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Come on, 2 Patricia Edwards songs on one day? It must be christmas!! :)
Good job!

I love me some Patricia, I listen to this acapella quite a few times, and I think you nailed it. Awesome.

It's really good! I think you can improve it even more by doing something about the mixing. I like the vocals and the music, but they feel a bit like two separate entities, and I think a good remix could help that. Good luck!!

All my favorite types of sounds in one song: 90s guitars, 2000s beat, and a bit of 80s noise in there too - and yet it doesn't sound dated. Well done my friend!

Well I've hidden some of my earlier tracks from 2018 ;)
It's a learning process. I found a local studio with some guys who know a lot about mixing; I take a lesson every half year or so, and each time I learn a great deal. But in the end that's not the main thing; just make sure to keep making music, keep enjoying it and keep improving bit by bit!

Very funky! I like the bass, careful to make the keys not too overpowering.
Since you're playing your instruments live like me, make sure to "warp" your tracks a bit to correct for errors, so the beat is sychronised in all your tracks.

It may feel like cheating a bit, but it makes it easier to hear the music, so it's really to the benefit of your track :)

I sense a distinct Sisters of Mercy vibe (that's a good thing in my book). Good track!

I like it, and the main melody is a good one. But I think your track would be even stronger if you have a break or a variation without it; it will make it more exciting. Consider it!

Very interesting track. Many different elements, certainly a bit weird, but it all works. Great stuff, enjoyed it a lot!

Good track! But don't use Looperman as a springboard for Soundcloud or Youtube man. We all do that to some extent, but don't be too egregious about it ;)
Use Looperman for what it is; you may not make money here, but you will get honest feedback, and that's actually really valuable.

Lovely voice, but unfortunately the vocal and the music are not at the same speed and not synchronised (they do at least seem to be in the right key, which is a start). Make sure they have the same BPM, and then also make sure that the verse of the vocal goes with the verse of the song, and chorus to chorus.
Also, the vocal is too loud in the mix, so it sticks out even more.
Some more work to be done, I think!

Really nice, except it's too short! I think you should keep evolving this song (it has a Cranberries feel to it), add vocals (don't have to be perfect), a chorus, etc. Very promising!

Awesome vocals as always. Man she can sing.
Having said that (and I think I could probably listen to her reading out a shopping list with that voice and still be mesmerised), I think she is good enough to make an even cleaner take, eg 2.46 "every" isn't as clean as it could be.

It sounds like a first draft, and I think I've heard better of you both; still, your first draft is better than my final version, and it's a solid track. The music is there (and the lyrics too) and that's what counts.

Very nice and jazzy, good use of the "lo-fi" element.

Very nice and dreamy. Loved it.

Good track. Yes, the beginning is a bit long and not that exciting, it's good that you draw attention to that ;) so why not have the track start at 0:40 or maybe 0:32? Longer is not always betterder.
Good ideas here though, definitely enjoyable.

Just dropping by to say I listened again and enjoyed it even more. Off to listen to your other tracks to lift my mood.

YEah that's a good start, curious where it will lead to!

I see it's your Looperman-o-versary! C godovshchinoi!
Nice and relaxed track. Who cares about the genre, we are people without borders and we shouldn't try to fit music in small boxes - we should just enjoy it :)

Full of energy and passion, I like it. I understand what you mean: having a friend commit suicide is the worst feeling, you'll always keep wondering if there was something you could have done (hint - you can't. Also, the people who talk about it generally are not the ones who do it.)

Hugs from over here and thumbs up for a great track.

I like the guitar loop you used, and I think it works really well with the vocals, and it has a good beat. I'm not a huge fan of the distortion and the clipping of the music (it could be a bit less harsh for me), but I guess even that works, so, kudos :)

If you are going for electronic style cinematic, then I think you probably have done so to some extent. I'm personally not convinced though whether the electronic matches the theme of the title.

Regarding the melody, I assume you're trying to create something powerful and energetic, slightly uncomfortable, something that gets you on the edge of your seat for the next scene, or maybe the next track. If that's what you were trying to do, then it's a good effort, and I'd be interested to hear the next track :)

Very nice anc chill.

I like it! I have to say that the intro is a bit on the long side for a relatively short song, but it's just ok, and the wait is worth it. Good one!

Procto muzika is first music? Really good!