I like it, it's a real song, and pretty good lyrics too, clearly you know what you're doing! (And I don't). But it sounds a bit like it's at half speed - I bet that's on purpose, but I also bet that if it would be a couple notches faster, it would be really catchy?
All in all, good work, you have some interesting tracks here man!
Also very good, if too short. Obviously what you need here is a guitar solo ;)
I didn't know Emilyn, but that's a very interesting voice - I'm inspired! Learned 3 good things from you today ;)
Dude. That is awesome!! Nice vocals too but you really made it pop with the keyboards. I didn't get the Owl City reference at first so clearly that's a band I need to listen to ;)
Good work, keep going!
Nah, this is not 60s, this is also an 80s song, and it's on the tip of my tongue, but I'm an old man (and a bit drunk) and can't remember what it reminds me of. Really good work!!
Holy crap, that's awesome. It's depressingly awesome, in the sense of: why am I even trying? Next level awesome.
The only thing I can think that might improve it (maybe) is that around 3:00 I sort of expected you to pull out all the stops, and make the last minute a real climax. I think with that, you could actually have a monster hit, and I'm not kidding. Thanks for posting this here bro!
Hmm so like go crescendo with the beat, add more instruments, add a different melody/tune etc?
Lol I just pictured that and you're right that would have sounded awesome.
I'll definitely keep that in mind for next time, I'm glad you liked it tho.
OK, that makes sense! I didn't understand that as a listener - maybe have a very short break, or even some sound effect (a record player needle swiping over the record or something) to show that? Thanks for explaining :)
I really loved the intro, and I think it really fit the title, but it's not in the same key as the main part. If you can fix that, it will be even nicer.
Also, I think if you can make the main part a bit lighter, I think it will also fit the "lounge" theme a bit better (although obviously I have no idea if that's what you were trying to achieve).
Good luck in any case!
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All in all, good work, you have some interesting tracks here man!
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I didn't know Emilyn, but that's a very interesting voice - I'm inspired! Learned 3 good things from you today ;)
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Good work, keep going!
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If you would like some guitar sounds, let me know!
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it!
I'd love to hear what you're playing to it ;)
I too play the guitar, maybe we can do a track together? Colab?
Send me a link to your fav and we go from there, if you like. Would love it.
J.
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The only thing I can think that might improve it (maybe) is that around 3:00 I sort of expected you to pull out all the stops, and make the last minute a real climax. I think with that, you could actually have a monster hit, and I'm not kidding. Thanks for posting this here bro!
Lol I just pictured that and you're right that would have sounded awesome.
I'll definitely keep that in mind for next time, I'm glad you liked it tho.
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Also, I think if you can make the main part a bit lighter, I think it will also fit the "lounge" theme a bit better (although obviously I have no idea if that's what you were trying to achieve).
Good luck in any case!
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