this is a tad better then your other one i just reviewed.
but also here are some minor issue's and thingy's.
what im abt to tell you is the following,
a bass doesnt need major verb's or delay's, it makes it messy.
once you have a bass without verb or delay youll see you have allot more room to add things or work them out way way better.
i also came across this point and found this out by myself.
so i hope this can be used as a usefull Review :)
hey bro,
i was just wondering while listening..
could i remix this track of yours??
i do understand the rights you have abt giving any permission so..
be honest :)
and it would be awsome to just PM me or something .. otherwise ill never know since im not the kind of guy looking for some response on my review...
well, nuff said.
hope to hear something from you!
take care!
PS: if i get any permission.. i only need to know what key youve used. i can take over the melody anytime ;)
finally ive been searching ages for some techtrance on this site .. seems just no one else have the right knowledge abt techtrance :S
anyways.. this sounds pretty good bro!
my only concern abt it is it gets repetitive .. ofcourse any electronic dance genre gets repetitive after some time but..
this needs more, like a bass lead, or any other lead will do.
gonna check if you have some more stuff like this.
later!
you know what i think abt vocal trance, the quality always goes downwards ..
even if you reduce the kbps it goes further downwards.
anyways, the melody is awsome here! nothing to complain abt it really.
hope to hear some more stuff like this without vocals ;)
fair point bud! Yeah I liked eshars vox in this though...i felt it needed summit to fill out the break a little..But thanks for your honesty...i appreciate it.
maybe you could perform some sort of epical break that sounds i lil like filming music, and after that break turn the tables with an amazing mid-bass beat?
its just an idea ..
and hope it helps you a bit :)
its pretty decent so far bro,
tempo is a bit low for this kind of upbeat, i would go to 134/136 ;)
not too slow, not too fast ;) just at the right spot.
and some more cymbals would be welcomed either imo.
Thanks mate. I thought it felt a bit slow when listening this morning. I must of not realised last night. I will try to up it like you say, thanks :) I will be editing more later and i will try the cymbals etc. This is just a basic idea so far. Thanks for commenting!
Personaly i hate the kind of upbeat/uplifting.
but the elements your using are overwelming, really powerfull.
great use of sounds, please keep up the good work!
THX...for your review :)
yeah...the track is great :)
but i cant open my old flp project :(
and i forgot to save a mix without vocals :(
cheers...JW...
i like the synth choice in the beginning, seems like the kickclould be EQ'ed somewhat better? since it doesnt have any tail-bass further in this track. [around 1:20 and forward]
as for the synths at 2:00 and further, are well mixed :)
and again it does member me of Marco V/Marcel Woods....
well i got nothing more to say here.. the breakdown is awsome so far, and that drop just did it!
Thanks im glad u like it, yeah the main probem i have with a lot off my track is the mastering, still learing aqnd think i have a an ok ear but theres still obviously still a long way to go!
And cheers for the review!
as you where saying: 'i'm still not to sure about the begining of the tune'
so am i.
as for the builds and drops/quality side, nothing wrong with them.
your mixing does remind me of Marco V/Marcel Woods somehow but yea...
great track none the less ;)
TIP!:
i would use less BPM, wich would make it easier for you to make beats and kicking drops :)
as for the synths; try to stick with your lines, i know it gets repeatetive when using 1 synth or so.. but i think a maximum of 2/3 synths would do it. [just my opinion]
on run away by chrisgreece
but also here are some minor issue's and thingy's.
what im abt to tell you is the following,
a bass doesnt need major verb's or delay's, it makes it messy.
once you have a bass without verb or delay youll see you have allot more room to add things or work them out way way better.
i also came across this point and found this out by myself.
so i hope this can be used as a usefull Review :)
on dreaming soul by chrisgreece
i cant say this is bad or good too.
its in between, a bit too messy or engaged if you get me.
its a tad hard to follow the structure and lines you have there.
try to split them up, or delete some sounds and add bass instead.
on Change by samkingtheartist
goodjob!
on Bouncy Lovely by samkingtheartist
the chinese Guzhung you used gives me the chills..
and im wondering, who did the vocals??
good song!
on Torticollis by DigitalNerve
i was just wondering while listening..
could i remix this track of yours??
i do understand the rights you have abt giving any permission so..
be honest :)
and it would be awsome to just PM me or something .. otherwise ill never know since im not the kind of guy looking for some response on my review...
well, nuff said.
hope to hear something from you!
take care!
PS: if i get any permission.. i only need to know what key youve used. i can take over the melody anytime ;)
on Disjointed Manaquin by DigitalNerve
good job
on Bascullar by DigitalNerve
anyways.. this sounds pretty good bro!
my only concern abt it is it gets repetitive .. ofcourse any electronic dance genre gets repetitive after some time but..
this needs more, like a bass lead, or any other lead will do.
gonna check if you have some more stuff like this.
later!
-Timo / Mau5mate
on Bob The Builder by Vladmyster
on Into The Light Feat Eshar by Salkizar
even if you reduce the kbps it goes further downwards.
anyways, the melody is awsome here! nothing to complain abt it really.
hope to hear some more stuff like this without vocals ;)
-Timo
Mark
on Deutchland - HELP NEEDED by Salkizar
sounds like a nice intro piece of work!
maybe you could perform some sort of epical break that sounds i lil like filming music, and after that break turn the tables with an amazing mid-bass beat?
its just an idea ..
and hope it helps you a bit :)
goodluck!
on Can You See My Pain - Joyfulwave Edit by bmw2000uk
the drum work is a bit repetitive but i really digg the vocals you have!
the synth is awsome too mate, keep up the awsome work!
Peace...
on Love must be earned (feat Amy) by TCAS
pretty nice track you have put together.
love the arp and gate youve used.
my only concern is the vocal, it could use some more reverb.
but thats just my opinion.
keep up the good work!
I added some more reverb to her voice.
L8er,
TCAS
on Cherry Age ft Minette by JohnnyHunter
tempo is a bit low for this kind of upbeat, i would go to 134/136 ;)
not too slow, not too fast ;) just at the right spot.
and some more cymbals would be welcomed either imo.
goodluck on editing and finishing!
on Android Emotion (Original Mix) by GilbertCarrizales
but the elements your using are overwelming, really powerfull.
great use of sounds, please keep up the good work!
fav.
on Awakenings by rfalkenburg
im really really really in love with this
and as a request: could you make more like this?
t.i.a.
SkyTrance
Sign. Goes Here: `-'
on Winter Rain - feat GIZELLA by JoyfulWAVE
mostly i just really hate vocal tracks because of the lagg in mastering..
but this is just stunning!
Really well done track,
youve got my Fav + DL.
Wonderfull.
Cheers
yeah...the track is great :)
but i cant open my old flp project :(
and i forgot to save a mix without vocals :(
cheers...JW...
on Open Your Eyes feat Allen V - Guitar by JoyfulWAVE
on heaven is hell by davesmith1983
i like the synth choice in the beginning, seems like the kickclould be EQ'ed somewhat better? since it doesnt have any tail-bass further in this track. [around 1:20 and forward]
as for the synths at 2:00 and further, are well mixed :)
and again it does member me of Marco V/Marcel Woods....
well i got nothing more to say here.. the breakdown is awsome so far, and that drop just did it!
mixing could be better at: 4:19
cheers dude :)
And cheers for the review!
on Soulseeker by davesmith1983
so am i.
as for the builds and drops/quality side, nothing wrong with them.
your mixing does remind me of Marco V/Marcel Woods somehow but yea...
great track none the less ;)
cheers: Fav
Thatnks for listening and thanks for reviewing!
on Transmission by bleinweb124
i would use less BPM, wich would make it easier for you to make beats and kicking drops :)
as for the synths; try to stick with your lines, i know it gets repeatetive when using 1 synth or so.. but i think a maximum of 2/3 synths would do it. [just my opinion]
quality-side: nothing wrong with it..
keep it up dude ;)
on Into The Light Feat Eshar by Salkizar
great use of effects, and a thrilling bass ^^
really like it!
Fav