iamarty

if you send me stems to this, i can master it for you

this sounds really really good! but might i suggest that instead of having a kick snare (4 4 pounder) why not have a normal kick snare pattern going

what i mainly was talking about was the background arp throughout the drop, it is a little harsh (not too harsh) but a little harsh :)

have a nice day :)

really nice

mix could use a little work, and the structure could use a little bit of work, but overall it sounds really good

keep it up

this is really good :)

you think you might wanna collab on something in the future? :)

have a beautiful day

this is absolutely great man :)

i think you did the acapella very great justice because its minimal, but at the same time complex :)

have a beautiful day :)

and a little more on the concept that i was talking about with a soft clipper, sidechain works wonders too :)

often times, distortion from a kick can be handled quite well by just sidechaining the vsts/loops behind the main beat (i.e the kick, hihats, and snare) :)

do that and you shouldnt have any distortion or in this case "clipping" on the master channel anymore :)

hope this helps :)

i think im going to have to side with the other guy that said that you leaned hard on the master gain. but really in truly that doesnt matter when were talking about this genre. because to be completely honest, its at commercial loudness. which is all that matters :)

when it comes to this genre, there really isnt a right way to mix and master and most of the time, throw a compressor and a soft clipper on the master and youre fine :)

if youre worried about a mix and master, you shouldnt be. because its all about the feeling and vibe of the track

if everything vibes well and the feeling is good, you're fine

youd be really surprised to know how many professional tracks come like this as well. the clipping is coming from a kick, which is normal. if your kick is a hard hitting, distorted kick, you should EXPECT to have some clipping in the master. its natural because the distorted frequencies make other frequencies distorted as well. as i said, distortion is natural when dealing with a distorted kick

the best advise someone could ever give you with this genre is this: when ever you have a distorted kick, put a soft clipper on the mixer track of that kick. that way, when it comes time for the final product, there will be less distortion with the master channel :)

hope you have a wonderful day love :)

as far as what you were

ok :)

so since you asked for some feedback i can give you some :)

since i dont know (accurately) what DAW you use, im going to say that you use either FL Studio or Ableton. now since i like FL Studio a lot more, im going to say you use FL Studio :)

there are a lot of things in this track that can be improved on and made better (i.e some of the ways you did things)

during the break at 0:23 the 808 could have been muted and the volume of the loop/vst's could have been increased to give a push into the next verse

during the bridge at 0:38 the filter (sounds like a highpass) could have been layered with either a gross beat or love philter and made more dynamic

the over all snare could be changed entirely and a more punchy/crispy snare could have been used but this is entirely dependent on your sample library (i.e what samples you have) if you would like any recommendations on individual sample packs, i can give you some :)

the 808 could use a little (not too much) distortion so that it stands out a bit more because in the current state it sounds like the volume is raised not saying that thats a bad thing, but in this genre, the 808 is the main part of the track and sometimes distortion makes it stand out a lot more than what volume can do

now lets shift our focus to the mix a bit more :)

overall the mix is actually really clean... not the greatest, but its clean

one way that you can really beef up your mix and make it stand out a lot more is to simply use a soft clipper maxing out the Threshold and barely increasing the Post Gain so that it stays somewhat clean while still giving off the illusion that its louder

along the lines of that, try adding a compressor and increasing the output volume just slightly while keeping everything else untouched

many people have very different views on how to properly mix a trap track and my mixing mentor has told me the same. everyone has different views but the main concept is almost fundamentally the same: make it louder while keeping dynamics and maintaining a clean, smooth mix

overall, these are just my thoughts on what can be done :)

hope you found some usefulness to this and i hope you have an absolutely beautiful day :)

very nice :)

really like that snare btw :)

Cap, you never fail to disappoint :)

really love this one, probably one of my favorites from you

keep it up, and keep doing what you're doing :)

really curious why other people have their hihats so loud xd

i mean i know that probably no one does it the exact same way that i do, but i still wonder why

really great track btw its really smooth, and relaxing :)

no disrespect at all because this is absolutely amazing :)

but im curious why you layered a kick on top of the 808, because that 808 already has a tight enough transient and doesnt need a kick on top of it

like i said no disrespect because this is actually really really good :)

but im just curious :)

oh heyyy another one :)

really like your vocals no matter what it is :)

you have a really nice tone that seems to compliment anything flawlessly and this is no different

amazing job :)

mainly during the main bridges and choruses. but like i said, it sounds realllyy nice. i really like it :)

its a little off key at some points, but it really sounds nice :)

HOLY SHIT MAN. Dude we have to work together on a track sometime!!