Cool man love piano sounds. This is what i make when i try create something at 3am haha. Like it a lot. Just needs some chord progression thrown in there somewhere man and you have a great song!
Hey man nice track. Lots of good elements. The kick clips a little bit so try and find some dynamic range there, but even I struggle to find that at times too. Try mixing at low volumes to get a clear mix then crank it up when you want to hear the full effect! Otherwise your song progresses nicely. Good sense of song structure. You look so young in your photo. If this is what you make at a young age man keep it up! You can only get better
Hey bud, awesome sounds here. Clean mix too. Nice use of some of my favourite elements: synths and atmospheric sounds paired nicely with simple hip hop drums =). And you made this in a day!? I'm impressed
"synths and atmospheric sounds paired nicely with simple hip hop drums"
yeah ive only recently started using hip hop drums in songs like this. It was only after listening to alot of a producer 'Robot Orchestra' that i decided to try it.
so if you like that kind of sound i suggest you go listen to him :)
"you made this in a day!? I'm impressed"
yeah a straight 7hour session from 1pm to 8pm didnt really move just made this haha
Overall nice track man! One thing to consider when mixing is 'dynamics' my friend. I can't fully appreciate the content of your song or lyrics because everything is so loud, it's distorting. A good indication that some thing(s) is/are too loud in your mix is the shape of the waveform in the player above. If it mostly just looks like a block with hard, straight edges then you know its too loud. The waveform should have a nice shape to it. Turn things down. You might be surprised with the clarity of everything after that. Peace.
Thank you for your tips. I appreciate all forms of feedback My recording is my biggest hurdle. Just do not have the right equipment. I will try to implement your suggestion however. Thank you!
Sweet sweet bass line. Interesting pitch bends/glides. REALLY like the sound and groove of the drums. Real jazzy. Synth sound and melody is dope when it comes in. Overall amazing track. Like nothing i heard before really. Fusion for sure. Awesome stuff. You guys should collaborate more if this is the result =]
Thanks Rampa! Rozen and I made this interesting track, unintentionally at first, actually. His styles are beyond unique, which I absolutely love. Hopefully in the near future, he and I can do more tracks together.
This is nice man =] has a cool groove to it. Especially when the bass comes in. Interesting sample too. Not what i pictured from reading the title, but pleasantly surprised. Short and sweet but i could listen to it on repeat!
Cool track. This is well set up for some vocals. Would love to hear what someone could do with. Good structure. Everything is clear in the mix. Good work!
Some really cool synth sounds and rhythms here. Nice work! From listening a couple times over I'd dip the bass EQ in the frequencies that your lead/synth instruments are producing and vice-versa. Basically, this allows a space in the frequency spectrum for each sound you to be heard.. I think that'll give some more clarity in the low-end of the mix. Cool track dude.
Hey man sorry for the late response. I only get a once a week visit online. Thanks for the tip and will definitely try that. I really appreciate and input on any of my stuff. Thanks again for taking the time.
I can feel the emotion in the awesome vocal sample and the beat tells me you're certainly not happy about it. Life's a b**ch brother and sometimes you get handed lemons. Best thing you can do is make lemonade from them. Sweet Hip Hop lemonade haha.
That sounds good to me, id love to do some more work on this track. im glad you liked what you heard, it was fun putting it together. just email me and we can go from there. larry
You both complement each other in this one. It's really something quite beautiful. And i don't have to understand what's being said to understand the emotion. Excellent collaboration. And in one take too! Thoroughly impressed Behnam.
Paora :) ...nice to have U & your feedback here..hope all is well beyond that monitor ..
please excuse me for a bit latency in reply ..I've been far from internet for awhile ...
Paora , many many thnx for your attention & kind words..I should confess Corina did a wonderfull thing with this old recital guitar of mine ...she was smart enough to can find a vocal melody & lyrix to accompaniment my guitar..& she sang it by her heart & these facts changed this dead recital of mine to an alive tune ...
my friend ,me & Corina(both) are gratefull of U,your time & attention ...
take care .
__B
all i can say is wow...... all the detail... so clear... amazing! you are very talented Mr. Scott. I hope to reach this level of mixing/mastering some day.
Hey man cool track. Love the luscious guitar sounds you've made and some cool synth melodies in this one. I'm uploading a loop song i made today. Check it out if you have a chance. Good work!
Thank you! This one is really a very special track to me, my "all time favorite". But, i did not made any loops or, simply used them from various sites (mostly Looperman, ofcourse).
I will check it if i have a breath.
Regards, traz
intro is very ambiguous as to where the music is going to take you. which is cool, keeps you on your toes. woah. super massive beat. lovin it. that tremolo synth? makes me feel like i'm driving along a coast line, top down, red and orange sunset glistening over the ocean. coool. super cool bass too. nice track!
Thank you so much for your kind words and your descriptive polite comments. These are the kind, I love to read. Please stay tuned and take care!!! - EazyBeatz :)
nice track bro. heaps of interesting elements and melodies in there! i like that you change up the drums a lot keeps the listener (me) excited to hear what's coming next. is that cello i'm hearing at first? it's awesome! though i think its a little loud overshadowing your cool beat. Hip hop is all about the beat.
Give your song a name! I always struggle to find song names but, I personally think people will respect you/your track more if you name your work. keen to hear more man.
crisp, hard hitting mix man. just goes to show that you don't need expensive plugins and hardware to create an awesome track! a little bit of knowledge and practice gets you a long way. good work.
dope track man. i like your choice in instruments. sweet melodies too man. my only beef is wit the synth string/horns part? it sounds midi. maybe try mess around with attack times to get a more natural sound with it. maybe even try playing in your melodies with a keyboard or controller and not put every note perfectly the beat, that'll give it some real nice human characteristics (even if it is midi). vary velocities too. enough of my 2 cents. Peace
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yeah ive only recently started using hip hop drums in songs like this. It was only after listening to alot of a producer 'Robot Orchestra' that i decided to try it.
so if you like that kind of sound i suggest you go listen to him :)
"you made this in a day!? I'm impressed"
yeah a straight 7hour session from 1pm to 8pm didnt really move just made this haha
thanks for the comment and listen :)
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If you would, i would be more than happy to arrange the song around your verses/choruses to suit. Your harmonies are top notch! What do you say?
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Paora , many many thnx for your attention & kind words..I should confess Corina did a wonderfull thing with this old recital guitar of mine ...she was smart enough to can find a vocal melody & lyrix to accompaniment my guitar..& she sang it by her heart & these facts changed this dead recital of mine to an alive tune ...
my friend ,me & Corina(both) are gratefull of U,your time & attention ...
take care .
__B
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I will check it if i have a breath.
Regards, traz
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