Soligen

Mmhmm.... I remember...

My lord... i told you before but I guess you need reminding, you are an amazing singer... truly blessed, well done! And a big well done to jfw, I would truly be privileged to work with you ma'am.

This is exactly the idea I had in mind, you see it distracts less away from the overall track and won't deafen your Dj's when (no doubt) they'll be dj'ing this wonderful happy go track, well done mate, glad the advice worked for you :)

In a really, really.... REALLY weird way, it reminds me of Flying Lotus trying to make a dubstep track, sounds nice, I personally am not a fan of the *Genre* but I like music overall and I thought I'd have a listen. I think that sounds are fairly well balanced, some of the panning for me maybe was a bit too much (the arrpegiator mainly). I overall loved the vocals the most, nice work. :)

Hey, I really like this track man, it does as MAVstudio said sound really professional, if I'm going to give *MY* opinion on it I do find the Kick maybe has too much high in it, perhaps the hat or the kick itself is just a bit fizzy but that may well just be me hahaha.
Anyway, great job, defiantly nice and fresh sounding, not to heavy and not too soft.
I hope you have success with it.

This is epic? why has no one else reviewed it, instant favourite! obviously theres bits I could and should criticise but I'm enjoying the funky soul deep in my veins!!

My main issue it that the vocal would by 1 : 10000 times better if it wasn't spoken word for this track so personally I'd upload an instrumental version for download :D

Other than that it's great, love it, check out some of my music, I'll have to see what else you've got.

Soligen,

You seem to really like the musical box sound, I like this song, I did feel the guitar did come in a little abrupt.
I think we should have a chat about collaborating, I'll produce for you one song and you sing on it? i think I have a couple of things that would work well with your voice!
Let me know if you feel the idea!

This is nice, I like what you did with my loop, at little credit next time WOULD be nice but really nice voice, maybe just be aware that the beat might be a little out of time with the loop at some points.
Other than that, keep up the good work.

Soligen,

Hahahaha! Yeah, that's my boy Blume and madam Becca! great collab! liking it, really nice melodies, beat is nicely sat behind it all flows nicely, I'm feeling it brother.
When are we going to collab eh?
Hope to hear more like this buddy.

Soligen,

Yes, this is much better! I'm glad you took it on board, you can hear the track is much clearer!
Very very good work, liking the drums too, unfortunately people are sleeping so I have this on almost the lowest volume but I can hear it clearly!
Keep up the good work, by far your best.

P.S. Darth Maul? Lol, maybe, Division or, Micro-organism may be better suited to this, I'm think of molecules being torn up here haha :D

Some nice Nerofunk Drum & Bass here.
If this was properly mastered with less reverb this could be a really good track.
Also possibly try making the Drum's have a bit more of a rhythm to them, try Jade - Budapest Sound.
I think that would be a good direction to go with the drums for this particular song.
Other than that, a really good song, nice strong baslines morhping in this, I like it, good job.
Look forward to hearing more.

Ben.

Try adding slight overdrive or compression to kick and try and get a meatier snare underneath that clap snare mix you've got going on.
Other than that, it's a very good track :)

Why am I the first to download this amazing production...? ah well Great work :)

Hello, I haven't been on looperman for a long time but this made me laugh so hard, and the music is great, definitely a winner for me, especially those bongos and congas.
Also liking that bassline, reminds me of the bassline from Noisia's - Blockparty, maybe that influenced you, It doesn't really make a difference, this is a great tune.
Keep it up - Soligen.

I'm not a nasty person, but I am a critic and I will compare songs to similar songs and value those points met.
I will start by giving my review on the drums; the rhythm is good and it's quite a good set of sounds but maybe a little flabby, possibly some overdrive or something to bring them out a bit.
The Bassline is pretty good too, possibly make it a little darker and turn the volume on that Amen Break in the background.
I personally would add little stabs maybe some FX in the background to give it some depth.
Other than that It's a good track, and I'm sure you'll keep at it pal.

Soligen

Easily the best song on Looperman, amazing production, cute voice, reminds me of the Final Fantasy: Advent Children Movie, during a scene where a little girl speaks about the Life Stream, or the worlds Life Stream, definitely if you haven't looked at it you should, if she makes any more music will you be uploading it? I' be very grateful to hear it from here.
Truly amazing, well done to her and you, seems like music is in the family eh? :)

Soligen

I have to admit, the drums are just the coolest rhythm I've heard today, it's just the when you bring in the more subby kick it's a bit to much I'd personally say.
The Bassline also might not be in the right Key and is slightly muddy but other than that It's a wicked track, as song It's really good, and you should be proud of it, it's definitely outside of the box which is what I like to hear, you should listen to some Amon Tobin, he uses a lot of samples and I feel maybe get his vibes will influence your music in a positive way.
Keep up the good work Ioka, who knows, one day we may collaborate and make some fire-cakes in our musical ovens :).
If you sent me each separate sound bounced down I could master and mix it for you but other than that It's cool :) Made me smile.

Soligen

Haha, this put a smile on my face, well done, it's a very nice track, the only thing I would suggest is that you take off the reverb on the other drums you added, but my drums sound nice, keep it up, it's almost a funky house Drum & Bass step.
Musically it's all there, the arrangement is ok, maybe the transitions in some parts are a little off but don't worry, for a 13 year old you've got plenty of time to work on your arrangements.
I like how you sped up the track into the Drum & Bass state as well, you've got nice ideas in this track, and the bassline is good too.
Just try to make sure you have at least 1 kick and snare that has no reverb and punches through the track.
One last thing, I admire and respect you for letting me know you used my loop, I don't mind if you don't say you used it unless oyu say "Oh, I made all of it myself" Lol.
Keep up the good work and if you want to collab sometime you let me know little guy and we'll see what we can come up with.

Soligen

Hey, I'm loving this song, could I have a go at put some vocals onto it and I'll send you it before I upload it, you can tell wether or not It's worth it :)?

I'd put it in maybe Electro or Weird... Good song I suppose :)..

Wow, somebody tell Dilla's Spirit to leave this Guy, Hahaha you've got what Dilla had inside of you man, it's just talent, real raw talent, Keep it up don't lose faith or who will be left to believe.

Soligen

Hahaha, someone likes Timbaland more than me! that's a shocker.
Definitely getting Timbo's vibe from this, liking it, just add some soft fuzzy synths in there to fill it out, and add a subby bassline and it'll sound like a dream, as for people wanting to sing on this, I don't mind having a go, if you'd like me to try send me a message ASAP please and I'll get back to you.
Thanks :)

Soligen

I love this track until the chorus comes in, only because it distorts slightly.
You've got a very Beastie Boys/Eminem style of rapping which is really cool and unique in a way.
I do like the lyrics though, and the Intro is really just awesome.
Please check your emails also, I've sent you an email regarding a collaboration.
Thanks.

Soligen

Hehe, this song made giggle, it's nice, I like vocals, must've taken a while to cut them all up.
As song it all works nicely and like it in the breakdown when he says "Cut that Break"
Very original ideas in the song, if anything, maybe try spicing the drums up, add some compression on there, it does seem like a mix of different songs in some parts but it is good, I loved the THX part you brought in I fell off my chair laughing.
Keep it up.

Soligen

Ok, I'll say this. Arrangement wise, it's bang on, the reason it's peaking yet without punch is because you've got really tinny percussion and literally no sub or it's so low my speakers can't seem to pick it up (I have very good speakers not to boast).
To compensate if you EQ some of those hats a bit and compress the Kick or add a little bit of Sub into it then it should have that punch you're looking for.
i'd also like to ask, please if you have cut the Sub I think maybe if you give some more Sub, low cut it to about 40-60Hz no need to go any higher.
But as a song it's very good, I like it but due to the tinny hats it makes my ears drop and the song just becomes painful to listen, not musically but physically.
I'd like to hope you take my advice on board because you've got some great Drum & Bass ideas and with some tinkering along the ideas I've suggested you'd be awesome.
Please don't anything I've said the wrong way, I meant it Constructively.

Soligen