I really enjoyed this, I love the vocals & lyrics. This reminded me of Kylie Minogue, really nice pop feel & I like the guitar synth. I would turn the vocals up just a tiny bit more, but other wise great track!
I really enjoyed this a lot, real funky hip-hop meets jazz kind of feel. Loved the switch at around 2:09, really nice synth work and instrumentation here...great job!
I really enjoyed this track, excellent orchestral synth work....Really like the switch up/instrumentation at 1:28 and loved the instrumentation at 2:29, really nice sounds throughout. The Heavy metal edge towards the end was nice but would have been waaaaaaay better if you'd turn the volume to the guitar synth down some as well as the backgrounds synths, because you can barely distinguish the backgrounds synths from the blaring guitar. Before the guitar synth came in, In my head I had pictured this track with drums in the form of an R&B track, Overall nice original concept/track!
thanks for listening and taking time to review :) i totally know what ur talking about with th guitar parts and its something i'm def goin to work on,thanks for the tips bro, i'll let cha know if/when i load up a new version
Yeah man! Your using my choir loop in there, very nice bro, very nice! Loving the drum instrumentation on this, the very cool bell synth & electro synth at the beginning...everything feels cohesive and well mixed, good job bro!
Good track, I love the piano synths...I have to say that the bass guitar (I think thats what it is) synth at the beginning doesn't fit the track because it doesn't mesh with the piano notes. The bass guitar synth DID sound better once the rock guitar synth came in (great sounding synth by the way), nice beat...all around awesome track...just didn't think the bass guitar fits in with the track's overall sound, faved!
I really liked this track, Extremely energetic & upbeat! I think for me, it took a few seconds too long for the track to get in gear but that's not a big deal...The track really kicked into gear around 2:30, awesome synth work and I really like the beat, everything seems to mesh really well...good job!
Thanks, David! I agree that the intro is too long. Thanks for your input, I really appreciate it. Also, you sign your name almost just like I do on emails and other things. Funny, too, that we have the same name.
I like the beat, sounds a little old school...like something that Redman or Method man would rap on. Nice synth work on this, the flow was on point as well, good job!
Gostei muito desta pista! Tem realmente um descontraÃÂdo e bom som para ele. Grande trabalho de guitarra e da música soou clara e bem produzidos, bom trabalho!
Bobby Your right, this here has a beautiful melodic feel to it yet, still upbeat...very nice piano work bro, the beat fits the melody of the song, I like how you broke it down at 1:17, 3:22 & 3:43 very nice touch. Nothing left to say but great track, good job! P.S. Loved the title, faved.
Nice track Bobby, It's like pop/rock. I like the dark feel & sound to this, excellent work on those synths man, I really like that violin! Awesome bassline, but drop the volume on the bass just a little bit so it doesn't sound distorted, other than that, the mixing is perfect. Lastly, It would sound better if you faded out the end of the track instead of it just ending. Really nice track here, keep at it!!
Decent track, the synth are pretty good and the beat is decent as well, you just need to fix your bass as it sounds a bit distorted. Also turn up your snare/claps a little more, a little EQ-ing and this will could be even better!
This is a really awesome track! Nice beat, I like the piano, guitar & string synth lines and the bassline too. Very well produced, sound is crisp & clear, good job!
Yes, a really energetic track, I like this! First thing that struck me were the awesome synth lines used...loved them! Like the beat...does make me want to dance, the vocals are awesome and they fit so well with the track as a whole..not much to critique as the track is pretty well produced, great work you two!!
I liked this, has a nice vibe to it...really good synth work...The claps need to be a bit louder tho. I like how you broke the synths down for the verses, nice job man!
I like this track, nice beat and good synth work! The only thing I'll say is that you need to separate the verses & chorus by switching up the sound because the whole track uses the same synths which makes it seem like the song is looped...until the breakdown comes in and that part was dope, by the way...I like the low string synth in the background too...overall good job, with a little tweaking, it could be even better.
Nice track, love the vocals & harmonies...excellent voice...the beat itself has an old school feel to it, I like that....well rounded track, great job!
I like this alot, some things do need to be touched on like you said...but I love the chorus and the harmonies are dope, you have a unique voice...I dig the rest of the lyrics as well, but there's alot of pauses in your lyrics...not sure if that's how you intended it to be....Lastly the vocals are a little bit too loud for the beat and the vocals need a little EQ-ing so it sounds flush with the track....but like you said you have work to do on this so everything I pointed out, i'm sure you already know lol...excellent vocals harmonies...can't wait for the finished product!!
This really does song like a track that would be used in a James Bond movie or many other action flicks...I like the deep guitar synth...it does give the track a dark fill to it and I really liked the Thunder & Rain effect as well, good job here, Faved!!
This track is very different, I like it. It has a mixture of different sounds and cultures...I like the drum mix and the synths you chose for this fits the beat...some of the synths, like the horn & flute could be a little louder but other than that I like this!
Hey David, thanks for the reply. I had to listen to it one more time, and I can see what you mean with my horn and the flute. I will get on that, as soon as I can.
Rosh man, this track is nice! I love your rap delivery over this mid-tempo beat, the track itself is epic, love the cool soaring synth in the background & I dig the chorus...there's really nothing I could critique on this so good job!
Odd? A bit. Awesome? Very much so! This is a cool track, I like the complexity of it all, the synths are cool and I love the rock guitar hit in their. All you have to do is tweak the EQ-ing a bit so all the volume levels sound right together, nice job!!
I love this! The string work was awesome, the beat and bass are cool, I like the ambiance synth in the background! The only thing I would say is to turn the volume to the rest of the track up a little bit to match the volume of the bassline, other than that, excellent work Larz!!
Awesome track, killer drums, awesome guitar riffs...I like the guitar note slides in the beginning of the track and very cool how you closed the track...was hoping it to be a bit longer, but great work nonetheless!
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