Welcome back
I hope to hear more from you because this sounds very good.
The beat is great but the voice makes it complete.
Sounds very nice to listen to.
Hi
I also started listening to the original first.
She has a beautiful voice but only uses guitar.
Personally, I find it quite boring.
But you have made a very nice cover of it with beautiful music that makes listening more pleasant.
That's what I would recommend, watch her vid first then check out my version. Here is the studio version of this song, there is quite a bit of instrumentation, to me has a gypsy or bohemian feel to it. I love it, blew me away as a 6 or 7 year old, same as her other hits.
We zijn weer terug en de eerste track die ik hier beluister is van jou.
Je probeerde iets uit en kijk hoe geweldig het is geworden.
Ik beluister het niet op de manier als Manuela met haar ervaring maar in mijn oren klinkt het geweldig.
Ik vind trouwens de outro ook helemaal geweldig.
Je stem klinkt goed en duidelijk.
De tekst moet ik nog even vertalen maar voor dit geheel een groot compliment.
De tekst is een soort "stream of consciousness" idee. Het is niet een duidelijk verhaal maar flarden die je een beeld geven dat je zelf mag invullen.
Zoals de song zelf zegt, de wolken verzamelen zich buiten de rand van het schilderij. Je kan het alleen zien en alleen het verhaal begrijpen en de film volgen als je een paar stappen terug doet en ziet wat je niet ziet.
Thank you so much for your explanation and help.
This weekend I want to get my desktop ready for use again and I will try to get my midi right and see what nice things I can download from the links you sent me.
I mistook your email for advertising and didn't open it lol
Of course I don't mind if you email me.
I really appreciate that you think of me and want to help.
We are the fruitylopers and started almost at the same time .
And we have seen each other grow
with our blunders and insecurities..
Although you always had more courage than me, your perseverance has motivated me to show a little more courage.
Thanks Paul
thanks Rita if i can help i always will, and when it comes to us amateurs sharing especially free stuff is a big help most of us don't make money so not having to pay for stuff appeals, if i was making from music I'd buy the best i could, the free links are good enough, ive spent enough anyway, ive got a decent set up now to be fair. if you ever need help on something just ask, I'll always help as i would for anyone
ive got a couple of keyboards just never had them out for ages.
i sent you a private mail few days ago, might be in spam or old account just some pointers and some really good freebies with links. giving back, your a good friend and FL user :))
as for your issue i can suggest a cheap, and cheap being free and decent solution.
open FL open your sampler and add fruity keys or close grand from your instrument pack, drag and drop it on to your sampler. highlight the typing keyboard first one after song position button, right click it and choose minor natural + chords, then use your letter and number keys as your piano nice sound and no delay. you can use them to play any instrument, vst or plugin. and guess what FL is always recording you, even if your just messing and you come up with a little melody and can't remember what you pressed, press tools tab press dump to score log you can choose up to 30 mins, press it then open your piano rack and its all nicely placed in there for you, all the notes if you made a mistake you can change the midi too bingo your a pianist :))
Hi Paul.
This one is special
You're a really good songwriter.
You made me silent with your text.
It is the truth for many.
So beautiful how you say: I know you scared, I'm scared too.
Hats off to you again.
thanks Rita im really proud of this work, even if only one person that suffers with mental illness takes something from listening i will have achieved my goal. i was so scared, firstly accepting something was wrong then coming out and saying it. now look at me, i openly promote it. i know it starts with you first, then, and only then can you tackle how your going to make things change to suit you, take ownership of it then your in control
Hahahaha Chris!!!
I didd translate it.
Wow I'm laughing myself to death
The text makes no sense when I translate it into Dutch.
I read Zwarte Piet
of Sinterklaas, the Dutch children's festival on December 5.
I also read VAT, which has to do with sales tax for us.
This is so funny
but because of your beautiful voice it makes absolutely no difference what you sing about.
that's funny! My daughter the other day in the car, started randomly singing the words on her little toy fluffy dog. Stuff like - polyester, do not dry clean, hand wash, made in china....It sounded great I wanted to use it for something lol
Hey Baobou.
Gezien mijn reactie destijds vond ik het toen al een goeie track al vond je het zelf een zooitje.
Ik kan mij niet meer herinneren wat het verschil is met toen maar in ieder geval is het een goed nummer die met goeie stem gezongen is .
Geintje (heb ik misschien wel es verteld): het Griekse woord "zooi" is "leven". Dus als zij zeggen "that's life", dan zeggen wij "what a mess" ;)
In dit geval zeg ik... ayto einai h zoi. Zo gaat het nou eenmaal met sommige tracks ;)
Beautiful!!
And yes Manuela is right...the Doors.
The music and everything is really well put together into a killer beat and your voice is amazing here.
A track to be proud of.
Shit I'm only just getting started lol. Apart from the cymbals the beat was two loops smushed together. I liked the syncopation and that snare hit on the second beat every couple of bars sounded good to me. Made it kind of lollop along. Let's see what your google translator makes of some of those words!!
You can hear that the kick is off beat
but still it doesn't bother.
Very different from when I first started and i made a lot off beat and quite disturbing lol
Its a good relaxing beat.
Hi Chris im back.
Nice sound.
uhhhmmm you try to to hypnotize us uhmmm ??
I hear a sound that sounds like a mean laugh like you got us and now you can make us do whatever you want lol
About that one track of mine.
I just can't find it anymore.
I'm afraid I put it on my external drive and I can no longer open all the tracks on there.
Not even if I put them back on my PC.
Then you will have to use the MP3.
Sorry.
You are in my power, you will do exactly as I say lol. Was thinking to make another just so I had the chance to call it Pleasant Fucker ha.
No worries about that track, I had a feeling you wouldn't be able to find it. Will see what happens and if I find time or inspiration. Thanks for trying.
Hi Alex.
Im agree with Manuela.
I wish i can hear your voice better because your voice sounds realy cool on this beat.
I read that you were experimenting with the bass.
Maybe it is an idea to turn the bass down a bit to hear your voice better?
Other than that it sounds very good.
Dank je wel! Ik begon in dit geval met te drummen, terwijl ik zat te drummen voelde ik de accoorden, toen ik de accoorden speelde wist ik de melodie en toen ik de melodie zong kwamen de woorden ook heel natuurlijk... soms komt het allemaal wat makkelijker dan andere keren ;)
Dit is inderdaad een heel mooi nummer.
De tekst raakt zeker wel en ik denk dat velen hem voelen want bijna iedereen heeft wel iets meegemaakt op dat gebied.
Muziek is ook heel mooi.
Heel goed gedaan baobou!!
Well Shaman...i like it!!!
It could be my simple headphone but i think the volume of your voice is ok but im agree with Seelengold about the gurgling of the liquid. I would leave it away.
on anything and everything by SANDYMBEATS
I hope to hear more from you because this sounds very good.
The beat is great but the voice makes it complete.
Sounds very nice to listen to.
on Hard Drill Beat - Soul by czbeats
I like the deep bassline and kicks.
That part at 1:00 -1:18 is also very well done.
The voices fit perfectly.
on Look What Theyve Done To My Song by theHumps
I also started listening to the original first.
She has a beautiful voice but only uses guitar.
Personally, I find it quite boring.
But you have made a very nice cover of it with beautiful music that makes listening more pleasant.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iL9APRcYTGE
Thanks
Wayne
on EP2 - Clouds are gathering outside by BaoBou
Je probeerde iets uit en kijk hoe geweldig het is geworden.
Ik beluister het niet op de manier als Manuela met haar ervaring maar in mijn oren klinkt het geweldig.
Ik vind trouwens de outro ook helemaal geweldig.
Je stem klinkt goed en duidelijk.
De tekst moet ik nog even vertalen maar voor dit geheel een groot compliment.
De tekst is een soort "stream of consciousness" idee. Het is niet een duidelijk verhaal maar flarden die je een beeld geven dat je zelf mag invullen.
Zoals de song zelf zegt, de wolken verzamelen zich buiten de rand van het schilderij. Je kan het alleen zien en alleen het verhaal begrijpen en de film volgen als je een paar stappen terug doet en ziet wat je niet ziet.
Als je begrijpt wat ik bedoel :)
on Look At You by dimestop
This weekend I want to get my desktop ready for use again and I will try to get my midi right and see what nice things I can download from the links you sent me.
I mistook your email for advertising and didn't open it lol
Of course I don't mind if you email me.
I really appreciate that you think of me and want to help.
We are the fruitylopers and started almost at the same time .
And we have seen each other grow
with our blunders and insecurities..
Although you always had more courage than me, your perseverance has motivated me to show a little more courage.
Thanks Paul
on Look At You by dimestop
Nice that you playing a keyboard.
I have 1 but there is a delay when i touch the keys.
So i dont use it.
i sent you a private mail few days ago, might be in spam or old account just some pointers and some really good freebies with links. giving back, your a good friend and FL user :))
as for your issue i can suggest a cheap, and cheap being free and decent solution.
open FL open your sampler and add fruity keys or close grand from your instrument pack, drag and drop it on to your sampler. highlight the typing keyboard first one after song position button, right click it and choose minor natural + chords, then use your letter and number keys as your piano nice sound and no delay. you can use them to play any instrument, vst or plugin. and guess what FL is always recording you, even if your just messing and you come up with a little melody and can't remember what you pressed, press tools tab press dump to score log you can choose up to 30 mins, press it then open your piano rack and its all nicely placed in there for you, all the notes if you made a mistake you can change the midi too bingo your a pianist :))
on Look At You by dimestop
This one is special
You're a really good songwriter.
You made me silent with your text.
It is the truth for many.
So beautiful how you say: I know you scared, I'm scared too.
Hats off to you again.
on Black Peter by Zootman
I didd translate it.
Wow I'm laughing myself to death
The text makes no sense when I translate it into Dutch.
I read Zwarte Piet
of Sinterklaas, the Dutch children's festival on December 5.
I also read VAT, which has to do with sales tax for us.
This is so funny
but because of your beautiful voice it makes absolutely no difference what you sing about.
on 3 - Birds are singing - September update by BaoBou
Gezien mijn reactie destijds vond ik het toen al een goeie track al vond je het zelf een zooitje.
Ik kan mij niet meer herinneren wat het verschil is met toen maar in ieder geval is het een goed nummer die met goeie stem gezongen is .
Groetjes,
Rita
Geintje (heb ik misschien wel es verteld): het Griekse woord "zooi" is "leven". Dus als zij zeggen "that's life", dan zeggen wij "what a mess" ;)
In dit geval zeg ik... ayto einai h zoi. Zo gaat het nou eenmaal met sommige tracks ;)
on Black Peter by Zootman
And yes Manuela is right...the Doors.
The music and everything is really well put together into a killer beat and your voice is amazing here.
A track to be proud of.
Greetings Rita
on Grazie der schoenen Seele by Seelengold
This is very beautiful, serene and pure.
I can see them with those beautiful dresses dancing courteously with the gallant men.
thank you for hearing and commenting.
What about your singing?? I dont hear anything...
Kind regards to the Netherlands
Seelengold
on Making Something Out of Your Nothing Instro by dlo40831
but still it doesn't bother.
Very different from when I first started and i made a lot off beat and quite disturbing lol
Its a good relaxing beat.
on lil peep type beat by randalld
and a bit sad but very well done.
on Catch the drift by ConeCapone
Your first??
You did that very well.
My compliments.
But hey...don't go too fast otherwise I'll get a big inferiority complex lol
on Pheasant Plucker by Zootman
Nice sound.
uhhhmmm you try to to hypnotize us uhmmm ??
I hear a sound that sounds like a mean laugh like you got us and now you can make us do whatever you want lol
About that one track of mine.
I just can't find it anymore.
I'm afraid I put it on my external drive and I can no longer open all the tracks on there.
Not even if I put them back on my PC.
Then you will have to use the MP3.
Sorry.
No worries about that track, I had a feeling you wouldn't be able to find it. Will see what happens and if I find time or inspiration. Thanks for trying.
on there are things below by Shaman77
Im agree with Manuela.
I wish i can hear your voice better because your voice sounds realy cool on this beat.
I read that you were experimenting with the bass.
Maybe it is an idea to turn the bass down a bit to hear your voice better?
Other than that it sounds very good.
on BEAT NUMBER 541 by djphildrummin
You will bounce out of the car with this track lol
Very well done.
on STEP IT OFF by T576
I wasn't on LM for a while and then I come back and I only hear good tracks.
This one is definitely one of them!!
on 4-19 - The Key To My Heart by BaoBou
Als dit even een test is dan is het wel een fcking goede test lol.
Je stem klinkt heel goed op deze beat.
Goed gedaan hoor!!
on 4-7 - Never want to see you again by BaoBou
De tekst raakt zeker wel en ik denk dat velen hem voelen want bijna iedereen heeft wel iets meegemaakt op dat gebied.
Muziek is ook heel mooi.
Heel goed gedaan baobou!!
Detail, alleen voor jou ;) deze is ook voor mijn dochter.
on Barbie Ferrari by ClickbaitCabaret
This is amazing good .
wow!!
on I only have stupid jokes by Shaman77
It could be my simple headphone but i think the volume of your voice is ok but im agree with Seelengold about the gurgling of the liquid. I would leave it away.
on spits on humanity your lonely night by Shaman77
Im proud you choose my track...thanx.
And also great lyrics.
on iris x by xstokes
I love the intro and im so suprised what is coming after that.
Great mix of calm and wild together.
on I always said that fate is a game by Shaman77
You didd a great job on it.
It was a pleasure to listen to.