Thank you. You can read a song with an ease that can only be a great composer ... and also one of my favorites. By the way:
Lyrics:
Bitter sadness, feeling the night of the first day,
has come to share my loneliness and melancholy.
That has come tonight without advance warning.
On the back!A betrayal! So she has stabbed me.
With steel as cold as ice is its soul.
Leaving all empty, with a frozen calm.
Only memories remain, only isolated clouds.
What will this darkness that I can not see anything?
What I feel, what I feel. What I want I do not want.
What I see what I see, and I think ... I do think.
And here alone, hidden in this vast plain
under a sky with a star. A star? Yes, there is one.
But their light is so weak that it cover my bitterness.
Treacherous and bloody night. Go away already.
Night dark and lifeless. Go away already.
Runs off of my life. Go with her and her coldness.
This night is so raw and it's so damn long.
she haunts me with doubts, that takes me away, she isolated me.
Only the hope of future aurora
makes me close my eyes and shout to the traitor:
"I do not see you, I do not know if you are, because when you close your eyes, I did not felt.
I know I see darkness, but this darkness is mine. "
Treacherous and bloody night. Go away already.
Night dark and lifeless. Go away already.
Runs off of my life. Go with her and her coldness.
Rei, you blow me away. You've surprised me yet again and I like it. That's what great artists do – give something unexpected, still excellently performed. Now where's that fav button?
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Hi Randy. Again I'm totally amazed over the full and wonderful rich sound you crank out of those Telecasters. I just recently got one Telecaster myself and I found that I play it more than my old banged up strat. Anyway, this is an excellent piece of music with a big, rich sound. A fav for sure.
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Thanks for your very nice review of my classic rock tune. so you also bought a Telecaster! Great. As you can hear, the sound is unique. I used 2 different guitars on this song. One was my 1972 Framus, a 'Les Paul' look-a-like, and then the Telecaster in the middle lead section.
If you would like to hear the vocals that 'Musicizmee' added to it, go to this link below and play it. She didn't add in a lot, as it was more of an experiment is all. But she still sounds great in it, and it adds to it.
Thanks Kikajonjonleprechaun and Spivkurl um kurl? Curling? youtube.com/watch?v=VC6Dap35B_Y honestly i could watch that s#!t for hours...HARD...lol just so u guys know that i am slow, but i DO see these comments all eventually hee hee HARD ALL THE WAY gotta go HARD...curling rules
I've got chills. Your voice and the arrangement is really incredible. Fabulous. I think you're voice has a nice southern country and western flavour (I heard your vocals on Randall's tune) and I just love it.
Once in a while there are songs that makes me a bit envious and wishing I'd written. This is one of those – and it is going straight into my playlist on my phone. Thank you very much for sharing.
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Hi Randall! I've downloaded this track and man, it's short and sweet and becomes even better each time I listen. Thank you for sharing and thanks to muzicizmee4ever – that chorus is so darn good. To me you've one of the best here on looper.
Thanks for your nice comments. The song was short as it was part of a 2-part song I did called 'Country Tyme' on here.
So she sang only on the 1st song that she liked. Her first country song ever. She did very good!
Welcome to Looper. And what an entrance! Really nice work – who need high speed shreds when the only thing that really matters is hitting the right notes with feeling.
Thank you
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Thanks for your nice review and am glad you enjoyed another of my tunes. As for shortness, I almost got it to 3 min. as that is what I shoot for...in case it is ever played on the radio. That seems to be the standard time limit....maybe that has changed?
Some others on different web sites have asked how I get that 'Pinch Harmonics' sound. So here is an easier way to explain it via this video link to YouTube.
Great choice for a first demo. Well done – love the backing vocals. And I partly agree with ratty – this do have cohones but I have to admit that I totally dig genesis...
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Emann, what a great tune, totally indie, lovely riff and chords and sweet guitar lead!
A suggestion: I think the song would improve if you worked the panning a little more the other way around, drums in the middle and spread guitar and bass , making it more "stereo". And easy on the vocals reverb.
It also would be rather cool is you added a tambourine in the chorus, it feels like it's that kind of song.
I hope yo don't take these suggestions the wrong way, the song is a fav.
/pmk
Thank you for taking the time to review and share your knowledge, Kikajon. your advice is always welcome & appreciated. I agree with everything you said and will do it. Only the pan actually is as you said - i think it was a stereo field processor I used that made the placement sound different. i'll also review this. Cheers, jon
This is an excellent track – it really sounds like Farisha sang to your track and not that you built around her voice. That is really hard to achieve and I am very, very impressed.
A fav.
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Once in a while I'm getting impressed to the bone and this is one. With a great song, excellent production and a morrisey-touch voice you can't go wrong. Just wow!
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This is very beautiful. Excellent instrumentation and production. I especially like the sensitive guitar – it sounds like you and the singer are performing in the same room together. Great job.
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on En Blanco y Negro by Vicen
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on La Noche- Collab Kikajon by Vicen
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Lyrics:
Bitter sadness, feeling the night of the first day,
has come to share my loneliness and melancholy.
That has come tonight without advance warning.
On the back!A betrayal! So she has stabbed me.
With steel as cold as ice is its soul.
Leaving all empty, with a frozen calm.
Only memories remain, only isolated clouds.
What will this darkness that I can not see anything?
What I feel, what I feel. What I want I do not want.
What I see what I see, and I think ... I do think.
And here alone, hidden in this vast plain
under a sky with a star. A star? Yes, there is one.
But their light is so weak that it cover my bitterness.
Treacherous and bloody night. Go away already.
Night dark and lifeless. Go away already.
Runs off of my life. Go with her and her coldness.
This night is so raw and it's so damn long.
she haunts me with doubts, that takes me away, she isolated me.
Only the hope of future aurora
makes me close my eyes and shout to the traitor:
"I do not see you, I do not know if you are, because when you close your eyes, I did not felt.
I know I see darkness, but this darkness is mine. "
Treacherous and bloody night. Go away already.
Night dark and lifeless. Go away already.
Runs off of my life. Go with her and her coldness.
on The Sign by xpekt
HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!!
on Runaway by corbinjustin
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on Runaway by corbinjustin
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on Beautiful Maze by xpekt
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on School Days by jfw
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Jamie.
on Lucky Old Sun by haven
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on just the music by rei4real
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peace, rei
on Classic Rock by Randall822
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Thanks for your very nice review of my classic rock tune. so you also bought a Telecaster! Great. As you can hear, the sound is unique. I used 2 different guitars on this song. One was my 1972 Framus, a 'Les Paul' look-a-like, and then the Telecaster in the middle lead section.
If you would like to hear the vocals that 'Musicizmee' added to it, go to this link below and play it. She didn't add in a lot, as it was more of an experiment is all. But she still sounds great in it, and it adds to it.
http://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/118199
So if you enjoy her rendition, let her know on her page please.
Thanks again for listening and your comments.
Randy
on Mulchefye - Pinhead by Rats
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on Its Too Late For Me collab with shortbusmusic by FullCapicityMuzic
Once in a while there are songs that makes me a bit envious and wishing I'd written. This is one of those – and it is going straight into my playlist on my phone. Thank you very much for sharing.
/pmk
on Walkin Shoes by Randall822
Thanks for your nice comments. The song was short as it was part of a 2-part song I did called 'Country Tyme' on here.
So she sang only on the 1st song that she liked. Her first country song ever. She did very good!
Randy
on Chariot by minette
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on SO EPIC by RonnyBecher
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on Tears by Arrival
Thank you
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on Heavy Rocks by Randall822
Awesome. And too short. ;)
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Thanks for your nice review and am glad you enjoyed another of my tunes. As for shortness, I almost got it to 3 min. as that is what I shoot for...in case it is ever played on the radio. That seems to be the standard time limit....maybe that has changed?
Some others on different web sites have asked how I get that 'Pinch Harmonics' sound. So here is an easier way to explain it via this video link to YouTube.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5I5O8P-r5Rk
If you already know how to do it, cool....but some don't for sure.
Thanks again and will give you a review back shortly.
Randy
on Land of Confusion - 5WD by Beyushka
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on Baptisms of Fire by Emann
A suggestion: I think the song would improve if you worked the panning a little more the other way around, drums in the middle and spread guitar and bass , making it more "stereo". And easy on the vocals reverb.
It also would be rather cool is you added a tambourine in the chorus, it feels like it's that kind of song.
I hope yo don't take these suggestions the wrong way, the song is a fav.
/pmk
on Angel dust album version by lofthouse
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on I dont care by BigDaddyON
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But Iám starting to make my loops for my self in DubTurbo.
Still want to thank you for review.
Ole
on Farisha - Breathe (Storm Edit) by storm5hadow
A fav.
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on Temptation Ft Minette by ColinR
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on Mountain Top by ColinR
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on On the Liberty road by ThierryChoppin
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Sorry to be late about your comments and thank you so much.
All the best