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PhasmataJ

PhasmataJ

Orange Park, Florida, United States
Joined : 27th May 2011 - 14 years ago
PhasmataJ comments on tracks

PhasmataJ has posted 4 comments on other peoples tracks.

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PhasmataJ
PhasmataJ 23rd Jun 2011 14:50 - 14 years ago

on STELLAR RAYS by bassmom2012
BassMom, will you adopt me? It's hard for me to sit down while listening. I need to be moving girl. Really MOVING!

Stellar rays has an exceptional array of sounds, all mixed to a T and just the right condiments added for a spectacular tasting mix. I'm eatin it up!

Your mastering is 'CRYSTAL'. I want to pick your brain and find out what you know.

You have given enough length here for any DJ to use easily. There is never a dull moment in this one. Thank you for all that you've done to make this and share with folks like me. I am humbled. I am still learning what the types of music are. I think you've given me a perfect example of Breakbeat and will always remember your song as my best example!

Thank you sister,
PhasmataJ
bassmom2012
bassmom2012 replied Unknown
Anytime babe!! and you can always find me on facebook also ok?? go to

www.facebook.com/BASSMOM45

what ever styles you are learning let me know and I will be happy to help you ok?? and yes I WILL ADOPT YOU!! I can help you to get going in the right direction with your music. I also specialize in drum n bass as well as the breakbeatz ok??
hit me up babe and we will talk!!!
PhasmataJ
PhasmataJ 23rd Jun 2011 13:58 - 14 years ago

on Innatatu by Vicen
WOW! Talk about uplifting. The tune brought me up a few notches in the mood department. I wanted to jump up and do something physical. Really great song, AMAZING treatment of stereo. My speakers became two separate little creatures sitting her talking to me. Loved it.

I do not speak Spanish. But I read your lyrics and enjoyed them very much. Light hearted, playful and just plain 'makes ya feel good' music. Thank you for sharing and thank you for reviewing my song.
Vicen
Vicen replied Unknown
Thank you very much for your enthusiastic review. I am very pleased to have someone enjoy my music ... is the only purpose that I pursue. Glad to hear more in the loop.
PhasmataJ
PhasmataJ 23rd Jun 2011 13:42 - 14 years ago

on Unsound by ColeAlexander
The first part made me feel claustrophobic, as if I was locked away in a mental ward. This is a good experience because according to the title (Unsound), this is probably what many in such places are like.

The treatment of the monologue is really very well executed. It's like a peek into someone's thoughts.

As for mixing/mastering, I use M-Audio monitors which with most of my music tends to pop the bass. Your song had more treble to me and was quite pleasing I must say.

The length is really good. You don't want it too long or too short. Basically, get in, get your message across, and get out.

A character comes to mind while listening. Remember Faruzza Balk? I see smeared black mascara on her eyes while wrapped in a straight jacket. Eyes that look up at you as you enter her cell. What do her eyes say, "I am a God that will break free".

Again, I loved Unsound and relished the atmosphere it created in my head. Thank you for sharing. And thank you for reviewing my song.
PhasmataJ
PhasmataJ 1st Jun 2011 08:54 - 14 years ago

on Crystal Shimmers by SilverSkyline
Hi SilverSkyline,

I very much enjoyed your track Crystal Shimmers. At 50 seconds in, I fell in love with it. Such an eclectic mix of beautifully mixed and mastered sounds. The depth and vibrancy of each section was very enjoyable. There was a section where you may have had some clipped peaks going on. But even with the clipped peaks, it was enjoyable. I hear some like to hit just above the peaks to make the track ALIVE. Good Job!

Such music could easily find it's way into Hollywood or any such area needing talented artists like yourself. Have you tried placing your tracks with video or scenes to see how they unfold? Again, thank you for sharing Crystal Shimmers with the group. I give it a thumbs up for sure!
SilverSkyline
SilverSkyline replied Unknown
hey thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Sadly I can't take credit for creating these sounds, they're all loops from this site. However the mixing and composition is what i do, and your review makes me feel that i'm getting quite good at that :) i need to learn how to make my own, but fruity loops is just so complicated and foreign to me right now >.>
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