BaoBou

Your guitar playing is fine. Unfortunately your mic is a bit rusty and something is resonating too much so that it's really hard to hear your lyrics - which is a shame because from what I hear I think you have a really nice voice!
Consider recording in 2 tracks: one for the guitar, one for the vocal, then mixing it, and make sure you have sufficient distance from the mic (or your iPhone or whatever you used) so you don't overload it.
I think it's a really sweet song and in order to ensure people hear it sometimes it helps to pay some attention to those details ;)
Good luck buddy, you clearly have the musicality!

Not sure I can delete comments. Here's the track on Looperman:
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/238463

Also sent you a DM!

Well done. Great drums, which I think you played live? Really fits with the track.
The only tiniest improvement point I could think of is that the "piano" is now all notes at the same volume; it could feel slightly more dynamic if you might have a touch sensitive keyboard so you can accentuate some notes and play other softer.
But lovely tune, also liked your other tracks!

Awesome track. One thing though, I'm listening on crappy inner ear phones, but it sounds to me like it could be clipping/distorting in the louder parts. Maybe you want to check that, but otherwise really enjoyed this!!

Hm, that's a pity, I get this message?
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Hi BaoBou's Sketches,

It looks like your track

"Baby We Made It Now - Morash and Matt Yonge"

might contain or be a copy of "Championships" by Meek Mill, which is owned by Unknown in certain territories.

Here you go:
https://on.soundcloud.com/nwuXL

After singing a bit I decided the rest needed a rap and I found an awesome one by Matt Yonge (We made it, also on this site).

Hope you like the end result!

I didn't know the original so did a quick compare. I have to say that I really love the sound and vibe of the original (I love that 80s soul sound) but your dubstep rhythm definitely adds a new dimension.

Well done!

That's a great job man. You took a solid vocal and you turned it into a classic.
Good processing on the vocals; I'm not a fan of too many effects but I think you hit the sweet spot, and the other layers all work well with it. Top notch!

Lovely moody intro, great follow-up, good use of your vocal, although it drowns a bit in the mix for me (but that might be my crappy headphones).
Well done and a major step forward in my mind!!

Hello Majid, how many accounts do you have now? :D
BUt the funny thing is, I recognise you instantly :) Good job!

Lovely sound, I actually started physically moving to the beat and I had a yuuuuuuuuuuuge smile on my face. But man, you need a vocal on this, whether rap or sang, it deserves it.
In fact, I might throw my hat in the ring. This will be loads of fun to sing to, I think!

Well done, great vocal too!

Really good, c'est très bien fait ça! I like the use of the melody in 2 different ways, and the angry rap.
Nice!

Ela re! A bouzouki... Now that makes me homesick :)
I like it! But... It feels like it could grow to something bigger?

I hear loads of stuff here,but there's also bits you might be able to improve on. Hear me out.
The idea of Gregorian chants and DnB is very cool. Other bits clash though; the "bell" like sounds (first I thought the nutcracker and then I realised l... Harry Potter?) after 0:15 and 2:10 are interesting but have too many dissonants.

The bit from 2:35 is very different from what came before, and I applaud you for that - in general the whole track is very ambitious, and I like that. But I do think you might be able to make it more one story; try to think what the core of your song is, and build up to that. If that road has detours, then great, as long as the listener feels you know where you're going.
I hope you don't mind I said this! Good luck buddy!

The genre is DarkNero. Let others define you - we can just explore ourselves while the try to box us in.
Good track. Good vocal too!

Promising! The vocals are a bit out of sync with the music (I think the guitar is ok) but that's something you can fix for the full version I think. Looking forward to it!

You know, that's a really sweet melody, and the only thing you need is some vocals - a slow low female voice, or even maybe just male spoken word. From the words "damals" and "weist du noch" I think it shouldn't be hard to make some lyrics... there must be a story there to tell.
Good luck :)

I think it's a good beat, but in my mind it needs a melody to tie it together, however simple. What you're doing around 1:40 is the key to the song. That's where it shines, and I think that's what you can expand/repeat/bring back.
Kijk maar of je het met me eens bent :)

Ahhh cumpleanos feliz!

Hola Alex, nice new track, but do check how you exported it because there is a lot of distortion and clipping. You may want to lower some of the volumes.
Keep creating!

Awesome stuff. Not 100% why this showed up again 9 years after the fact, but timeless music never dies. Really good!

Loads of energy! Some of it could be more focused ;) but I can hear how much fun you're having!

That's a lovely song! Very well produced and super pleasant... That could be a hit!

Great man! I'm a fan of McNorad and did a track with one of his Acapellas... Also around 2020 I guess?
https://youtu.be/inPu-l3FnXc

Love your production quality and the little details you included in the mix. Great track!