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TimmYmarionette

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Deventer, Netherlands
Joined : 14th May 2010 - 15 years ago
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TimmYmarionette has posted 46 comments on other peoples tracks.

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TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 2nd Oct 2012 14:19 - 13 years ago

on New Life by beerling1970
Really REALLY sharp and wonderfull piece, keeps me moving alright.
how long have you been doing this?
i read you only started doing music around 2011.. but i cant believe you did now can i?
Lol at Mosaic. comments like that are a disgrace to me, its ugly and stupid to actually explain it sounds like his own songs..
in general his point is; all his music sounds like this.. that must be boring.. is it not? lol. kinda ironic..
and lame to get attention like tru someone else. just comment about the music and what needs to be done better.

anyways, even if this is a copy or not, i dont care that much since people always try to put it in another box or another KEY or whatever. its original to me and thats all that matters right?

my only dislike is the mixing, like mixing from point A to B if you get me.
it means allot to me if a song is mixed well, and blends really smoothly.
i hope you can improve this skill as long as your doing music.
take care now! and have a nice one :)
beerling1970
beerling1970 replied 3rd Oct 2012 - 13 years ago
thank you for your comment and your pointers will be noted too,yes i have only been doing this nearly a year and my mate who was kind enough to share his software was very shocked of how quick i was learning,i am still a learner but GOOD comments are what make me better.
thank you again TimmYmarionette for your kind words.:)
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 8th Sep 2012 20:33 - 13 years ago

on Legacy by LoopnFLlover
Again. a techno-ish song ;)
tho you are getting more into it.
i myself have been working with FL for over 4 years now.
and really if your getting used to it its soo much easier.
you just need to 'find' a proper way of composing and creating. and find your style in the music you want to create.

the song itsself represents a fresh young look of how you are improving. cant tell you really more so. sorry for my lack of, sence, and input.
just keep going and you will eventually reach your goal.
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 8th Sep 2012 20:27 - 13 years ago

on The Elements by LoopnFLlover
Not really a trancy song, tho i see you are a starter (just got FL -a year ago) and your getting the hang of it.
thats what im tasting ;)
its sounds more like a techno-ish song.
and for a metal head (if thats correct) -im sorry if you feel attacked by me- but thats just my guess ;)
if im wrong... im wrong..
gonna check out some more.
LoopnFLlover
LoopnFLlover replied 8th Sep 2012 - 13 years ago
Yeah, I'm bad with genre labeling. This was my second song I ever made. I made it within 2 weeks of getting FL Studio and not know what the heck even half of the stuff was, but was pleased with how it turned out. I am STILL new to FL as I quit using it for 7 months but having a blast experimenting and sharing things that I and some others may enjoy. I don't feel attacked by you. We comment here to help each other, right?
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 6th Aug 2012 19:37 - 13 years ago

on Syndust - Samoa - Original Mix by Leo2789
Hey Leo! its been some time since we've had a little chatter lol.
but hey this track is totally awsome!
tho i do think your intro is kinda repetitive.
you should try to change or add something around the 2 minute mark.
in short; something else got my attention instead of your song.

but along that this track is pure magic!
reminds me of oldskool trance (THE best trance)
its a shame there isnt much left of this style in trance.
makes me sad.
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 4th Jun 2012 08:45 - 13 years ago

on LX Leo - Emotions - Original Mix by Leo2789
ahwow!

your getting into proglifting :D
which is my favorite genre btw.

this is a wonderfull track man!
tho i would love to hear a cutoff effect
on the pad in the beginning of the song.
so you get that building effect aswell.

the breakdown isnt perfect, BUT
the panflute makes it perfect again lol.
the "open Hi Hat" could use some EQ aswell,
by lowering cutting the low ends. ;)

thats probably all lol.
nice track man! love it :)
Leo2789
Leo2789 replied 4th Jun 2012 - 13 years ago
Hey Timmy, i'm glad you liked it =)
It's funny because i was listening to it yesterday and today, and i too felt i should have played around with the strings xD
About th hats, i think they're pretty good, all freq below 500Hz are cut... I might change the pluck melody as well, the more i listen to it the ''wrongrer'' it sounds lol
But as i said in the description, this is only 98% done, it still lacks the final tune ups ;)
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 20th May 2012 15:33 - 13 years ago

on Ear Bleed by visionarysoundsystem
Finally some beatz :D
this is ALMOST outstanding electrohouse with a small dirty touch.
like the vibe going on,
and earbleed? seriously? :)
enjoyed this one sir!
keep the vibe's up
visionarysoundsystem
visionarysoundsystem replied 20th May 2012 - 13 years ago
Hey Timmy thanx so much for your kind words my friend. I really appreciate them. The title came from my Wife lol. Again, I cannot thank you enough for taking time to listen to one of my tracks.
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 5th Mar 2012 11:48 - 13 years ago

on The Melodic Sequence by PiiiE
smashing piano!
wonderfull melodics.
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 5th Mar 2012 11:45 - 13 years ago

on Darkness by Thunderpuss
interesting blend!
really like those chords :)
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 1st Mar 2012 11:52 - 13 years ago

on Minds Eye V2 by StephenPotter
once again,
great atmos, its relaxing.
however the bongo's you added are offkey somehow..
try to do something with them pitch knob(s).
its a ffing sh*t job to do, but if you get them right it feels so much more natural rather then just "alright lets add some bongo's"
if you get what i mean that is..

anyways, still a great job man i look forward hearing more from you!
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 1st Jul 2011 10:32 - 14 years ago

on LX Leo - Bleed - LX Leos Sunset Radio Edit by Leo2789
While listening to the original something came to me.. idk what it should be but it felt really peacefully.

and so is this remix of yours leo!
this remix really adds something Dmau5 just hasnt done :)

great great job man love it :3

if you keep this tempo up youll be noticed in no-time my frnd.
Leo2789
Leo2789 replied Unknown
Thnx dude =)
I'm flattered you really think i added something more to it =)
Your words mean a lot to me! =D
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 13th May 2011 17:32 - 14 years ago

on Sounds of water by Andrey
Now whats better then listening to REAL uplifting trance.
nothing will describe it.

i would like to say:
You've done an excellent job, i like every beat, every sound and every pulse this beauty breaths.
Well done!
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 12th May 2011 12:31 - 14 years ago

on Partycrasher by Dembow
Heey! ik zag dat je mij al een leuk reviewtje gaf dus laat ik er eens 1 terug doen.

dit is zeker wel 1 van je beste hoor, niet verkeerd ik denk dat het makkelijk gedraaid kan worden op clubs met house / elektro music enz

alleen baart het structuur me een een beetje zorgen met mixen enzo..
je hebt net als sergio zei 4 / 8 / 16 / 32 en zelfs 64(wat niet vaak voorkomt)
bij house is het vaak 4 of 8.
en met FL is het heel gemakkelijk bij te houden omdat elke 4 bars een verschil van kleur heeft in de Playlist..

als ik praat over 8 bars zijn dat 2 patterns en is het structuur dus 8 bit.
praat ik over 4 bars is het 1 pattern en de structuur 4 :) easy as that..

als je daar de beat en overgangen een beetje op aanpast zul je zien dat je structuur bijv door de hele song 4 of 8 is,
en is het voor dj's beter in te mixen of uit te mixen.
dus dj vriendelijk >.<

tuurlijk zal je wel een keertje kunnen afwijken van het patroon, maar dan zou ik het niet in het begin of aan het eind doen.

nouja,
ik wens je veel succes met je volgende projects :) ik hoop dat mijn kennis je een beetje heeft gemotiveerd of iets wijzer heeft gemaakt >.<

Later
Dembow
Dembow replied Unknown
wow, echt super erg bedankt voor deze review. Want nu snap ik het eindelijk van die structuur! :) ik heb geprobeerd het op internet op te zoeken maar ik vond niks. Dus ben je erg dankbaar. Ik ben nu met virtual dj bezig, en toen ik dus met partycrasher aan het mixen was, vond ik het ook een erg moeilijk nummer. Dus toen begon ik het al een beetje te snappen. Maar als het goed is, zijn mijn andere 2 nummers wel een beetje dj vriendelijk. Dat zijn hallucination en chill du bill. Die heb ik wel anders gemaakt dan hoe ik partycrasher heb gemaakt. Maar in ieder geval bedankt!
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 10th Mar 2011 15:24 - 14 years ago

on Synth Overload by ToxicVoltage
Hey there!
long time, tho could you tell me what synth that is at the start??
i'd like to know bc its just so awsome!!
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 7th Mar 2011 08:49 - 14 years ago

on Covered the sky by Andrey
once again, if you have a sloppy or downsized mood, this is an awsome piece to listen to.
it cheers up and gives energy on the otherhand too.
well done!
Faved,

SkyTrance
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 7th Mar 2011 08:44 - 14 years ago

on At the end of the earth by Andrey
This.. is a wonderfull piece of art, tho it reminds me of
'4 Strings - take me away'

must have been your inspiration source..
anyways, keep up the awsome work you do :)
mainly, making trance.
cheers, faved, downloaded.

SKyTrance
__

Perhaps, you and i didnt fully understood each other..
4 Strings is also a music producers, and has a song named take me away. you should listen to it.
Andrey
Andrey replied Unknown
of thanks for the comment - yes there are 4 strings:) glad that the likes:)
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 22nd Feb 2011 08:28 - 14 years ago

on I Try by CrissNickssonn
some bass(low) would be welcome :)
all the rest is superb!

keep it up ;)
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 22nd Feb 2011 08:07 - 14 years ago

on TCB Project-Kamari (original mix) by TCBPROJECT
Finally a fcking decent trance track.. :D
it really takes long to find one on this site,
but when youve found one, its just epic as heaven!

really really great job!
id love to hear more stuff like this.

greatz from the netherlands
-Timo / SkyTrance
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 13th Feb 2011 10:29 - 14 years ago

on Activate (good vertion) by rsmisch
what we / i ment abt the compression isnt tight enough means that theres not much compression going on at that certain moment.

so there's something with the settings there, and by my guess its the release or ratio, keep the ratio between 3:1 and 6:1
while the release shouldnt be higher then 540 ms.

keep it up ;)
rsmisch
rsmisch replied Unknown
yes thinks for the information man hoop you listen to my new music in the future and i hoop you can say on that moment "its good or somting like that.
greetz From Belgum,
Greetz DJ RV-Tex
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 12th Feb 2011 20:17 - 14 years ago

on Explosion by joell
Finally after a long time searching on this site at the trance section.. we've found 'trance'

so far its pretty good, but the notes and combinations of them could be stronger in our opinion.

the klimax is very cool!
tho the nexus bass could be lowered 1 octave.
and the synth you used there doesnt really fit the rest of you track/promo.

We hope you could do something with our review.
and we look forward to the full edit.
gl!
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 12th Feb 2011 20:05 - 14 years ago

on Activate (good vertion) by rsmisch
The first thing we noticed is the old compression.. or its just not tight enough.

tho, this started like a trance track, yet all the sounds you let flow in arent really good...
the vocal doesnt fit either, its also false.

try to do something with this.
gl
rsmisch
rsmisch replied Unknown
ok thinks for the tip and what do you mean about its not tight enough do you mean it must make more compression or wath do you mean
thinks for the review and i hoop you can give me some more tips in the future

Greetz DJ RV-Tex
TimmYmarionette
the title reminds of; Arnej - The Strings That Bind Us
which is a very good track!

anyways this is a pretty decent song,
it relaxed, and yet it doesnt.
tho the square sound could be better .. its a bit harsh for me.
and the FXes could be different imo.. or just lower the volume of them.

well.. thats abt it i guess,
keep it up :)

-SkyTrance
Halonmusic
Halonmusic replied Unknown
I got the inspiration for the tracktitle from that very track by Arnej, and Arnej inspires me alot. I appriciate your comment. The square sound,might be a bit harsh to you, i dont think so, but its a matter of hearing and taste i guess. The FX'es will not be changed, but i might lower the volumes on them a bit. This track though needs some mastering an final mixing, i only uploaded this mix here for you and all the members on Looperman for your enjoying and i like to get feedback and comments on my tracks and projects, i never upload the final mastered mixes here, but might do in the future. Bu anyways thx for the comment, Cheers.

Halon.
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 7th Feb 2011 10:46 - 14 years ago

on Junai by ToxicVoltage
pretty good, once again, a classical feel on it :)
my only concerns are the clap + ride.. could be lowered in volume.
while the lead melody could get some more volume.

sorry for being a d!ck here.. but like i said in my other reviews to you, i always try to give a honest review.
goodluck! :)

-Timo
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 7th Feb 2011 10:39 - 14 years ago

on LX Leo - Farewell - Original Mix by Leo2789
Get rid of that trancy bassline,
it makes you compose a half house and trance song xD

really im not kidding, try to make the bassline housy'er,
more pumping instead of rolling.
the kick seems good, the chords(sound) could be better ..
but i assume this is the first time for you so i wont a complete @ss on that.. im just saying it could be better :)
perhaps its bc u are using garageband?? and are limited by that??
[correct me if im wrong]

but still, this is pretty good mate :)
i can enjoy this on full potential ^^
Leo2789
Leo2789 replied Unknown
Well that's kinda the point... it's supposed to be a trancey House song xD
And yes i use garageband, that's why sometimes i can't get the exact sound i want, and as i can't afford any other software i'm stuck with it for now =S

Thnx for reviewing =)
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 7th Feb 2011 10:28 - 14 years ago

on Redemption by ToxicVoltage
It has good potential, but when your making a trance track make sure to master it with compression/EQ stuff ect ect.
normally i dont really like this other side of trance,
its way to happy and uplifting for me xD

and especially; the notes youve taken are way to high for me.
so i hope you can respect my honest opinion here.
its not bad, but i cant tell its good either :)

perhaps, this is old.. but still,
a usefull review is what i always try to give.

-Timo
TimmYmarionette
TimmYmarionette 7th Feb 2011 10:21 - 14 years ago

on WIP(Teaser) by ToxicVoltage
this sounds pretty classical, with some futuristic sounds in it.
i can hear your using nexus,
[correct me if im wrong]
and im hear to review so..

if you take a sound try to layer it with another :)
it makes it hard for the people to hear where the sound is taken from.

i also love the little bleepy sounds tru the 1 min WiP.
this is pretty much trance i like.
not much to say anymore as im a guy spending allot of words right now xD

i hope to hear some more from you like this
and ill make sure to search some tracks troughout your profile.
Thanks for the small WiP.

-Timo
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