that whenever you hear them, i'd appreciate that a lot.
thanks a lot for your kind and useful comment!
Interesting track....
A little outside the box, where creativity presides and only those that know
of oneself can enter...You have a key to the door....
vortex is probably best way to describe the inner most of me and timing ....please pardon the century long reply yet the very light of your kindness still illuminates the joy in me, though you have most likely packed a mental bag and moved on ...lol.. many thanx for your amazing review and time of listen taken to my works..may much peace be upon you and yours ... chill!!!!
Reading your description:
So it's a holiday there all year long I guess....
All the people and places they've blown all year long, they must
celebrate independence every day....lol
I like the simplicity of it all, nice colours...
Great mix and arrangement, all works on many levels
in a top shelf manner...
Get the floor bouncing with this one 4 sure....
Thanks. I generally prefer more rhytmical stuff as opposed to great melodies. It's what gets me going on the dancefloor so i just try to recreate the vibe of stuff i like.
I'm glad you could stop by and check it out.
FR
I really like this, has a solid melody that could be broken down and built
into a real nice song, for someone with skills vocally...
It sounds real... Not forced into place by a program, your talent is top shelf...
Cool track not so old that a little something new could change...
All the dynamics are right, flavour is still sold adding the right
thing, will be most important...
Nice track solid bounce, improve huuuum not much needed here...
Well maybe a well placed guitar, down on the bottom dancing along
with the Bass or keys at times...
Be fun to try something, just a complimenting syncopation...
Thanks TG for your comment and please accept my apologies for not replying earlier.
Thanks for the tip on the guitar. I had actually thought of the same while producing the track. The issue is that I was not able to find one that perfectly fitted (to my taste that is). Actually, don't know if you play the guitar, but you would be most welcome to try something. Let me know if you're interested in doing so.
This would be a dangerous track if the sub didn't distort, not knowing if it was your intent to do that...I would say retouch the bass and this could really
be something cool...
Other than that a top shelf track...
Strong lyrics, Maaaassive feel and tonal control, nailed this Sugar...
You have simplicity out front, vocal and bells only stands to reason
that you have simplicity in the back, nothing that will take away from
that fabulous Voice....
It all sounds Harmonically Correct, Voice and Bells so you're in the
ballpark for sure...In a very solid way....
You Crazy Man..... :-)
Almost lost me in the time change, Wooooo this is way outside the Box
that's what it is right there....
It's all in the pocket, Tire spin really took me somewhere else hahaha...
Simple but to the point, very real.....Nice work..Lock this bad boy up until
you find something else worthy to drop on this...
Sweet....Don't have to do much, to make the 1st Lady of soul on this site
sound good....What a Voice...One of Gods Angels...You don't get a voice
like that for nothing...Only the Chosen Few...Now she is in training here
on earth but when it is her turn, she will sing for all of Heaven with
those that have gone before her....
Man...I can hear the love that went into making this as good as it is...
Real good Job...Honourable and Flavourful...
on Word Is Bond by benjizo
are not distorting but that dynamic range is cluttered, with them that loud
as opposed to a clean big sound...If you get my drift...
They will still be big but they won't be, like a wrecking ball disturbing and
unbalancing the harmony they could provide...To enhance the track not to
be the track....
Track has potential toms just a bit overdone...
I like your chopping process with this one, nicely done....
Peace...TG.
on while not asleep increment sheep by doudei
But I do find that the Acoustic and the keys, at the top of the song
when the play the same phrase, in the turnaround chord of that phrase
they seem out of tune, with one another
Sounds as if the guitar is playing a minor and the keys are playing a diminished or a major 9th...
Believe me it just a little thing that tweaked my ear, I may be wrong in
saying so, but you asked for truth...
I love the work you've put into this, it shows you're talented....
Peace...TG.
please feel free to point out any errors like that whenever you hear them, i'd appreciate that a lot.
thanks a lot for your kind and useful comment!
on SOUL WRITHE WITHIN ART OF EYE ghost by FACELESSIWONDER
A little outside the box, where creativity presides and only those that know
of oneself can enter...You have a key to the door....
Well done...
Peace...TG.
on Dont Look For Me ft Kamoflage and Joanna Perricone by doudei
Would love to, I'll be getting back to you...4 sure...
Peace...TG.
on Progetto Y by ScottFranco
Moves real nice, a highway tune for sure....
A few old school hits, that fit perfectly, nice mix as well...
Solid piece of work....
Peace....TG.
Ciao,
Franco & Scott
on TheRiot504 - Shoot for the Sky -Land on the Moon- by TheRiot504
So it's a holiday there all year long I guess....
All the people and places they've blown all year long, they must
celebrate independence every day....lol
Good work...
on Mo Deep House by FreeRadical
This has a real cool bounce to it...
I like the simplicity of it all, nice colours...
Great mix and arrangement, all works on many levels
in a top shelf manner...
Get the floor bouncing with this one 4 sure....
Peace....TG.
I'm glad you could stop by and check it out.
FR
on I Just Wanted You To Love Me by jerrywaitsjr
Well done...
Peace...TG.
on i accidentally a piano by doudei
into a real nice song, for someone with skills vocally...
It sounds real... Not forced into place by a program, your talent is top shelf...
Peace...TG.
if you are interested, here is a more complete track based on this: http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/153886
also, if you would like to do something with it be my guest! i am by far not a skilled enough singer to add any meaningful vocals to that.
cheers!
on ETM - The Beginning by StylesBM
All the dynamics are right, flavour is still sold adding the right
thing, will be most important...
Keep it simple...
Peace...TG.
Styles
on Afterglow by DrvanLansberg
Well maybe a well placed guitar, down on the bottom dancing along
with the Bass or keys at times...
Be fun to try something, just a complimenting syncopation...
All in all top shelf track...
Peace...TG.
Thanks for the tip on the guitar. I had actually thought of the same while producing the track. The issue is that I was not able to find one that perfectly fitted (to my taste that is). Actually, don't know if you play the guitar, but you would be most welcome to try something. Let me know if you're interested in doing so.
Anyway, thanks for your great compliment!
Doc
on Runners High by CastleBuyer
Yep....Peace....TG.
on Thirsty by RiceChrisB
on Lighters by FreeCrack
be something cool...
Other than that a top shelf track...
Well done....Peace...TG.
on The Other Side Of Nowhere by locatednowhere
Peace...TG
on Power Trip by topvega
Keep working it...
Peace...TG.
tv
on Going Home by Cestevens1783
You have simplicity out front, vocal and bells only stands to reason
that you have simplicity in the back, nothing that will take away from
that fabulous Voice....
It all sounds Harmonically Correct, Voice and Bells so you're in the
ballpark for sure...In a very solid way....
Well Done...Peace...TG.
-Charlene
on Doing the best I can by benjizo
Almost lost me in the time change, Wooooo this is way outside the Box
that's what it is right there....
It's all in the pocket, Tire spin really took me somewhere else hahaha...
Simple but to the point, very real.....Nice work..Lock this bad boy up until
you find something else worthy to drop on this...
Peace...TG.
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
sound good....What a Voice...One of Gods Angels...You don't get a voice
like that for nothing...Only the Chosen Few...Now she is in training here
on earth but when it is her turn, she will sing for all of Heaven with
those that have gone before her....
Man...I can hear the love that went into making this as good as it is...
Real good Job...Honourable and Flavourful...
Peace...TG.
Peter
on Right Move Radio Illuminati remix by radioilluminati
Other then that top shelf stuff...
Peace....TG.
Interesting idea. WIll think about it.
on Ill Do Anything muzic by Baggadub by FullCapicityMuzic
1st Lady of Soul on this Site, always sounds good don't have to do much to her..
You've painted an outstanding picture, Musically with her voice...
Peace....TG.
on Bonnie Rabson I want to Soap rock edit by Soap
Top shelf production nasty guitar lines, is that you playing.???
Some tough stuff here, outstanding work....
Peace...TG.
Glad you liked it.
Peace.
on Welcome To The New Age by SeriouslyJoking
but some music...So it's all good...
Real nice touch....Peace...TG.
=D
Thanks for listening.
/SJ =)
on Aerosol by Spivkurl
Got to stop smelling that stuff...
Peace...TG.
on AWAKENING by dansjoy4
Peace....TG.