I really enjoyed this. The beat is great and I like the vocals too, even though can't understand them lol. I do have one suggestion though. I think you should turn the vocals up just a bit as it is kind of low. Other than that everything is pretty much perf. Good stuff man!
Nice to hear that you enjoyed listening. Its always the same with the vocals :) if you sing them you know the words and then you believe that all is good. thanks for the info about the voice level.
Nice work here! The beat has got the whole mainstream thing going on and love those plucks you used! I think you did a great job and think everything fits well. I was hoping for the beat to get bigger but i like how you did it. Good job!
This is a very nice track. Actually reminds me of breakbeat or dark drum n bass. Really liked the percussion you used and loved the dark scary feel you was going for. Overall great work!
This is a very good song! Sound like its a classic from back in the 80's like others already stated. You guys did an amazing job and wish I could hear more songs like this on the loop. Thanks for sharing this, take care!
I really love this tune. I honestly think the instrumental would be way better without the vocals. The beat you've managed to create is just so professional, mainstream and upbeat. While the vocals you chose sounds like it would be more for funk or disco.The vocals is kind of ruing the atmosphere tone you've created.
My suggestion would be to either get rid of the vocals completely or just find a more upbeat, mainstream kind of vocals. Other than that this is an awesome song. Keep up the great work!
I'm really liking this one spiv! I love the groovy feel you get from the very start, was nodding my head the entire time. I like the vocals that come in a bit later it fits perfectly with the beat you have created. Faving this one, thanks for the listen and entertainment!
Thanks friend for your supportive comments! Electro house and classic rock are both commonly focused on groove, so I'm glad that's what you hear in this connection. I think I couldn've gotten better timing in the earlier vocals, but I'm happy with it all the same. Glad you thought the timing was good later on though. Appreciate the fave and listen!
I liked it from the start to the ending. The vocals mixing with the relaxing guitar sounding makes for a great listening experience. I also love the piano-ish sound in the background. Great collab work! This track is great for people who just want to chill and relax.
Thank you so much for stopping by and dropping a review on this one, very pleased you enjoyed the track and the vibe I was hoping to achieve in the piece, which I think I achieved with the help from the 2 talented guys that helped, very talented artist, and very nice guys of the loop...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Very professional sounding track you've managed to create here. For your age and the amount of time you've created this track in, just makes it even more amazing. Like FR said, I think you should be selling your tracks. You have what it takes to make it as a popular mainstream artist, so why not get signed and get paid off of your amazing hard work? I think it's something you should definitely look into!
This is a very good track! Has a mainstream feel to it. Only problem for me was repetition, I would like to hear a little more variation in the track. Other than that it's a really good one. Thanks for the listen!
Another awesome one from you! What can I say, I am a fan of your music! This one is going on the Ipod. I really am happy you joined this website, making my music experience a much better one. Thanks for the listen and hope to hear more from you in the future!
FreeRadical, You're the man! Honestly in my opinion, I think you should stick to making house music as you're just really great at it. Every last house track you have here, (4 in counting) I loved.
These tracks are professional sounding and sounds like they would be played in a club of some sort by an awesome DJ. Keep up the great work and please upload more. I love it!
I'm glad you think so but i'm not happy with any of the tracks i've written just lateley. Perhaps it's because i quit smoking the green stuff. I bought all these synths but i haven't got a clue how to use them so hopefully things will improve once i get my head around them.
Cheers for dropping in and commenting.
FR
You voice is great! I really like how your voice fits with this one. You both did a great job, should collab some more in the future. Overall great work, take care!
Your vocals are amazing! The orchestra bit with your vocals just works so well together. The wobbles are cool too. I loved this song overall. Keep them come. I want to hear more from you!
Thanks a lot!
Well, I think that I have to practice more. I feel that is not enough.
I want to believe that I can do better.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
Damn man! That piano, those vocals and the mix = Main-Stream music! Why aren't you signed? This track could be a hit man! Lots of talent here! You deserve some more plays and comments. Great work and hope to see you on the billboards one day! Keep them coming!
Very emotional track you got here. I love the guitar you used in just how much memories it brought to me when I listened to this. Thank you for the journey deciBle!
Mandolin it is not guitar but many thnx for attention & feedback & a huge appreciation to your comprehension for underestanding my subjective journeys in memories .
your comment is one of most beautifull comments below this trial for me & I'm gratefull .best wishes.___Behnam
Damn dude! Another great one from you! I love how you started it out with that guitar-ish sound. Once the drums came in you had my full attention. The effects you used was great and the sounds that accompany it was music to my ears. Great stuff as always! Keep them coming, love your music!
Wow! Nice review. I was off my face on speed when i wrote this and it turned out alright. The downside was i ened up with paranoid psychosis from doing to much of it which is a shame because i seem to write alright tunes on it.
Beer only from now on!
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your kind words.
FR
Man, I'm really feeling this one! The drums are cool and I really liked how you started it out, even though this sounds. I would suggest adding a splash/crash sound before you bring in new sounds that way it won't catch anyone off guard.
Other than that good work for your second finished song. Hope to hear more from you in the future. Keep up the good work and keep practicing, you're getting there :)
Nice work, especially for your first track! This is 100 times better than my first track. Keep this kind of work up and you may start to surprise yourself.
Some tips of mine would be to automate the bass's volume so that it stays on low while you have the solo thing going on or even put a pad in there. Leaving only one instrument in even when you're trying to just make one sound pop out, usually takes away from the dynamics and makes the song dull. So instead of removing all of the other instruments completely, it's best to just lower the volume of the instruments you want to fade and then bring it back up when you're done with the solo.
Other than that, I think you did a very great job for a beginner! Keep up the good work!
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My suggestion would be to either get rid of the vocals completely or just find a more upbeat, mainstream kind of vocals. Other than that this is an awesome song. Keep up the great work!
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Thanks for the listen and keep up the great work!
Thank you so much for stopping by and dropping a review on this one, very pleased you enjoyed the track and the vibe I was hoping to achieve in the piece, which I think I achieved with the help from the 2 talented guys that helped, very talented artist, and very nice guys of the loop...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
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Great work and keep being awesome!
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Yeah, I tend to do the same everytime, all genres in one...but this time it's maybe a bit more coherent anyway.
=D
Thanks for listening!
/SJ
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These tracks are professional sounding and sounds like they would be played in a club of some sort by an awesome DJ. Keep up the great work and please upload more. I love it!
Cheers for dropping in and commenting.
FR
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Well, I think that I have to practice more. I feel that is not enough.
I want to believe that I can do better.
Thanks for listening and comment! :D
-Soraya
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I like to be different sometimes.
It feels good too.
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your comment is one of most beautifull comments below this trial for me & I'm gratefull .best wishes.___Behnam
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Beer only from now on!
Thanks for dropping in and leaving your kind words.
FR
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Other than that good work for your second finished song. Hope to hear more from you in the future. Keep up the good work and keep practicing, you're getting there :)
Thank you for the encouragement.
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Some tips of mine would be to automate the bass's volume so that it stays on low while you have the solo thing going on or even put a pad in there. Leaving only one instrument in even when you're trying to just make one sound pop out, usually takes away from the dynamics and makes the song dull. So instead of removing all of the other instruments completely, it's best to just lower the volume of the instruments you want to fade and then bring it back up when you're done with the solo.
Other than that, I think you did a very great job for a beginner! Keep up the good work!