The vocals are nice but the music is screaming way too much. The bass is really off. Change that and the drum gets more space. It has potential but I would completely rework the drum/bass.
Really love the song. Great rapping in my opinion and inspiring lyrics. Maybe the lyrics for the vocals could be more than 1 sentence.maybe repeat it 3,4 times and then use a phrase like: fighting for survival (or something) I think it would make it more interesting.
RnB at its best. Much better than the genre nowadays. Only the vocals should be mixed more natural cause your voice doesnt need it. If i am not mistaken you used reverb on it. Maybe it is my kind of taste but reverb on a voice is not my kind of thing. Would love to hear the final version. Thanks for posting it!
Hello Mudhoen, and apologies for the delay. It appears I have missed a boatload of comments, though I am not sure how. Thanks for your critique and suggestions.
Hab ja noch nie was von denen gehört aber das Video/Lied ist wirklich lustig und gefällt mir. Kann dir aber auch nicht sagen wieso mein kleines Liedchen dich daran erinnert :)
Sobald ich weiter gekommen bin mit dem Song, werde ich ihn natürlich hier posten. Und was das dunkele angeht, das liegt mir wohl irgendwie im Blut. Alles klingt etwas dunkel wenn ich damit fertig bin.
Very cinematic and dramatic sound. Love the violin part in it. When reading the story behind this song I would say you captured the fear and hope very well.
Love the piano in it. Could use a nice hook in the middle. Really would like to hear it with male vocals. Think it would fit like a glove on a cold winter day!
Stunning piece of art. Really feel the summer nights vibe. Some nice cocktail on a warm summer evening with moonlight sinking in the water and this music on would make a night to remember. Thank you for sharing!
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Hab ja noch nie was von denen gehört aber das Video/Lied ist wirklich lustig und gefällt mir. Kann dir aber auch nicht sagen wieso mein kleines Liedchen dich daran erinnert :)
Sobald ich weiter gekommen bin mit dem Song, werde ich ihn natürlich hier posten. Und was das dunkele angeht, das liegt mir wohl irgendwie im Blut. Alles klingt etwas dunkel wenn ich damit fertig bin.
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This is great...I mean that you think that...There are tons of talented and technically better folks right here so it's a big honour...
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