RoyaleMuzik

I like this track, the beat, the synths, the wobble bass...all great. I also like all the cut-outs (Where you stop the beat and only the synth is heard), a little short, but overall good track!!

-Choki aka David

I like the beat and the synths, I like the lyrics to but the vocals sometimes didn't follow the beat. Good track overall!

-Choki aka David

Yup, just as the below "John59" mentioned, this sounds like if the Nightmare Before Christmas had a hip-hop track on it's soundtrack, smooth flow to it, nice dark/mysterious synths, dope track!

Nice track bro, I like the beat & great synth work, I would turn the bass down some because it's a little over-powering but still a great track!

Nice beat bro, really energetic & upbeat, I like he synths especially the violin synth, good work~!

Really good track here, I dig the beat and those awesome synths!!

I digg the beat, reminds me of old-school hip-hop from the 90's...need a little more to it so it doesn't sound repetitive and not sure about the vocal loop in their but otherwise, good track!

Cool track, I like the beat and your electro synths were awesome, sounds like something to be played in clubs, awesome track!

Sounds like a true trance/dance track, really awesome, sounds like something I would hear in a club! Nice synth & bass work!

Cool beat, sounds like something Lloyd banks or 50 Cent would rap on, I like the synths during the chorus, may want to throw in a few more synths during the verses so it doesn't sound too repetitive, good track!

I like how you had some of the instruments at the very begging coming out of separate speakers...I love the violin synths...I would edit the track so that all the synths sound cohesive because in my opinion, at times some of the synths sound like they didn't fit in the song with the main violin synth and I like the tracks closing, good track!!

I really like this, it has a chill vibe to it yet very upbeat, I like the bassline and the synths are nice, good track!

Has potential, could be a really awesome track, as others have said, just work on your timing, I had the same problem when I started making music! I love the main synth and the beat sounds Pitbull inspired, good work, keep trying & editing! :)

Hey, bro, really awesome track!! I love the beat & I like how you chopped up my loop, good work, I like how you brought the tempo up about halfway through the song and at 1:52 was really awesome! My only critique would be: at about 1:05, I would change the piano notes just a little so it fits with the song, other than that, good first track & glad you could use my loops!!-Choki aka David

I so love this, the sound is so laid back and smooth, It sounds like it could be a dubstep track, though it would probably need more wobble bass...This sound more though like a Pop track or an R&B track to me...either way, good job, hope to hear the finish version!

I really dig this track, Like the orchestral synth in the background, the bell synth & bass! Just my personal opinion, I think the bell synth should be a bit lower and the orchestral synth a little louder, also if you add another synth to the chorus, the track would be complete! Awesome work man! **Update** No prob man, sounds better!!

I really enjoyed this track, I'm getting more and more into dubstep and this is a really cool example! Love the vocal ambiance and the sound switches, bass is awesome too, good job!

I really really really love your harmonies!! It's like what makes a song so worth while...beautiful vocal work!!-Dave!

Really awesome track for your first beat! I really love the piano synth and the violin synth! I love the breakdown too...my only critique would be to change the beat pattern up just a bit more so you know where the verse ends and the chorus starts, but thats something that will come naturally as you progress in beat making, great job!

-Dave

Wow, this track is crazy good, sounds like something Young Jeezy would flow to...Love the synth work, the fast-to-slow hi-hats & the echoing/delayed claps!

Really cool track, I like the slow groove to it! Awesome bass & synth work bro...vocals were good too, nice job!

I really dig this beat...it fits the synths well, I've also downloaded the synth but have yet to do something with it. I like the breakdown at about 1:58...as the other members have said, just tinker with the EQ so everything sounds cohesive together, cool track!

Lol, Yo I dig this track, I like the beat and the lyrics is mad funny!!

Dude, this track is real awesome!! I got a 200 watt pc speaker system and this track rattled somethings off my shelf's lol...Love the beat, bass & the slow groove to it, awesome track!!

I'm getting more and more in to dubstep with each track I hear and this one was awesome!! I loved the beat, the glitch influences...sounds a bit reggae too in parts, awesome track!