deltaaah

deltaaah

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Rockland, United States
Joined : 16th Oct 2010 - 15 years ago
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deltaaah 17th Oct 2010 00:35 - 15 years ago

on HIP HOP SYMPHONY BEAT (DEMO) by yeshintae
YEAH YESH! You got a banger here, right out the door! Your string work is orchestral(awesome)! awwwwwww, you just teased me with a clip :(( sounded great in the mix and composition and instrument choice!! well done!
yeshintae
yeshintae replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Ahahaha thanxs fam

Appreciate the luv
Imma scope out yo page
once I get home bro

Much Respect from LA
deltaaah
deltaaah 17th Oct 2010 00:07 - 15 years ago

on Nobody Us by DJFredrick
Alrighty elfo! Reviewing as i listen: Love your instrument choice right off. That flute synth and tribal drums put me in that place fer sure. Digging your synth melody, made that verse stand out. Yeahhhh, keeping it dynamic. I like that. Good breaks and you bring it back well. Those backing vox are sweet, another piece of flare that adds to this beauty. Your mixing is great, I can hear everything perfectly, I'm thinking that some panning on those backing vox would sound pretty cool during those breaks. Very well executed ending. *impressed*
DJFredrick
DJFredrick replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
Thanks a ton Deltaaah for such an in depth review!
And all that you said mate..I totally appreciate that yo! :)
alright! I Think panning is a great Idea! i'll give it a go. thanks again for taking the time to review brO!

Aelfo
deltaaah
deltaaah 16th Oct 2010 23:47 - 15 years ago

on Knock knock by NeonStrawberry
Wow, love that kick and pad right off, really sets that intensity. I like your automation on that synth in the beginning if thats what you did. This track is crazy all over the place! I suggest you break away from the 4 to the floor a little bit, to give the beat some interesting breaks. I really love the part that starts at 2:20. That wobble bass is cool, wish it had a little reverb and like blood distortion to kind of fatten that out. id also suggest tweaking the panning. Also, I notice that the part at 4:35 that comes in, doesn't start on the note that would begin the progression again, leaving me kind of "wanting more". i assume you are looking to return to that root note so that you can have the instrumental hook and complete the progression. Great choice of instruments and your mixing is sounding good, i'd say a little more flare and composition work and you got it! Thanks for your review!

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NeonStrawberry
NeonStrawberry replied Unknown - 2028 years ago
thank you very much for your thorough feedback, it shed a lot of light on some things for me. great tips, I guess it's time for some research and hearing examples to indeed break away from the 4/4. It's been eating me all along :) peace all and thnx.
deltaaah
deltaaah 16th Oct 2010 15:35 - 15 years ago

on Checkmate by ChuckBaileyBand
Wow amazing guitar and vocal work. You certainly have your own voice and a good one at that. Fits this track well. The guitar work is inspiring. I suggest creating a couple more drum loops to give the track a little bit more dynamic.
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