The beat is really cool, but the vocals are not in the same key. Can you try dropping that around 6-8 half times? (Unless of course you did it on purpose)
I like the music more than the vocals, the music is certainly swinging! Still, the vocals also have a certain vibe, and I guess it works. Well done.
Will you list the loops you used? I think people may appreciate that.
That is great feedback! I was going to scrap that part. I still am not sure I personally like it, but maybe it's just because there's something else that's needed. I'll mess around with it.
Thank you BaoBao, I do consider your comment. It is still a draft and the female Vox isn't perfectly in tune (but the phrases fit so well) I do not have the technical capacity to tune it (melodyne?). However once it is done I will update the track. In terms of the loops I am not a keyboard player nor a good guitar player so I probably have to drop some notes in middi. Chers Ricke
I like, nice and friendly track, and you guys clearly had fun, which is always good.
I think you can bring it to the next level by working on the mix; the drums need to go back a little, and certainly the voice needs to pop more. I'm not a mixer or producer, but check on the forums, maybe someone can help, or find a local friend who can help.
Good luck!!
I really like the bit from say 0:30 to 2:00. But when you repeat it, I personally would like to hear more difference, maybe more layers, (or fewer)? I'm not really a producer :) but I think that might make the track stronger.
Good luck, there's certainly potential!!
It is always great to receive good constructive criticism. I started producing about a year ago, so every tip makes me mature my ideas and my work as a producer. In a second version, your suggestions will be taken into consideration.
Thank you so much BaoBou!
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Will you list the loops you used? I think people may appreciate that.
Thank you very much for your comment
I'd have to look at it, but they're not looperman's.
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Good luck!!
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Good luck, there's certainly potential!!
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