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Strong track. I like what you did around 1:40; not a fan of the extreme fadeout/ins in the middle and the end. It was an interesting listen though, I could see this in a video game!

You have the best poems as always Aleksandr, and this is a great Collab. Great stuff!!

strong rap but man, that's a lot of distortion. Try to leave a bit more headroom in your tracks?

Dude, that is ffing amazing, and I'm not even a Reggae fan. Fav'ed!! I would totally play that on a loop, great track!
I'm transported straight back to Jamaica (even if they don't play that much reggae anymore these days ;) )

This is insanely good. The guitar is perfect with a Mark Knopflery sound.
Come back soon with more!

Nice, great use of the spoken word vocal!

Your vocal fits really well with the instrumental part but the booming kick is out of sync and doesn't feel like it belongs there. See if you can fix that!

100% Smokey John! And you used a great beat!
See if you can either use a bit more tone in your vocal, or else, do it more as a rap. I think that will add a bit of dynamic to it.
Good luck man, every track you make is better than the previous!

It doesn't suck, but yes, like the others said, work on the balance of the vocals. They're too "hot" and distort now, and they stick out too much in the mix. You can probably reduce it a good 12 dB and still have it be the main element.
Good luck!

That's a great classic track! Love it!

Actually, I think it may be the keys which are a bit too loud, so maybe lower those a bit. In any case, give more space to your vocals!

That's great!! All played yourself, keys, drums vocals? Shake hand brother :)
Your voice is also great (I mean especially great); you just need to stand a bit closer to the mic, or possibly make it a bit louder in the mix.
Great stuff!

It's a cool rap! But I don't think you need that much processing on your vocal. I know the feeling of wanting to hide your own voice, but no need. I think it will sound better with less distortion!

Koninginnedag? Dan is het al weer een tijdje geleden neem ik aan ;) (10+ jaar?)

Nice track! Most of it works well together but one of the arpeggios you can hear at the same time as the vocal doesn't really seem to fit? See if you agree!

What is the constant "ABS media demo" throughout?

Good work if this is your first ever!

I really loved that. Some excellent sounds, and a great flow to it. Not a fan of the electronic hihats (I'm an old man); if you can find a better drum sound then I think this would be even better, but otherwise an excellent track!

Don't jump!
Also, good track! very strong lyrics!

That's really good!! Very hard track!

Nice! Would maybe be interesting to see if you can fit an acapella on it?

That was fun! If maybe a bit long.
See if you can add an acapella!

Thanks a lot for incorporating my noodling! I love that by shifting the whole thing one beat it became even more funky.
The whole thing is a masterpiece as usual. The horns here are off the chart btw.
Love it and thanks for letting me be a part of it!

Lovely track. The breaks are great, to give it some space, and a solid outro.
Well done!

The dissonants I mentioned are most noticeable around say 1:58-2:02. Your bass, mid and high melodies all go in a different direction, which is great in itself, but they don't play well together here. But I'll say again, it could have been something you intended, that's why I was a bit careful :)

In any case, I was mostly hoping you could build on it because the tempo and energy in that same section is excellent and I wouldn't have minded if the track would have lasted a couple minutes longer :)

Good luck!!