You have put together a great track. The mix of music and vocals is arranged in an great way. Amazing to take samples and make it into a cohesive song.
dankeschön, most of all it was important for me that you like it. it would have been very bad if you heard the poem in a track you dont like. thanx for review, thanx for the nice poem.
Nice, add some strings in chorus, and put pumping busier hip underneath. Another mix direction: Add a reggae bass line, a lil reggae guitar once in awhile, and a reggae foot and snare(Foot on 1, 2, 3, 4) Snares on (1.5, and 3.5 beats)
Good idea. Hopefully you can track down the people who did the original samples.
Nice track; check into your microphone though (or maybe it's the mix on the vocals).
Keep it up, this song has good potential. Great lyrics. Below, if you don't mind the feedback is my idea for rating:
Lyrics: 10
Music Arrangement: 10
Vocal/Rap: 7
Mix/Engineering: 4
I'm feelin like you already got skills as a lyricist, song composer and producer. I'd get deeper into the engineering and rap part. Good luck and I hope you don't mind my frankness.
Has great potential. I'd suggest working on the eq/frequencies, especially the upper end, unless your intention is to have lots of lows, in which case, some contrast would still be applicable.
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Good idea. Hopefully you can track down the people who did the original samples.
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Keep it up, this song has good potential. Great lyrics. Below, if you don't mind the feedback is my idea for rating:
Lyrics: 10
Music Arrangement: 10
Vocal/Rap: 7
Mix/Engineering: 4
I'm feelin like you already got skills as a lyricist, song composer and producer. I'd get deeper into the engineering and rap part. Good luck and I hope you don't mind my frankness.
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But this track is really flavorful... Personally, I'd like to hear that snare eq'd more and up in their face like "was up".
Keep it up, real hip hop lives....
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But has nice groove. Good luck.
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