ah mate, you misunderstood me... I ment "to make my comment shorter" not that you should shorten the track... I think it is great as it is, sorry if that wasn't that clear...
oooh !I should say sorry man, & ok, now I understand U Ishimizu , I'm glad if u don't think it's so long that make u tired,althought as I said still I'm not sure about such a long timing for it .
any way thnx again for your attention & your both comments which make me konw better my track .
peace .
Very relaxing piece of music. I like how it starts out as a slightly melancholic track, changes to being somewhat cautious but driving and then getting a nice, somewhat laid-back beat while still retaining the initial feel.
To make it shorter: I really like it!
Ishimizu thanx alot for your attention .
I'm agree about a shorter version but I have no Idea .
It's a Instrumental version but in fact this music has a persian lyric & I don't know how should I make it shorter & dont miss anything on it .
Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment.
Hope I'll leatn music better.
I like this one, really... especially this little staccato-synth that actually sounds a bit like popcorn.
For some reason, though, it felt damned short even if it is about standard-radio-length...
thank you very much for the feed back. i have been listening back all day yesterday, and feel the same it feels to short, but my aim was to not have a song that drags on, i will work on it a bit more today.
Oh.. lol.. Far from always my firend.. sometimes one gets into a mood and makes verry specifik music just for my ears only, and the comment i get back from the general public is either "dafuq?" or "Whot da hell did i just listen too?".. lol..
Thank you for the comment tho since it made my evening calling it epic.. :)
well, I am not a friend of politics so I ignore the samples.
Away from those: That track 's smooth, the beginning reminds me a bit on a video game were ya walk through' some kind of (magical) cave. Later it is a really chilled track... also gotta love that distant sax.
It was never my intention to make a political statement and of course I do not want to offend anyone with this track. For me it was just fascinating to see how some people are able to gave a speech that so many other are inspired by.
Haha, I understand your video game comment and take it is a big compliment :-). The sax I have to thank Slap Johnson for. Listen to his samples if you have the time (and if you have not done so so far).
very chilled and relaxing tune... if it weren't for the fast paced drums I'd say this is a Chill-Out Track.
Also gotta second what crucethus said...
like the overall style of this.
strange but intresting... I like that feel, really does has somethin' from a cloudy mind... like the process of thinking without actually thinking about somethin' specific and just jumping from subject to subject, like brooding over nothin' and everythin' at the same time and all that put to an abstract piece of music... if that makes sense...
simple put: I like it so thumbs up!
so far~
PS: even if it is not 4/4 timing, it still is quiet followable.
thank you so much! that is exactly th feeling i was going for! i could not have described that any better myself.. i was unsure that anyone would even appreciate this, let alone follow it! it took a whole lot of editing without a grid to produce this track.. so thank you for taking th time to process it =p i know some people probably wouldn't even call this music, but i'm glad you like it =)
while this is actually the kind of Hardcore I like (the senseless 'n' noisy type) and I do like the track itself there are two points that really are bad:
first: it feels unfinished...
second and more important:
Dude, were is the BASS?!
I checked twice, my Sub is absolutly okay so it must be track... there is no freakin' bass...
don't get me wrong, I like the track itself and also the sound of those kicks but a nice midrange is nothin' without a devastating bass... It is like the whole track is put through a low-cut filter.
wicked dude...
neat production, nice dark athmosphere and really nice hittin' Drums.
oh, and just gotta love that slight bitcrushed sounds here and there...
just a tad short... or maybe it only feels short, actually for some reason the player dosn't shows me how long the track is XD
Well... I can tell ya that this is definately not D'n'B, sounds more like Dance or somethin' like that to me (D'n'B uses fast Breakbeats... and well a straight 4-to-the-floor-beat is more or less the direct opposite of that XD)
But for the track itself: a tad to happy for my personal taste and I think it could need some more variation.
I do like the sound of the lead synthy thought... most likely because I like Saw-based synths...
well, keep it up, ain't that bad (Ich bin aus Bayern, "nicht schlecht" ist also bereits recht gut bei mir XD)
thx 4 ur comment. This is the second part of an 1:16:42h mix. so the genre is changing all time. the next part will be much harder than this one, the part before was more softly than this part. in my part 1 describtion i said that i actually not know which kind of music it allready is. i hoped that the community would help me and u did, thx 4 that.
But i just think bout what i can do, should i load it up as weird?
(danke schön erstmal. muss dazu sagen, dass ich noch keine möglichkeit habe, meine sachen zu mastern, deswegen klingen einige sachen rel. unfertig da ich nur mit dem laptop und stereo kopfhörern arbeite. Unter diesen bedingungen ist für mich ein Recht Gut schon der gipfel von dem was ich mir erhoffe. ;-D )
this one is rather dark... alsom somewhat melancholic and a tad frustrated, at least thats what it sounds like to me.
That eerie, slightly bitcrushed glockenspiel-thingy is a awesome in my opinion and that overall slightly low quality (meaning the quality of the file, NOT the quality of the music itself) actually somewhat fits the track for it gives it a somewhat detached, foggy and nearly suspence-horror-edge... and it has a nice drive while being chilled at the same time...
you really don't stop to amaze me mate. Big thumbs up!
so far~
PS: this really does sound like D'n'B with half-time drums...
Detached, foggy, susepence-horror-edge... I like that description.
When it comes to genre.. well.. I suck at placing them in the correct section so, mainly i say either "techno, Industrial, or chill" depending on the mood.. Ill might sort this one correctly one day..
Anyways, Loved the comment, loved the description and stay tuned for more.. Ill make sure to drop in and give a listen to your work as well.. ///Dec
I personally a more straight forward style, still, like this one, has a somewhat funny and a tad chaotic feel to it while also being quiet relaxing.
you should make more like that, hehe.
Hi Ishi, good to see you again my friend. Thanx for the lovely review. DnB is my secret vice. A genre I really enjoy but it is also one in which I can struggle to produce a half decent tune in. Had a bash at it with this one and am quite happy with it but I need to remix a bit as I went a little OTT with the left to right to left to right panning in some places. Thanx again for taking time to stop by and listen & review. Peace, Love and Justice.
Vis
Sounds like a soundtrack to a solitude-scene of a lone protagonist striving trough the city at night while maybe getting a drink or two, while at the same time having something strangly uplifting...
Long things short: I think this is awesome mate... simply awesome.
Thank you mate for THE nicest picture and comment.. Now this is WHY i love producing. If i can take the listener somewhere else and make that person experience a feeling or a place, then I pat myself on the back saying that ive done it.. I couldnt have gotten a better rating on the tune.. Thanks again man.. i really mean it.. ///Dec
awesome track, love how you incorperated those sounds into the structure, especially that cassete-change-sounds before the drums set in... very chilled and dreamy track.
gotta love that unexpected brake XD especially since it changes from a somewhat f**ked up, neurotic tune to a rather ambient like tune just to change back again XD also i like the fact that its rather simple (no, not simple in the meaning of "cheap" more like simple as in "is simple, monotonic and awsome!")
yay, nice beginning so far. has something... cold, nearly distant but melodic (I mean cold in a positive way)also this effect on the kick is intresting. keep it up man^^ (had to download it to listen to it couze this computer dosn't likes the loop-player -.- damn computer lab in school >.
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any way thnx again for your attention & your both comments which make me konw better my track .
peace .
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To make it shorter: I really like it!
I'm agree about a shorter version but I have no Idea .
It's a Instrumental version but in fact this music has a persian lyric & I don't know how should I make it shorter & dont miss anything on it .
Thanks for taking the time to listen and comment.
Hope I'll leatn music better.
on Elohim-Game over by scuzzballs
For some reason, though, it felt damned short even if it is about standard-radio-length...
keep it up.
thanks again
Peace
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keep it up and so far~
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so far~
Thank you for the comment tho since it made my evening calling it epic.. :)
//Dec
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Away from those: That track 's smooth, the beginning reminds me a bit on a video game were ya walk through' some kind of (magical) cave. Later it is a really chilled track... also gotta love that distant sax.
thumbs up for shure...
so far~
It was never my intention to make a political statement and of course I do not want to offend anyone with this track. For me it was just fascinating to see how some people are able to gave a speech that so many other are inspired by.
Haha, I understand your video game comment and take it is a big compliment :-). The sax I have to thank Slap Johnson for. Listen to his samples if you have the time (and if you have not done so so far).
Thanks for the thumbs up! It is appreciated.
Doc
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Also gotta second what crucethus said...
like the overall style of this.
keep up the good work^^
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simple put: I like it so thumbs up!
so far~
PS: even if it is not 4/4 timing, it still is quiet followable.
on positive sadness by PlasticPeyote
really soothing, yet melancholic track...
don't even know what to say except for maxcimum respect...
so far~
big big respect for you
on V-R-NMEs - Southcore by sfysrec
first: it feels unfinished...
second and more important:
Dude, were is the BASS?!
I checked twice, my Sub is absolutly okay so it must be track... there is no freakin' bass...
don't get me wrong, I like the track itself and also the sound of those kicks but a nice midrange is nothin' without a devastating bass... It is like the whole track is put through a low-cut filter.
Add Bass and its a really neat track...
on Impact by Intravision
neat production, nice dark athmosphere and really nice hittin' Drums.
oh, and just gotta love that slight bitcrushed sounds here and there...
just a tad short... or maybe it only feels short, actually for some reason the player dosn't shows me how long the track is XD
respect, mate...
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But for the track itself: a tad to happy for my personal taste and I think it could need some more variation.
I do like the sound of the lead synthy thought... most likely because I like Saw-based synths...
well, keep it up, ain't that bad (Ich bin aus Bayern, "nicht schlecht" ist also bereits recht gut bei mir XD)
so far~
But i just think bout what i can do, should i load it up as weird?
(danke schön erstmal. muss dazu sagen, dass ich noch keine möglichkeit habe, meine sachen zu mastern, deswegen klingen einige sachen rel. unfertig da ich nur mit dem laptop und stereo kopfhörern arbeite. Unter diesen bedingungen ist für mich ein Recht Gut schon der gipfel von dem was ich mir erhoffe. ;-D )
on Cult1 by Tormon
Hard Techno isn't my fav genre but this kicks ass
keep it up man!
so far~
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That eerie, slightly bitcrushed glockenspiel-thingy is a awesome in my opinion and that overall slightly low quality (meaning the quality of the file, NOT the quality of the music itself) actually somewhat fits the track for it gives it a somewhat detached, foggy and nearly suspence-horror-edge... and it has a nice drive while being chilled at the same time...
you really don't stop to amaze me mate. Big thumbs up!
so far~
PS: this really does sound like D'n'B with half-time drums...
When it comes to genre.. well.. I suck at placing them in the correct section so, mainly i say either "techno, Industrial, or chill" depending on the mood.. Ill might sort this one correctly one day..
Anyways, Loved the comment, loved the description and stay tuned for more.. Ill make sure to drop in and give a listen to your work as well.. ///Dec
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you should make more like that, hehe.
so far~
PS: Welcome back to the loop, Vis.
Vis
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Long things short: I think this is awesome mate... simply awesome.
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And actually you can hear it is influenced by metal
keep it up, man
so far~
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Ishimizu
i dont come to looperman much.
thnx, im glad you enjoyed it.
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