very well mixed to start off. I like how I can hear everything the whole time. Very cool effects, percussion is great, i'm glad you focused on that. Super trippy track. Does this border Psy-Goa? I vote yes! At 2:50 I really like that kick line that comes in. farrrrr outtt!
ye and great that you can hear it, I started out with a slightly higher bpm, aiming for goa psytrance kinda thing, which also was my inspiration on this one, but then added too many weight. Glad you like it.
lets review and listen shall we? Love the gate panning and the entire progression. aww, i was hoping for a long snare roll going into that first chorus.. So definitely the arp is good, all around. I do feel as though the percussion could be stepped up in the chorus parts fer sure. I was missing it. That and I think it could use another instrument like a short synth repeating a melody and effecting that. Just a suggestion. Good so far! Check me out.
wow, WOW! Hauntingly awesome piano line, amazing vox. Percussion is great. Perfect mix, is that you singing the verse? the chorus? I wish the verse vocals had a little more... attitude, like you saying it to me instead of saying it inside your head... if you know what I mean. Solid Gold, gotta fave this
Thanks man. I had a few friends and some people I know pass away, so its just away for me to get some stuff of my chest. The beat I actually got of a site called soundclick so it had the chorus already on it. All other vocals and effects were done by me.
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listening and reviewing... simultaneously mwuhaha, i like your arp, not feeling the progression at :55. I'd like to hear some different instruments for that. mix sounds good. kind of hard to listen with that really high pitched synth. Also, I'd to hear you get away from the 4 to the floor kick during the verse or something. Hope some of that was useful. Check me out!
Alright Stina, lets listen and review simultaneously... Keep the intro definitely. percussion is solid and well mixed. Love this feeling, your vox add so much to this. Love the vocal play with you and the pads. Good choice of bass and instruments all around. Solid :)
Thank You so much dear for the very nice compliments.. ☺ Kind of You.. Sumper has now made a profile in here, so hope he also will read Your very nice words concerning the bass and instruments..
YEAH YESH! You got a banger here, right out the door! Your string work is orchestral(awesome)! awwwwwww, you just teased me with a clip :(( sounded great in the mix and composition and instrument choice!! well done!
Alrighty elfo! Reviewing as i listen: Love your instrument choice right off. That flute synth and tribal drums put me in that place fer sure. Digging your synth melody, made that verse stand out. Yeahhhh, keeping it dynamic. I like that. Good breaks and you bring it back well. Those backing vox are sweet, another piece of flare that adds to this beauty. Your mixing is great, I can hear everything perfectly, I'm thinking that some panning on those backing vox would sound pretty cool during those breaks. Very well executed ending. *impressed*
Thanks a ton Deltaaah for such an in depth review!
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alright! I Think panning is a great Idea! i'll give it a go. thanks again for taking the time to review brO!
Wow, love that kick and pad right off, really sets that intensity. I like your automation on that synth in the beginning if thats what you did. This track is crazy all over the place! I suggest you break away from the 4 to the floor a little bit, to give the beat some interesting breaks. I really love the part that starts at 2:20. That wobble bass is cool, wish it had a little reverb and like blood distortion to kind of fatten that out. id also suggest tweaking the panning. Also, I notice that the part at 4:35 that comes in, doesn't start on the note that would begin the progression again, leaving me kind of "wanting more". i assume you are looking to return to that root note so that you can have the instrumental hook and complete the progression. Great choice of instruments and your mixing is sounding good, i'd say a little more flare and composition work and you got it! Thanks for your review!
thank you very much for your thorough feedback, it shed a lot of light on some things for me. great tips, I guess it's time for some research and hearing examples to indeed break away from the 4/4. It's been eating me all along :) peace all and thnx.
Wow amazing guitar and vocal work. You certainly have your own voice and a good one at that. Fits this track well. The guitar work is inspiring. I suggest creating a couple more drum loops to give the track a little bit more dynamic.
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alright! I Think panning is a great Idea! i'll give it a go. thanks again for taking the time to review brO!
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