I thought at first it was another lost tag as dubstep because of the intro lol but this is really fire those unique growls is really bringing up the heat same goes with the vocals that really on point, everything is good.
You did well at reversing the melody I like that, those sliding 808 is cool though it needs a lil bit work and I love your fill I think it's a fill lol here at 0:23 the low pitching thing, Anyway great track onlyhits.
Your drop is on fire!!
I like the kinda slide in the bass, My only advice here is to put atmosphere in the intro so that it doesn't feel empty, That's all.
Nice synth at the intro just put a couple creepy ambience your intro sounds more like nasko, I like this part when it kinda changes 2:11 and its been reversed is quite good my only suggestion here is the snare give it a little bit more punch or maybe give it a little decay or something but good work here.
I literally love dubstep but not the riddim one and this track is very very good I like how you introduce your drop in 0:14 and delay at 0:16 that was awesome same with a heavy growl that really gives the track alive. GREATLY DONE.
I'm really glad that you pick dubstep as your main genre this is an awesome track to begin with, What I love here is the synth at 0:40 my god that broke my neck banging back and forth, and it gives me nostalgic vibe reminds me of some good old 2016 dubstep, anyways Welcome back Skwish Fish.
thanks for your comment, but everything here was purely intentional. From the distorted instrumental to the voice. Although I put "Rap" (rhythm and poetry) as the genre, it's really spoken word... there just isn't a label for it.
I really like the Intro vocals, but I think you need to lower your crash a little bit and have some sidechain in your drop to make it more clear also have some other elements in the drop for example, Arp, Skank or any ambience so that it doesn't feel empty that's all, I have fun listening here good job.
This lit and rough
What I like here is your crunchy catchy drop that makes everything gorgeous and a banger also and those vocals are on point, my only problem here is you dont have drum fills or any transitions going on here at 1:35 and 3:11 it feels sudden, and a bit awkward my advice here is to have some whoosh or drum fills anyways keep it up jayjayBB
I agree, although it does say still under construction :) so I may add those I may change the whoose/drum fill to something completely different but who knows, thanks for the feedback, it's genuinely nice when I get it.
This is really awesome your drop is really hitting hard, but it's a bit loud for me I think you need to put sidechain aswell but overall it's a damn banger.
Thank you; feedback like this is greatly appreciated! Go ahead, if you want, and check out the creators of the loops behind the song. Anyway, sidechaining is always one of the first things I set up, but I made it more subtle for this track since dubstep drum beats tend to have a lot of kick 'action', so having too strong of a sidechain can sound a bit strange, if you get where I'm coming from. However, I do wholeheartedly agree with your first criticism. I might, at some point, go back and fiddle around with the master track to make the limiter less prominent.
Hey Xen0s i really like your intro and your chord progression but I think the problem here is the buildup part at 0:36 your melody is blocking your drums you need to put sidechain in that part including your drop but I really like your melodic drop tho. anyways this is a real banger. Peace out
Thanks so much for pointing that out. In all honesty, I wasn't too pleased with the percussive aspect of the buildup in any case, so I see your point. If I went back to edit this track, there'd definitely be a bunch of stuff I'd change, like giving the buildup snare a more prominent transient, pushing everything to mono before each drop and, as you said, introducing some sidechaining in the buildup to allow more room for the percussion. I don't know whether I WILL go back and change this project, but I really do appreciate your constructive criticism :)
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I like the kinda slide in the bass, My only advice here is to put atmosphere in the intro so that it doesn't feel empty, That's all.
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I don't understand it but this sounds cool your flow is different to others and I like it big thumbs up man.
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What I like here is your crunchy catchy drop that makes everything gorgeous and a banger also and those vocals are on point, my only problem here is you dont have drum fills or any transitions going on here at 1:35 and 3:11 it feels sudden, and a bit awkward my advice here is to have some whoosh or drum fills anyways keep it up jayjayBB
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