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I like this one too. Great rhythm and some lovely elements, plus it's very coherent. I think you're really telling a story here.

I love that it's very ambitious. Some amazing sounds; also some things where maybe you can tinker a bit more.
Around 0:15 the piano arpeggios go off in a slightly different direction than the violins, but they come back to find each other.
Around 0:26 you introduce an electric guitar, which I liked, but it doesn't really return and then you may want to think to do that later. Now you sort of keep the listener hanging; you showed the shotgun, now it has to be fired (maybe you know the theatre reference).
All in all super interesting and I'm curious to see what else you have :)

This is brilliant. I totally recognise the Zappa vibe. Hilarious lyrics too! Thanks man :)

Huge Norad fan here. Great rap and you gave it a great track, well done!

Much better :)
It happened to me too in the past and several people listened and commented on various things but nobody noticed the weird ending, which was... Odd :D
Still a good track my friend, and now even better!

Just listened again and it seems to me the ending is very sudden. Is that intentional?

I see this is an older track, but I love it. Great jazzy vibe and a lovely vocal too. Fantastic stuff, hope your EP does well/did well. Send me a link!

It's very nice. I especially like the transition after around 1:13.
As a tip, you can probably increase the master level on your track quite a bit, and then possibly gain some loudness with a bit of compression. Not so important musically, but it may help you to get it across.

Yeah I'm the same, although I now have a three or four stage process:
- I write the track in a couple days and make a draft which I post on Looperman
- I spend a couple more days fixed stuff
- then after max 1 week (usually as soon as I have a new idea) I desert the track.
Or actually I don't desert it, I make a video and schedule it to go live a couple weeks/months later on YouTube.
- now a couple days before it goes live on YouTube, I take a fresh look at it and fix stuff I hadn't heard before
- then last November I took some recent tracks, again did some fixes and published them as an EP; I plan to do something similar this summer but with an album of say 10-12 tracks.

So there's several cycles of "ok I'm done" and "let's have another look" keeping it fresh. See if that's something that might work for you (some similar cycle adjusted to your way of working)?

I like it, except for the guitar-y sound, which doesn't fully fit, in my mind.
The rest of the track is really smooth and lovely, and I could imagine youight want a bit more edge to it, but it's not really working for me - without being able to tell you what I'd expect. Maybe something a bit slower and melodic?
Good luck, keep working at it because it's a really nice one!

That is lovely!! Patricia's voice is so good, and you gave it the perfect vehicle. Well done!!

Promising, but a bit short of course. Will you post a full version?

I need your drum vsts, they sound awesome!
Very trippy indeed! I likes it!!

Found your channel :)
Glad you agreed on the intro!

Fantastic intro and a good main loop. Hope somebody uses it well, another strong effort Majid!

Yeah I get that, but it has loads of energy, exactly because it isn't all perfectly in time, so make sure you don't lose that energy!

That start is pretty epic. The rest of the track also doesn't disappoint. Star trek meets 80s disco!
Absolutely lovely, great you brought this back.

F*CK YEAH! Excellent use of the sample!! Great track!

I like it. Strong rap, and the out of tune piano gives it a great weird sound that works well. Good job!

Oh, eso tambien es muy bien!! Me gusta!
Always love your work!

I'm totally up for a jam. I have a practice room near Cambridge Heath with amps and a drumset, so if you're interested (and not too far, London is huge, I already found), send me a DM!

You can quote me on the first line too ;) yeah the clav is indeed what I meant. Great man and yeah, that guitar player is me, absolutely!

Crap, I need to look better what I type on my phone because autocorrect f*cjked that up.
That should have been: "You may quit music, but the music never quits _you_."

First of all, welcome back! You may quite music, but the music never quits me.
Second, and I hope you don't mind me saying this, I think you have 2 lovely tracks here.
That drum rhythm is amazing, and that music is amazing, but I think the music would feel stronger with a rhythm in half time, and similarly, I think that rhythm can lead to a different track.
You may not agree - and I have to say I also enjoyed it as is, but it was my feeling from the moment the beat came in. The intro was so amazing it could easily stand on its own.
Think about it!

Ruby/Ashes is the best :)
Really good instrumentation! If you want anything to work on, I think it would be the ending, which now leaves her hanging a bit. See if you agree, I think this would be stronger if you end on a chord on the root note, so it feels like closure.