This is a great great track and insta-favourite. The guitar is played soo nice and the supporting rythm and keyboard fits perfect. Grat collab. You should work together more often if you would ask me.
Melody is pretty nice and the drums sound really well to this track. But the track is way too loud. All sounds are fighting for all frequencies. Try to limit them. And try to variate more. Then it stays interesting...
Love the soft drums in it. Really gives a heartbeat to the song: The synth turning from light to dark is really natural and sounds great. The whole song is one big flow. Well done!
This is the finished version, my friend! This song is just a submission to a unit of work in college, so I doubt i'll ever had more to it, now the unit is over with.
Thanks for the feedback, man.
The song is actually quite pleasant to hear but I would work on the transitions in the track. On 1:44 the synth suddenly disapears. But it is your production so if you like it then it is as it should be.
Really nice job.Piano fits well with the rythm. The synth is a bit trancelike but in combination with the drums it gives a really energetic feel to it.
Well, This is really relaxing and teh synths DO tell a story. They fit well together and I feel already one a caribic island with a coconut filled with a ##### with the wind blowing throw my hair. So there is the story for you :-)
Has a really nice flow in it. Like the vocals very much. Not something I have heard a lot before. The long notes make it very dreamy as Orlando already said.
Very many thanks for stopping by and listening. Glad you enjoyed the track and your comments on the vocals will be passed on to Lisa (what a voice eh?). Nice to know it makes your favourite list.
The vocals are nice but the music is screaming way too much. The bass is really off. Change that and the drum gets more space. It has potential but I would completely rework the drum/bass.
Really love the song. Great rapping in my opinion and inspiring lyrics. Maybe the lyrics for the vocals could be more than 1 sentence.maybe repeat it 3,4 times and then use a phrase like: fighting for survival (or something) I think it would make it more interesting.
RnB at its best. Much better than the genre nowadays. Only the vocals should be mixed more natural cause your voice doesnt need it. If i am not mistaken you used reverb on it. Maybe it is my kind of taste but reverb on a voice is not my kind of thing. Would love to hear the final version. Thanks for posting it!
Hello Mudhoen, and apologies for the delay. It appears I have missed a boatload of comments, though I am not sure how. Thanks for your critique and suggestions.
Hab ja noch nie was von denen gehört aber das Video/Lied ist wirklich lustig und gefällt mir. Kann dir aber auch nicht sagen wieso mein kleines Liedchen dich daran erinnert :)
Sobald ich weiter gekommen bin mit dem Song, werde ich ihn natürlich hier posten. Und was das dunkele angeht, das liegt mir wohl irgendwie im Blut. Alles klingt etwas dunkel wenn ich damit fertig bin.
Very cinematic and dramatic sound. Love the violin part in it. When reading the story behind this song I would say you captured the fear and hope very well.
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Really like how you made it sound so spacey. Nice short synths really nake vivid. The supporting pad is nice aswell!
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Sehr schön gemacht und möchte es hören wenn es ganz fertig ist!
Hab ja noch nie was von denen gehört aber das Video/Lied ist wirklich lustig und gefällt mir. Kann dir aber auch nicht sagen wieso mein kleines Liedchen dich daran erinnert :)
Sobald ich weiter gekommen bin mit dem Song, werde ich ihn natürlich hier posten. Und was das dunkele angeht, das liegt mir wohl irgendwie im Blut. Alles klingt etwas dunkel wenn ich damit fertig bin.
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