WOOOW, love this from the start. 0:35 is awesome.. 0:46 - whenever is awesome. I love that zippy sounding synth. I don't even have an adjective for it. Very awesome. Faved for sure. Mixing is spot on. Everythings clear and heard. choo rock brutha. There is one thing tho. The synth hits in the very beginning progression hit a note thats out of key i believe, or perhaps the progression is just not what I'm anticipating or something. Anyways... its awesome
Hey thanks a lot man!! Really appreciate the positive comments. As for the key signature, I'm pretty sure it's correct in the beginning, but I'll be sure to double-check. Imma stop by your page and check out your tracks. Glad you enjoyed mine. Cheers!
Very cool, I like how happy it sounds. The bass synth gets a little repetive, your parts are very diverse. very creative. I like that kick. AWWWW that part at 1:25 is awesommmmme(refer to beginning of sentence). Yeah Spiv, nice job and fun listen!
Hey, thanks so much! I agree it's a pretty happy track. Sorry about the repetitive bass, I think that must be one of my signatures... ha ha! Thanks so much for stopping by to listen and review!
you know how i do, listen and review... OH YEAH I remember watching your youtube with this Philosofist, all your verses are gold. I really like Phil's verse to Manzet, damn Manzet hard as hell. Excellent beat protege. the tracks a friggin looperman anthem. well done guys. Nothing to change at all. You all represent eachother awesome. Yall even represented me. Loops!
haha leaky faucet, alright lets review and listen: Wow, I wish I knew what VST he used for piano. progresses nicely, and your vocals fit well. definitely could use some more though! excited to hear more of your voice.
taking a serious listen to this one. hats sound cool. Is that kick panning left and right fast on every 2nd hit? I thought that was clipping for a second. I think the percussion should have a few more parts. Your parts are clearly defined, I just dont think they stand out very much because they are hitting with the percussion a lot. I'd suggest breaking the guitar instrument down and have it hit off beat so as to create a dynamic. I like your part at 4:16 the most because you pull a lot of the instruments out. Definitely want to redo the clap part. Id say just have it hit on the 2 and then have it roll at the end of the measure. Break each instrumental down. Its got a good feeling but needs a little more. Re upload and Ill check it out again!
Trippy instrument choice. YEAH VOX!!! Very cool vocal effects. I hope that's you! Hmm, so when the beat comes back in after the vocals. It feels a little off time. Maybe thats just me, but its the feelinggggg mannnnn. I really feel like this track needs to EXPLODE into a chorus with some solid 4 to the floor and saw hits.
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LOL that's not me in the vocals its from an acapella I found here on looperman, I added the effects but I'm not satisfied with them. But I've since lost that project file and cannot update it -_-. Thank you for your sweet enthusiasm, I wish I could fix this thing up everyday I learn more about music production so it would be so much better but it's stuck this way i guess lol. I really really appreciate the review my friend I'll try and return the favor!
Lets review and listen at the same time. Nice xylophone line. If that's the instrument u used. I like how the bass comes in a little later. Guitar riff fits sweet. I hope that's you playing that. Cause its sounds like you felt that out. "Yeah" That guitar definitely adds a lot. Percussion's good but a little hidden. AHHH at 2:17 is where that percussion really shines. dig the depth of that snare. I'd say just sing to me what your thoughts are and this track is done. Well mixed, sounds great. Check me out Dext! I added you on Facebook as well. Kinda creeped up on you through Weazel's page :D
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sure man, ama creep back on u on facebook. thnx for the comment though. appreciated, mostly they say never review until u are done with the song but i guess there are exceptions.
all comments appreciated. :)
and yes that was me playing the riff :)
reviewing and listening, kick a$$ kick. good effects, filling these headphones well. this feels industrial to me, definitely spacey but a little industrial as well. AHHH there's the money at 1:28. awwww i wished it progressed. That was the perfect root chord for your chorus progression. Pretty out there. More gold at 2:34 but again i wished it progressed. I'd feel more confident vocally if it had a rhythm. Well mixed, interesting and creative instrument choices. Ending is freaking me out. Keep it up bruthhaa
Big electro-pop fan here. Solid beat, love the beat. Yeah this has got that feeling fer sure. Love that fat saw. haha cool use of the autotune. not overdone, like I seem to do sometimes :) Very well done.
Piano is tight, is it composed in DAW or recorded? Love the scratching to the perussion. Is that a little sitar i hear as well!!? too cool. very chill track, yeah the drums that come in really make this track neato! sadly, the only improvements i can suggest are some lyrics. spit it out!
thx . I have my md-1700 hooked up to my computer so i can record through fl studio. one loop was from a website, also. thx alot for the review, i appreciate it
Hi Becca, reviewing and listening... at the same time. Wonderful piano line. I might have to learn this one on piano myself. Very cool kick. Strings blend beautifully, wonderful feeling. I'm already feeling lyrics for this. Do you sing?? You should sing over this. If you ever do need some vox... I'm ur guy! The things i could do with your tracks. Well done miss!
thx alot for the review. No I don't sing too much, but this will have vocals soon. My Poet does all the vocals for my beats. I have heard some of ur work, and once i may just see what i can come up with for u,
Already writing lyrics. If you want me to send some acapellas, let me know. Love the feeling of this, wish there was more so I can get a feel for a verse and chorus. Sounds good Ste!
Thanks, I'm amazed at how quick you've managed to get going on this. I'll add more to it soon, but I think I'm gonna keep repeating the piano for a while and then change it afterwards.
wow, i hear some really dark lyrics over this one. Percussion is on. I like that kick too. i think the snare could use something or something different. Pops a little too much i think. Good beat, throw some lyrics on it man! Check me out!
Thanks, was listening to your recent upload, will review it in a bit, probably when I wake up =D 4am =). I'll get permission from a guy I make tracks for on Youtube then upload them here.
alright girlie, great arpeggio riff, percussion is creative. i like how your vocals sound desperate. reminds me of the band Metric. Dig the spoken word. I would like a breakbeat drum beat and guitar chords over the chorus to climax the track fer sure. Think about it. Check me out!
YESH! I just heard your boi philosofist's rap over this (which was great btw) and I asked him to send me to your track. So hear I am and awwww yeah. Just as fat as I remember. That piano line over the beat really does it for me. Great bass choice and yeah very well done! PEACE
very well mixed to start off. I like how I can hear everything the whole time. Very cool effects, percussion is great, i'm glad you focused on that. Super trippy track. Does this border Psy-Goa? I vote yes! At 2:50 I really like that kick line that comes in. farrrrr outtt!
ye and great that you can hear it, I started out with a slightly higher bpm, aiming for goa psytrance kinda thing, which also was my inspiration on this one, but then added too many weight. Glad you like it.
lets review and listen shall we? Love the gate panning and the entire progression. aww, i was hoping for a long snare roll going into that first chorus.. So definitely the arp is good, all around. I do feel as though the percussion could be stepped up in the chorus parts fer sure. I was missing it. That and I think it could use another instrument like a short synth repeating a melody and effecting that. Just a suggestion. Good so far! Check me out.
wow, WOW! Hauntingly awesome piano line, amazing vox. Percussion is great. Perfect mix, is that you singing the verse? the chorus? I wish the verse vocals had a little more... attitude, like you saying it to me instead of saying it inside your head... if you know what I mean. Solid Gold, gotta fave this
Thanks man. I had a few friends and some people I know pass away, so its just away for me to get some stuff of my chest. The beat I actually got of a site called soundclick so it had the chorus already on it. All other vocals and effects were done by me.
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listening and reviewing... simultaneously mwuhaha, i like your arp, not feeling the progression at :55. I'd like to hear some different instruments for that. mix sounds good. kind of hard to listen with that really high pitched synth. Also, I'd to hear you get away from the 4 to the floor kick during the verse or something. Hope some of that was useful. Check me out!
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