This is decent track.The beat is definitely good,i like it,got that emotional feel to it.Your delivery is good too.The mixing on the vocals can be improved though.It will be a good joint once you have a hook on it.Make the hook emotional too.
I think mixing and Mastering is one of the most important element in music making,and one that is mostly overlooked.Its even hard for me to mix and master i must admit.But i gotta say this one was well mixed,there is an element of simplicity to it that make the sound real crispy,Its not overcrowded,everything stands out good.I wouldn't recommend any changes.You did a great job as always.
Thank you much benjizo! It means a lot to me when spoken by a real talent such as yourself! It helps that the composition was nicely and creatively done by ShortBus. I just tried to bring out the best of each stem and help them compliment eachother. The most time was spent on getting the timing right, and I know I could've done a bit more of that, but I think it sounds pretty good this way. Didn't want to ruin what he created. Thanks again for the comment!
So much going on with this composition.It takes you on a mind trip,the electric guitar,the percussion ,and the whole eastern vibe ,makes for a great composition.Its definitely movie music.Thumps up.
hi benjizo. yea - i agree. it could be background for some movie. i'm glad that comes through for you. thanks for the comment very much. very best regards - dan
Thanks man I appreciate that! Your beats got soul to em. I like that 9th wonder/old school kanye vibe you got going. One of these days we should collab.
This is definitely one grimy track.It kinda shocks you the first time you play it,but i guess you weren't thinking pretty when you made it.Shock and All Must have been your focus..I think the track showcases how much talent you got.You one of the few that can easily switch from one genre to the other.Real musician.Good work.
Thanks friend, your comment made me happy! Grimy is definitely how I would describe this one. I kind of meant for the initial shock, and then some more little explosions throughout. I enjoy doing different styles, even though I've been focusing on just a few lately. I really appreciate you listening and taking the time to comment!
This is Great FR.The overall composition of this track is great. Ima try working out to this beat,see if i can do the whole 10 mins.Wish me lucky..:)...great one brah.
I hope your workout went well. I think maybe i should try some of that myself lol.
Anyway, i'm glad you stopped by, lent your ears and commented.
Cheers Benjizo.
FR
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