I can hear what you are trying to do with this one.. i like it. This is a nice RnB type beat at the beginning and then when the keys kick in the whole tune changes man.. I feel that heavenly aura on this track.
I love the keys.. just absolutely fantastic man. Great track.
The only thing i would do is make a new mix to accomodate for vocals. Or just leave it like this as an instrumental.. but you never know what a singer or rapper can do with this, you can go many ways with this.
I love the guitar sound and the drum kit you used. They go hand in hand but the melody only has 1 key signature. You need at least 2 and add chords and harmonies to the melody. Make different drum Patterns as well.. make like 5 different drum patterns.
I would work on this and .ake it a hit. Good job though!!
haha, thanks man, I have this track re-recorded on my list, personally I think its a little better, but most of this is old music and Ideas.. just wait a little bit, Im throwing some new stuff together, ya know a new kinda freshness, and I am fairly certain Im sounding much better these days. granted I wont say I am 'blessed' or the 'best' but better than I was yesterday. thank you for the great comment fam!
..i wanna listen to this again when i'm on MDMA lol, no but seriously.. great work.. this takes me somewhere else auditively! I can picture landscapes and planets when i close my eyes..
Thanks, Gixxie, I appreciate your comments and fav. I love the change. I had fun creating all of the changes. Sometimes my changes are too much but I love how this one flows. Thanks again!
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I love the keys.. just absolutely fantastic man. Great track.
The only thing i would do is make a new mix to accomodate for vocals. Or just leave it like this as an instrumental.. but you never know what a singer or rapper can do with this, you can go many ways with this.
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But for your first edit.. this is a good job! Welcome to the club :)
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I would work on this and .ake it a hit. Good job though!!
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Good work!!
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Also you almost never mute out some clips. I don't hear any transitions between your hook and verses.
This track could be a great pop/dance/trance song, you can go so many ways with this. Well done!
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I like the smooth romantic vibe you got going on. Some LL Cool J level type of stuff right here!
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'Tbe' is 'the'
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This is a hit bro, you almost got it right tbis sketchjust needs some more polishing.
Also maybe put some modern drum patterns under it.. play with different genre soundkits.
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This is what i call "old soul music"..
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Best wishes
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Ronabo
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I didn't know what to expect when i clicked on this track.. but wow.. what a surpriiise!! :D
Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks.
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Work some more on your compositions and mixing and try to divide the track into sections.. like chorus, verse etc..
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Ronabo
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I like the message and wisdom you are sharing with others through your track, well done and keep em coming i'll be watching you..
Peace
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