In some parts, this one sounds a bit offtune vocally Kriebel17- but I like the emotion you put into your voice in the chorus and the quiet calm verses at the beginning are nice too! I vote for a second take on this song, because I think you can get more on tune if you rehearsed. NIcely done, however! You wrote and arranged the lyrics/vocals?
The musicians did an excellent job, do they have a page we can comment on as well?
Thank you. Not to disappoint you, but the voice is not mine...it's an old loop from Magix Music Maker. But thank you for listening and for your comments as well.
Beautiful music, not a fan of the lowered pitch on my vocals but I don't think anyone really is crazy about pitch changes when it's their own voice! Great job!
TimPhil, I love the concepts you integrate into your music, and it definitely is conveyed here- very beautiful (other than the voice). This isn't one of my favorite acapellas that I've done, and you made into something I like!!! Very good job!!! The music is as BrillBilly said angelic and builds up nicely!
I have only just picked up your comment as I have been away for the last 3 and a half weeks on a bit of a travelling tour with my wife without internet access. Had a fantastic time but now back in the real world. (Actually I think I've just come back from the real world and am now back in the mad world, but hey.}
I appreciate greatly your comments and don't put your voice down. Your voice and lyrics in all your acapellas have a beautifully huge emotive force to them and I always try and convey that with the music I put around them.
I am a learning musician with a heap of musical ideas in my head that your vocals actually help me make a reality, and I'm loving every minute of it.
Tnx for the nice comment.. Im still working on your voice with that othe piece tho, and hopefully ill have it ready for you by the next month or so.. :)
I'm very pleased thank you for all the compliments :)
Since you liked it so you will soon notice that there is a new version of "I Do not Like You" with improved sound and correct some points :)
Here are all my songs for download https://soundcloud.com/dj-ial
P.S. I saw in your profile that you're a singer and you have a beautiful voice ... you should try to release some voice to 128 bmp ....
I'd really like to do a remix with your voice :)
Did you record your vocals while you played or separately?
This song would be even more neat with some harmony layers added to it as well!
There's a lot of emotion in your voice, it's clear, and you poured your heart into this (even if it may be broken?)- but I'm not convinced this is the final product. I encourage you to think of ways to add over it in layers, go deeper in that emotion!!!
the music was someone elses and my vocals were recorded on 3 takes and just kinda meshed together, thank you for your kind words , i vermy much appreciate it.
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The musicians did an excellent job, do they have a page we can comment on as well?
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I have only just picked up your comment as I have been away for the last 3 and a half weeks on a bit of a travelling tour with my wife without internet access. Had a fantastic time but now back in the real world. (Actually I think I've just come back from the real world and am now back in the mad world, but hey.}
I appreciate greatly your comments and don't put your voice down. Your voice and lyrics in all your acapellas have a beautifully huge emotive force to them and I always try and convey that with the music I put around them.
I am a learning musician with a heap of musical ideas in my head that your vocals actually help me make a reality, and I'm loving every minute of it.
Thanks again.
Tim
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Since you liked it so you will soon notice that there is a new version of "I Do not Like You" with improved sound and correct some points :)
Here are all my songs for download
https://soundcloud.com/dj-ial
P.S. I saw in your profile that you're a singer and you have a beautiful voice ... you should try to release some voice to 128 bmp ....
I'd really like to do a remix with your voice :)
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Did you record your vocals while you played or separately?
This song would be even more neat with some harmony layers added to it as well!
There's a lot of emotion in your voice, it's clear, and you poured your heart into this (even if it may be broken?)- but I'm not convinced this is the final product. I encourage you to think of ways to add over it in layers, go deeper in that emotion!!!
Great job, Kriebel17!!
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Glad to hear from again.. check The Bedlam Kids you will like it!
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