RoyaleMuzik

Cool sound my man, really digging the guitar work! Great mixing, Sounds very crisp. Love when it kicks into high-octane around 1:38...good work!-Dave

Nice! Pretty cool track all around, nice vocals...they mesh perfectly with the awesomely spastic beat...very crisp sound, nice job! - Dave

Excellent tracks so far bro! I've always liked Dub-step and wanted to create a dub-step track but it's one genre I haven't yet mastered lol...anyhow, nice melody throughout. As Skhul had mentioned, I think this track would benefit from some hi-hats, I think then the sound would feel complete....nice work on the wobble bass!-Dave

Nice track here, you have a pretty good voice!

-David

I like this, really nice and mellow...I think think you choose the right genre...pop would even work too. I love the guitar synth, strings and bongo's....The bass should be turned down a little bit so it doesn't sound distorted...other than that, nice track here!

-David

Pretty decent track! Kinda has a little old-school sound to it...I like the scratches in their and the main synth line too. The first thing that came to mind when I heard this is that it reminds me of menu music from a video game...nice work!

-David

Hey, I like this track too...I like the mix between singing & rapping...the obvious as you already know is that the vocals need to be a bit louder....around the second chorus, something is out of sync...not sure if it the piano, the actual beat or the vocals...but I love the subject matter/lyrics...Love the music...it fit with the mood of the lyrics...just a little tweaking and this will be even better!

-David

I enjoyed this...you actually have a really good voice...there were some pitch problems but nothing too major. The track overall was nice, moody and mellow...loved the piano...well rounded track!

-David

First off: What caught my eye was the fact that you had "Pontiac" in the title, I drive a Pontiac so I had to give this listen Lol!! I really like this, the bass seems a bit distorted tho...It reminds me of a song that might play during a sex scene in an action flick. I liked some of the layers, and i'm not sure if it's because the bass is a little distorted but the other layers sound a bit distorted too. I think if you fix that up, you'd a have great track on your hands!

-David

Really nice sound to this, reminds me of some old school Ice cube in certain parts. I like the synth work here, and the actual beat is decent. You just need to add few more synths to distinguish a verse & chorus...but good start overall, keep at it!!

-David

First of: You got a nice sound here, love the synth/loop work in the background and that cymbal crash is dope! I like the slow rolling beat, fits perfectly with the rest of the sounds...the only thing is the timing: seems your kick, snare & hi-hats are a bit too fast for you synths/loop...so I would go back and try to match those things up with the synth/loop. Did you make most of this in FL Studio using the piano-roll? Overall good start man, a little work and this could shut sh*t down!! Keep at it, practice makes perfect!!

-David

Pretty decent for you first track, probably way better than my first track which was horrible lol! A little work on the bass is needed as well as a better way of closing the song, other than that, pretty good start...good luck!!

-David

Glad you could use the loops bro, I like the beat. At first I thought that maybe the beat was a little to busy, but I think it's just that the volume is a little to loud and the loop's volume to low. I think if you add maybe one or two of your own synth/loops to this, this could be even better. Nice start though!

-David aka Choki

Hey bro, I like how you used the loops, the beat is nice and meshes with the loops nicely. Only critique I have is that you should drop the volume to the bass, kick, hi-hat & cymbal just a little bit so the actual song sounds more in the forefront than the background, nice work tho!

-David

Really nice track here Bobby, I really like the beat. The guitar & piano work was excellent! Soooo loved the switch up at 0:59!! Around 2:15, some of the sounds got jumbled together and it didn't sound like they all meshed well but overall, really good track my friend!

-David

Yes, very club ready! I love the synth work here and synth placement...the vocals and bass-line are awesome, they compliment the beat nicely. Everything sounds cohesive and clear, good job!

-David

Cyprus Hill...that was the first thing I thought of when I heard the vocals...Definitely a dope track. Love the beat, reminds me of 90's Hip-Hop and the vocal work on here has professional quality to them, crisp, clear & easy to hear. Everything seems balanced: The beat doesn't overpower the vocals and the vocals doesn't override the beat, good job man!

-David

Really nice track, awesome sounds throughout! This sounds like Jazz-meets-rock-meets-funk...I probably would have classified it as funk...Anyhow,I love the up-tempo beat, I love the guitar & organ work here...I like how they go back and forth...like battle of the bands! Really couldn't critique anything here as everything is well mixed and crisp to the ear, so Good job!

-David

Really cool track, like the up-tempo dance beat and the synth work is pretty good...one of the synths remind me of an old video game...matter of fact this song sounds like it would fit perfectly on a Sonic the Hedgehog game. The only thing I would suggest is to turn your background synths down just a bit so they aren't too loud & overpowering the beat as it sounded at 0:43 to 0:57 & 1:49 to 2:16. Lastly, I would add another synth in there during the verses to break things up a little bit, so it won't so repetitive...Other than that, a pretty good track and I think it can be even better with a few tweaks, good job!

-David

I really like the tempo change...it seems to suit the track a bit better, good job! Still awesome wobble bass & still love how the track closes lol! Since you said this was intended to be a hip-hop/dub-step remix, you could go in many directions with your synths...Check out my loops page and browse a little if your stuck on coming up with new synths...I have a lot of cool synths that should fit majority genre's and I think I got a few good ones up that would fit this track like a glove...again, good job!

-David

Love that opening dude, really nice touch...your cheese piano synth is really good. Like the beat but I think it could use just a little more bass, I dig those hi-hats! Really, this is a near-flawless beat for your first complete one so good job on that man! It maybe needs one or two more dominate synth in the chorus to break the sound up a little bit, other than that, I think that the track is dope!!

-David

I really like the beginning and the tempo of the track caught me off guard but I like it. Really good job the wobble bass, though the track as a whole seems to be missing something...I think a few more well placed synths would make this a stand out track. I also enjoyed how you closed the track with the wobble bass synth. Overall good job, just a little more work and it'll be even better!!

-David

Really cool track here, really like that breakdown @ 0:50! The speed change at 1:17 was really cool, very nice synth work used through out the track. I really liked how you closed the track out with just the electronic synth and the bass...killer bass! Though, i"m not sure if you intended it that way but the very last seconds of the song kinda kept looping...and maybe one or two parts towards the middle of the track didn't sync up quite right. Overall, pretty decent track bro, A fave coming your way...keep it up!!

-David

Love a good R&B track, what can I say?! Excellent vocals and harmonies were on point, the lyrics themselves were decent too. What I really enjoyed was the beat itself, really laid back & mellow...reminded me of 90's R&B...something Kelly Price or Mariah Carey would tear up vocally! Production & vocal work is excellent, not sure about the flanger or phaser used towards the end though. Pretty well-rounded track, radio ready; good job!

-David

I thoroughly enjoyed this track...having said that, I haven't yet heard the original...have to check that out sometime today. The first thing that came to mind when I first listened to it was Need For Speed. Not sure if you are familiar with the Need For Speed racing video games, but this track sounded similar to the menu & race music on the game. @170 bpm, it's sounds a bit slower than that lol, but I like the ambiance sounds & the sliding bass. The chime is a nice touch as well, although I think it's volume is too loud and background vox isn't loud enough...Good track overall!

-David