This track is so beautiful.
This deserves the best voice.
A male and female duo would be nice
Too bad I can't sing but there are plenty of good singers here.
Good luck !!
We'll see. I have a male singer that might have the right idea. I've worked with him before. We'll see if he's got what it takes for this track though. :-)
I think if you edit this track it will definitely be a nice track.
You have a good and clear voice.
There is a bass hum that is quite annoying to be honest.
I'd remove that if I were you.
Nicely constructed.
Not too boom boom and pleasant to listen to
The 13 years have done you good to get to this.
let me think .. uhmmm im doing this for 3 years now so I should go another 10 years and then I'll be 68 hahahaha
I can already see myself sitting with my daw in the retirement home lol
Hey Pseudo
You put this drums ande the rest really nicely together.
Hats off.
The vocal is also very nice.
I can see you growing and growing but hey...don't go too fast or I'll get such an inferiority complex lol
Yo Michael im backkkkkkk!! lol
So is this the neighbour who need to hear all your tracks and and then decided to join?
Well you 2 didd a great job together.
Hi Princess, to answer your question Diego composes the base of the song on acoustic guitar, and I transform his track according to his tastes ... not always easy !
Michael
wow Paul the slim shady!!
This one is the best.
The vocal fits perfect and the lyrics is great.
1 thing makes me laugh...every lady wants my baby.
But i mean it Paul...you come so far because you had guts.
Im so proud on you.
yes young lady, i believe im the slim shady,
maybe the ladies dont want my babies
but i still drive em crazy, im great me
i just can't stop Rita :))
thanks for stopping my favourite spice girl, i put a lot of work into the lyric on this, the music was sic, i wanted to highlight the vocal performance 6 mins is a long time to rap constant and keep it fresh, i was really pleased with the overlays spacing and the clarity, i was pleased how it all sat together like it should be there, you know what i mean, and i agree that its one of my best. thankyou for your continued support mrs you are a true friend and a great artist
I don't quite understand what you mean. But as I understand it now, do you still find my music too incoherent? It must be....my son says it more often lol. To learn everything from 0 to this level in 3 years not easy at my age. In addition, I have my own style and I cannot be placed in the regular box that I consciously do not want. Everyone has their own taste and style. If you don't like it, it might indeed be better to say nothing. There are also people here on LM who only comment to put someone down but will never respond positively to the better tracks. Thank you for finally giving a replay. Greetings, Rita
Your description made me laugh.
You must have been hungry lol.
This track is indeed something different from what we are used to from you, but in a very positive way.
The music is great and also vocals are great and fit in perfectly.
Very well done Jynxz!!
The Female Vocal laugh@35sec. is the same vocal you've been
commenting on for about 2 or 3 yrs. I manage to fit it into every track I write. I really hadn't given Vocals much though until you commented on the Vocals way back then. Now sometimes the Vocals take over the track and I end up re-writing the music behind the Vocals, even when the track started out with them as just accents.
Thank you for stopping by and giving this track(hope it didn't wake you this time)a listen kind comments and especially the Fave.
I totally understand how frustrating it is.
I prefer not to use ready-made basslines and loops and try to do as much as possible myself.
The first and last bassline I made by stretching a bass in different lengths and using the pitch.
I sometimes try it with a synth by making a tone very dark.
With youtube I always have the problem that they speak english which is not my strong point and they explain everything so quickly.
Must be my age that I don't pick it up that quickly lol
How you tried it is actually algebra to me.
I'm completely free of the rules of music hahaha.
I do and try what comes to mind and if it sounds good then I'm happy .
That's why I often refer to my tracks as the Rita bounce genre lol.
I've just been into music for 3 years.
You can tell from your track that you have much more experience.
In any case, I think your bassline turned out well.
But we ourselves think it can always be better, right?
Greetings Rita
Being "free of the rules of music" isn't necessarily a bad way to be. I read somewhere that Stevie Nicks was advised not to learn about music formally because it might ruin her innate ability to create great songs. Her talent is instinctive. Not sure if that's really the right way to express it, but I think you will understand the meaning.
Most of the time, I have no idea what chords I'm really playing when I'm working up a sequence. And, apparently in one of my older tracks posted here, I did a key change in the track, but was quite unaware that I'd done it. One of the more accomplished musicians here on Looperman commented on it! I was quite surprised. :)
on Shimmer - Contest Demo by InitiumMusic
This deserves the best voice.
A male and female duo would be nice
Too bad I can't sing but there are plenty of good singers here.
Good luck !!
Thank you for the praise!
on need a friend by randalld
You have a good and clear voice.
There is a bass hum that is quite annoying to be honest.
I'd remove that if I were you.
on IN THE RAIN by BeatMaker4real
You have outdone yourself.
This one is really really good!!!
on Street Business by ShadowTrait
on Cogito Ergo Sum by Gixxie
Nice work!!
on Ashley Zeal All I Want Dubjoka Remix by dubjoka
I really like the rhythm of the beat and the vocal fits perfectly
on Dead In the River by theHumps
That music is so beautiful and your voice...just wow!!
I have nothing else to say then wow!!
Thanks Rita, glad you liked it!
Wayne
on your no longer here now by dimestop
This track is so emotional.
The beat is beautiful.
You didd a great job again mister.
on And Then She Left Me Again by ApolloForce
Not too boom boom and pleasant to listen to
The 13 years have done you good to get to this.
let me think .. uhmmm im doing this for 3 years now so I should go another 10 years and then I'll be 68 hahahaha
I can already see myself sitting with my daw in the retirement home lol
on NUMB - T2 ft Snake and Alex Marie Brinkley by TRE24
I love the vocal ,lyrics and the woman vocal.
The beat is cool and perfect with it.
She is definitely on top of her game.
I appreciate the listen.
-T2
on My Love - Left on the last bus by pseudoble
You put this drums ande the rest really nicely together.
Hats off.
The vocal is also very nice.
I can see you growing and growing but hey...don't go too fast or I'll get such an inferiority complex lol
: )
on from city to city by Shaman77
I like the music that you didd added.
Good vocal and lyrics
Great work!!
on Grabbing Smoke by Zootman
I realy like that soft vocal in it.
The beat is beautiful and it gives me some peaceful feeling.
on Cash Freestyle by ShinkieMaz
on Lords of the Plains by OMaille
on Grafezzy 1stVictory by DripFeeD
I like Grafezzy and i think it fits good on your beat.
on sigo las signales by phantomproduction
So is this the neighbour who need to hear all your tracks and and then decided to join?
Well you 2 didd a great job together.
Michael
on Leaky outfit by Shaman77
I think you didd a great job if you can sing or do a spoken word on this track.
on WAITING FOR ME by BeatMaker4real
Enjoy your day.
on theres gonna be murder by dimestop
This one is the best.
The vocal fits perfect and the lyrics is great.
1 thing makes me laugh...every lady wants my baby.
But i mean it Paul...you come so far because you had guts.
Im so proud on you.
maybe the ladies dont want my babies
but i still drive em crazy, im great me
i just can't stop Rita :))
thanks for stopping my favourite spice girl, i put a lot of work into the lyric on this, the music was sic, i wanted to highlight the vocal performance 6 mins is a long time to rap constant and keep it fresh, i was really pleased with the overlays spacing and the clarity, i was pleased how it all sat together like it should be there, you know what i mean, and i agree that its one of my best. thankyou for your continued support mrs you are a true friend and a great artist
on Chad Boseman By EazyBeatz1250 by BeatzEazy0521
on Off This-Tigercrane by BMFTP
You made a very nice track here.
Great beat and rap!!
Well done you and your nephew.
on Sweet and Sour Sauce by Jynxz
You must have been hungry lol.
This track is indeed something different from what we are used to from you, but in a very positive way.
The music is great and also vocals are great and fit in perfectly.
Very well done Jynxz!!
The Female Vocal laugh@35sec. is the same vocal you've been
commenting on for about 2 or 3 yrs. I manage to fit it into every track I write. I really hadn't given Vocals much though until you commented on the Vocals way back then. Now sometimes the Vocals take over the track and I end up re-writing the music behind the Vocals, even when the track started out with them as just accents.
Thank you for stopping by and giving this track(hope it didn't wake you this time)a listen kind comments and especially the Fave.
vrede...
on I Cant Lose by EricMilligan
I prefer not to use ready-made basslines and loops and try to do as much as possible myself.
The first and last bassline I made by stretching a bass in different lengths and using the pitch.
I sometimes try it with a synth by making a tone very dark.
With youtube I always have the problem that they speak english which is not my strong point and they explain everything so quickly.
Must be my age that I don't pick it up that quickly lol
How you tried it is actually algebra to me.
I'm completely free of the rules of music hahaha.
I do and try what comes to mind and if it sounds good then I'm happy .
That's why I often refer to my tracks as the Rita bounce genre lol.
I've just been into music for 3 years.
You can tell from your track that you have much more experience.
In any case, I think your bassline turned out well.
But we ourselves think it can always be better, right?
Greetings Rita
Being "free of the rules of music" isn't necessarily a bad way to be. I read somewhere that Stevie Nicks was advised not to learn about music formally because it might ruin her innate ability to create great songs. Her talent is instinctive. Not sure if that's really the right way to express it, but I think you will understand the meaning.
Most of the time, I have no idea what chords I'm really playing when I'm working up a sequence. And, apparently in one of my older tracks posted here, I did a key change in the track, but was quite unaware that I'd done it. One of the more accomplished musicians here on Looperman commented on it! I was quite surprised. :)
Eric
on How Long Has this been going on by 2nick8
you get better and better!!
I love your voice!!