The song is very, very good. A good producer could prob make a hit of this. Some of the instrumentation is a bit too behaind your vocals. Not a surprise, your band wants to emphasize your vocals.
This is a sweet changeup from the other two tracks. I loved the other two and I love this one. You have a great voice, it has an unique quality that I find very pleasing.
I love the sound on your tracks. This piece is yet another gem of the four or five I've listened to today. Consistent great work with an a unique sound. You (you guys) appear to be on to something.
thanx a lot for all the listens, wow, I havnt been on here for nearley a year, we have got tons of new stuff, better produced with better skillz and eqipment, I cant wait to share here, ill start posting when I get a minute or 20 spare ;)
Beautiful tribute to your friend. I'm sorry for your loss. I lost my youngest brother only months ago, before that two uncles, an aunt and a cousin who used to be my best friend. I know your pain.
haha nice one bro!!!! , thats wot I thought about this track, ive grown to absoluteley love it, and thats saying a lot seeing as I mustve heard segments from the track over a billion zillion times lol....yeah its a classic in my track library!....thanks again dude, I swear ill finf the time to have a listen to ur tracks soon mate ;)
This piece is about transformation, from my perspective. Truth is, it brings to mind images of the woman I loved and was married to for many years, becoming an evil entity I did not even recognize as being the same person when we were going through our divorce. The screaming would be me wanting to know what the f--k was going on. Some vocals, not singing, but speech expressing such a transition, or some other such transition, might be very effective.
Really excellent reply. I was hoping someone would go into that type of depth about what they felt. I agree, that the piece is very much about transformation, and over-coming the odds, that may seem impossible, in front you.
I could have listened to an extended version of this quite easily, it's a very pretty piece of music. An option you might want to explore is to have this be the intro to something related, but more grandiose.
Very sweet, very powerful, I love it. If you have the time, check out my More Time part 1 and part 2. It's very much the same idea. Hell the three pieces could be on the same soundtrack.
I like this track very much, especially when the guitar slams in providing emphasis and focus.
Three times I've listened to your tracks and three times I've enjoyed the experience. You have a good ear, trust it. If it sounds good to you, it probably is.
You have another very pretty piece here. Vocals would definitely add something, especially for those who cringe at instrumentals, but the truth is that piece stands alone very well as it is.
on KRillateen by sumerlin
Nice job
John
on Curse Words by aliyarose
I'm looking forward to your cd.
John
on Well I Tried Too by aliyarose
This is the second song of yours I've faved.
Great work
John
on Don't Forget Your Face by aliyarose
You've got talent, my dear,
Great talent
John
on I Got Myself A Bad Boy by aliyarose
I have to hear more
John
on This Is I Want You by aliyarose
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on Salvation by DJMiasmic
If you have the chance, let me know what you think of some of my tracks like Scrap Metal and Metal Frame. You might even like Insolent Ungodliness,
I gotta see what else you have
John
on ice by TrakMonkProductions
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on late night jazz by TrakMonkProductions
I gotta see what else you have
John
on handz up by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
Nice job
John
on Broken Piano by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
This is a very good track, very good. Shows you have a broad range of talent.
Cheers
John
on Thats What She Said by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
tell the guys they rock
John
on 'No Regrets' by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
Stay true to the dream
John
on Gigzy by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
Take care brother, beautiful piece
John
on old before ur time by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
Bloody awesome ;-)
John
on walkin the streets by DuBzReCoRdInGsTuDiO
Great job
John
on I Ran Through the Ocean of Fire by Willbraham
As it stands this is a great piece
John
I very greatly appreciate the response.
~willbraham
on Opening 2 by ShadowArts
As is, I love it (just want more :-))
John
on Turn Up The Volume by RyckStylz
John
on Comere by oasisduke
Another sweet track. Like I said before, you have the ear. You have talent. All works are works in progress for a true artist.
Well done
John
on The Day. by Mechanic
Keep up the good work
John
on New Saloon 32 by oasisduke
Three times I've listened to your tracks and three times I've enjoyed the experience. You have a good ear, trust it. If it sounds good to you, it probably is.
Appreciate your talent
John
on poison by oasisduke
Nice work, again
John
on Heart by oasisduke
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on Acoustic Guitar x 2 with "talking" african drum by DanielGtrman
John