Pwnone

fresh, im loving it.
your right bout the verse goin with the beat.
perfect.
the bet is krazy.
keep em koming

yyooo, i got someting for this.
it is officially now a Kollaboration! lmao
let me rock it. YOU HAVE TO!!!

get at me quick!! hurry up!!
before i forget the whole flow..

yo, this is hot. i like it.
the beat is crazy, ya sounded like Beastie Boys.
lmfao
keep it up. peace

this is maad ill.
no drums and shit, lovely.
i havent really heard a lot of songs that could pull off the whole no drums biz.
you did it kid!
good ol smoothies.
big ups

it's ill. good work. i think the vocals were kinda smudged.
i really kouldn't hear it that good.
but it kinda adds to the whole concept.
its fresh, keep it up.

fresh, i like it. reminds me of ludacris. lmfao
the chorus went good with the beat,
the flow was on point.
big ups

yyooo, you really caught that old school in this one.
i wana tear this one up!.
keep em koming. i love this one.

MASTERPIECE!
yo, your shits hot dog.
if you still wana kollab, im def down.
ive been kollabin with a lot of artist on looperman lately.
bouta do a looperman mixtape. lmfao..na.
but yea, just set it off. throw me a beat and i'll rip it.
if you can, i wana get on this beat too, i got something swell for this.

but yeah, this whole track was killa.
i loved how the drums kame in, maad smooth.
aahh fucking beautiful!
keep it up

there is really nothing else i kan say that hasnt already been said.
i dont know if its your mic, but that little hiss is kinda annoying after a while, but yo the sekond i played it no more than 30 sekonds later i hit reveiw.

i love this one. its ill. can i do a track with you?
can i? can i? can i please? lmao let me know. get at me with a pm

word up kid. i hope its all good.
this track hit me hard tho. i felt it.
you did a gorgeous job, lol.

thats a ill melody.
nice work dog, keep it up

this is hot dog. i like the way you put everything together.
drop that 4 bottles too. lol

beautiful.
keep this coming.
lol, the beat goes fresh with the vocals.

this is dope.
the beat goes perfect with the vocals. lol i love it.
keep this coming.
ur nasty with it.

uuuuuwwwwwwweeeeeee!!!
im lovin it kid..
aahh, i havent heard shit like this in so long.
if you dont mind, i think i wana turn this to a song with some girl singing that first line you had.

under a tree, i dreamed a dreamers dream.
wooh!

i also love the way you ended the vocals. lovely!

i know its true too!!
this shit is rocking. got that feel for a ill rhyme.
run it!
keep it up. ima be looking for the news

yea boy. this is what im talkin about.
NabGee bitches!
lol taking off with this one.
keep this shit coming!!!

na, i aint feeling this one.
i think it was just bad harmony. nothing really went together.
all the sounds were fighting each other,
they should be smoking a L in the back room with red lights and nude honey's. lol

damn, i was expecting some flow on this. what happened with the raps son?
its tight tho. secret murder, shit i never heard of, lol

this ones tight.
shake ass to this, and jump up and down.
lol, yeah. keep it up.

lmao, all i can do is laugh dog. nothing bad tho.
im laughing because its fucking unique in a wierd way.
im loving it tho. would probably like it more if i knew what homeboy was spitting. lol
the beat is nice tho. keep at it.

aaahhh shit. i would get somebody to sing on this.
a girl. that shit would be legit!
its very very wierd. but in a cool way. like RZA. lol

lovin it. i started busting rhymes automatically man.
sounds like something from a fast and the furious scene or something. lol
keep this up. YOU BETTER!! lol

its hot man. the mastering was kinda etchy.
kinda got that rugged broke band sound. but then again it goes with it. lol
i like the song in general tho. keep it up.
loving the breaks, lol. wooooH!!

yo, this is tight.
it would've sounded a whole lot better with acoustics.
aahh that keyboard is wrecking the sounds.
i'd still jump on this tho. lol. fresh, keep em coming.