i like the construction. i like how you bring the original groove back at the end and create a cool closing. super elements all the way through. great feel for builds. i think you are off to a great start. congrats!
the buildup and drop is high impact. the sounds are compelling and the vocal/instrumental mix is first class. you have a great feel for this genre. super track. congrats!
Exactly. I'm working on trying to find a sound for myself in my productions so that rappers can do their work on them. I've gotten down into the final stages of my production techniques and now I'm trying to figure out transitions and FX within my productions. Especially transitions from intro to verse and 1st chorus to 2nd verse.
you create lots of subtle background interest which speaks to your attention to detail. a beautiful sounding mix. i understand this to be foundation work, not a finished track.
Thank you.. I've been doing that for a long time, I feel like it helps add more to the song and brings it more character. I'm a firm believer that it's the little details that add up that breathe life into music.
you have a solid foundation here. his vocal has long build sections which make the accompanying build challenging to maintain interest and tension. what are you looking for in collab at this point?
Right its not always easy to build a melodie and music around some vocals and hold the tension and know when to ad effects and so on. I am also a beginner so I just startet to make music about 3 month ago. I did a little when i was younger but stoped. I dont know exactly what im searching in Collab, i thought that it means that me and someone else will work on a Track together?! Or has i missunderatood that? :/
i love this groove. like how you handle transitions. great use of cymbals. i would ask for something more magical from your intro and a little more of your excellent transitions technique to bring us from intro to main section
sweet sounding bass and I like what you do with it. for my taste the vocal could be less muffled - more prominent. I think this was an artistic decision though - what you were after. Nice work.
i like the layering of percussion on top of everything else. i would strive for a bit more clarity and differentiation of the various percussion sounds. you have an interesting bongo groove, for example, that could be more prominent with a bit of mixing. nice work
some funk elements perhaps. is that a live performance by you on the sax? what great riffs! what a sexy surprise the emergence of the female voice. nice job. really enjoyed it. could add a whole second section and a reprise to this one! regards - Dan
i know it's a little short but it was the purpose. Usually, i work on duration between 3 and 4 minutes, sometimes, changes are good for breaking a kind of monotony lol
I am relistening this morning, after a long hiatus from looperman. I've only listened to about half of it as I need to comment on a few tracks to get my own new one to appear. Your particular blend of spoken word, references in your grooves to established genres, and thoroughly unique soundscapes really distinguishes your work on this site. Dan
i like ur kick in the mix. i like all the drums in the mix. and great use of the white noise sweeps. very rich sound. might not need quite so much compression. nice job. Regards, Dan
when you are rocking out in this one it is solid and gets the body moving. I like the concept of the intro - could imagine more even more detail and fantasy to it. Nice work. Regards, Dan
nice full sound to your mix when the synth is soloing. nice transitions between your sections. seems a sowewhat brighter tempo and a little more kick might make things a bit dancier. best regards - Dan
nice job on the white noise sweeps, transitions. maybe add another element right before drops. Some dub noise perhaps. Good structure overall also. Regards, Dan
Hi, Orlando. It's been a while since I heard your work. You keep growing in musicality and production technique. You get a full sound, and all the instruments clear as bells, without overcompression. Beautiful work. Regards, Dan
Sorry for the late reply Dan..always a pleasure to hear from you. Thank you so kindly for this truly encouraging view on my recent work.....means alot !:)
I think the timing of the rap is really great. The delivery is expressive. The production works well under it. Good luck with further development. Regards - Dan
Hi, Nomad. I understand your concern about developing a more powerful ending. But from my perspective as a fresh listener I can totally understand how the track winds down with an improvised feeling over a steamy, India flavor groove. I love the sounds and your arrangement. Great to hear a track of yours again after some time off the site. Regards, Dan
The ending just isn't good enough. A bit of wind down but nothing definitive or particularly interesting. Good endings are hard to do!
Yes, I'm not on the site much these days because of a serious drop in my musicality and ability to produce decent music. I think I only uploaded 4 tracks last year.
i am completely with you on your mix. i love the sharp, in your face presence of the percussion elements and the bass. and the whistle element is a subtle new mood for the track. cool concept. hope you find a good vocal for this. deserves it. regards and happy new year.
great sound you got in this one. possibly the concern about the bass is that it is fully sustained? it might enhance the transparency you otherwise achieve with your elements if there was some separation and decay of bass notes. nice work and good luck with future development.
i think the rapping is very cool. and I think the words are really clear which is a pleasure. i think also the mix is very rich. nicely done. great to hear your work. all the best in the New Year! Dan
thank you Dan.
really means a lot.
glad you could enjoy the music
thanks for always showin support. how you can enjoy my future and previous work
much love
-CAP
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Right its not always easy to build a melodie and music around some vocals and hold the tension and know when to ad effects and so on. I am also a beginner so I just startet to make music about 3 month ago. I did a little when i was younger but stoped. I dont know exactly what im searching in Collab, i thought that it means that me and someone else will work on a Track together?! Or has i missunderatood that? :/
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Happy to read you liked this one :)
i know it's a little short but it was the purpose. Usually, i work on duration between 3 and 4 minutes, sometimes, changes are good for breaking a kind of monotony lol
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Just dropped a track on the 5th as well.
Regardless, thanks for comin out showing support
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The ending just isn't good enough. A bit of wind down but nothing definitive or particularly interesting. Good endings are hard to do!
Yes, I'm not on the site much these days because of a serious drop in my musicality and ability to produce decent music. I think I only uploaded 4 tracks last year.
Thanks for the thoughts.
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really means a lot.
glad you could enjoy the music
thanks for always showin support. how you can enjoy my future and previous work
much love
-CAP