Yeah - it is a bit heavenly. I go there from time to time and these were the kind of sounds I heard so I sampled them with a small dictaphone and incorporated them into this track.
Don't know if copyright laws apply to material from up above. But if I've sinned, may God strike me down and take back his samples...
hmmm.. i can vibe to this!! i like it man, nice arranging and mixing the clips. I haven't heard the original so i can't really compare the two.. but the way you remixed it, it sounds radio ready.
Just a couple of minor things wrong with this track.. but i don't feel like talking this track down. Thanks for sharing this homie.. and get at me if you got something interesting you wanna work on..
hhaha on mushrooms 0_o?! wow.. i can't function normally when i'm on mushrooms!! This is a nice track though, nothing wrong with this.. But if you want to drop this commercially, it will need some more work! i think you just recorded and made this to express yourself when you were doing mushrooms.. i wonder if you can do the same but sober? otherwise you need to get yourself a new batch of mushrooms and work on this some more XD..
I like this one!! ^^, You are talented man, the way you start the verse is tight, your flow is on point. I like the way the sample and the drums and synth were synched.. and your vocals is crispy clean, your voice adds more to this beat overall.
Would do good on a mixtape oe even an album, but i think you need to work on the chorus some more, and re-compose some parts with piano keys or a violin.. but this track has potential.. i feel your positive energy and motivation all throughout the track.
This one has a lot of potential man.. Needs a female singer, slow rock type.. you can fuse this with RnB maybe slome rockish guitar strings in it.. just throwing out ideas.. Good work.. great inspiration!!
It sounds real smooth.. nice effects on the vocals too, i think it's too slow tho the overall track.. some parts blend together nicely, and other parts is just a lil disconnected.
But it's a nice base, for building up a better track! If i was you.. i would up the tempo a bit.. ^^
I Like it man... aint nothing wrong with this.. maybe the mixing / arrangement. i would create some more drum patterns, maybe change the drumkit.. you know, try to do something different on each verse with the drums.. even if it's just for 1 bar..
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Work some more on your compositions and mixing and try to divide the track into sections.. like chorus, verse etc..
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I like the message and wisdom you are sharing with others through your track, well done and keep em coming i'll be watching you..
Peace
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That's an order.
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You take me back to those good days!! ^^ thanks for sharing. 1
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Don't know if copyright laws apply to material from up above. But if I've sinned, may God strike me down and take back his samples...
Lots of love and joy in this - I agree.
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Just a couple of minor things wrong with this track.. but i don't feel like talking this track down. Thanks for sharing this homie.. and get at me if you got something interesting you wanna work on..
Holla at me! i'm keeping my eye on you :)
This song came from a really deep part of myself,
so i really appreciate your comment.
I will be in touch when i am ready
collaborate we will, for sure.
word up
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Would do good on a mixtape oe even an album, but i think you need to work on the chorus some more, and re-compose some parts with piano keys or a violin.. but this track has potential.. i feel your positive energy and motivation all throughout the track.
Great job bro..
I will work on adding to the chorus.
Respect
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But it's a nice base, for building up a better track! If i was you.. i would up the tempo a bit.. ^^
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I like the sounds you use. And nice finish. ^^
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