This track is bananas!! That beginning synth, how it slides to change the note...dope! Loving the bassline,the keytar synth and awesome snare breakdown...sounds like a track Ludacris would flow on, keep at it pimpin!!
Dude this is really awesome!!! It's so cool to hear my loops in a different genre from what I initially used them in. Awesome house beat and I like how the beat switches, also like the beepline synth at 2:38...everything seems to mesh just right, excellent work!!
Lol this was awesome, I actually like the beat and the synths were cool...a few more synths and this could be even better! This sounds more like a dance track to me, hilarious lyrics, cool track!
Cool dance track, has potential! I like the beat and the synths are nice...this reminds me of video game music! What I would suggest to you is to come up with another synth or two, starting around 2:03 is where you could add another synth to switch it up...it's sounds a little repetitive towards the end but, good start!! P.S. come up with awesome name for your track & describe it a little bit so your listeners get a sense of what they're about to hear!!
I like the beat, the spacey synths are dope, only thing I'd say is not to have the delay on the entire vocals, just certain parts. Give the beat an intro, other than that the track is dope!
I wasn't to sure about the track until the actual drop came in at 1:40, this is a really cool track! I could defiantly hear this in a club/party, really cool up-tempo beat, excellent synths! Track may run a little too long, but awesome track!
For your first track, this isn't bad at all, pretty good actually. The guitar riffs are cool as is the actual beat, only thing I would say is that all of your riffs or synths don't have to follow the same speed as your beat...towards the end there was alot going on, I thought because everything is playing as fast at the beat. You can also throw a few more riffs/synths in the track to break it up a little more, but overall cool track!
Awesome track bro, love the beginning baseline, the synth work and killer wobble-bass!! In the beginning, I would turn the snare & the first synth up just a little bit more. For the second drop, If it were me, I would either take the pitch of all the synths up or down a few notches so the 2nd half of the song has a different feel/vibe too it or, I would take the notes used in the main synths and create a few different synths with VST's...just to beef it up a little....just suggestions, quite frankly, I like it as it is, good work!!
Not a bad track at all, I like the minimalistic approach to the beat, you have some good synths...I could hear this being played in a club or party. The high pitch tones add to what would have otherwise been a one dimensional track. Only critique I have is to throw a few more synths in towards the middle and end, that way it'll switch the sound up and keep the track from sounding repetitive, overall good work!!
Really digg this so far...dope beat, nice synth work...was waiting to hear more pitch change in the bass, think that'll really add to the track, lovin' the acapella sample, sounds a bit like Nicki Minaj....overall dope track, can't wait to hear the finished product! If you have a min, stop pass my page, awesome track!!
I love the beat, the flow of the lyrics...it all mesh so well together for a nice relaxing vibe...the only thing is, I think you should get a girl to sing the chorus, I think it would fit so much better with the rap vocals, overall great track!
yeah, I know what you mean my voice aint meant for this chorus. I got someone who can actually hit the notes on it now. appreciate your listen and opinion.
This is really, really dope! The melody of the song, the hook, the verse structure...I could go on, this does remind me a little of Jason Derülo only because of the auto-tune or vocoder, but you seem to be able to carry a note well, so i'm pretty sure your voice is good enough without the effects on it...looking forward to more of your music, excellent track!! P.S. This is going on my mix cd to listen in the car, I need music like this on the way to work!
I really like the sound of this so far and hope you continue to work on it til it's finished! It has a really relax vibe to it, the beat kind of takes the backseat to the actually melody, really nice track so far!
I really like this track, the minimalistic beat, the emotion filled synth work...very very nice and easy on the ears. Vocals for this track can go in so many different directions...a title that came to my mind when I played this was: "The lonely Road"...awesome track!-David
Glad you liked this track!
Happy you feel tha emotion I put
in this... ahaha a lot of feeling and
some thought into this!
And that title is almost perfect!
Nice track, I like the ambiance synth in the background during the beginning...Nice drum, bass & synth work, I would have switched the beat a little during the second half of the song so it doesn't sound too repetitive but otherwise awesome track!-David
This has a really cool sound and vibe too it, I like the intro and about 1:14 where the bass goes out, the breakdown @ 2:17 was nice...not sure though it fit with the first half of the song but still nice...I wish somewhere around the 4 minute mark, the song would have went back and used the synths from the beginning, overall good track!-David
thanks for your comment, since yday i figured I still got a lot of work to do on this one before 2nd part, so I'll prolly update this along making 2nd part in the course of this month, yer review is well appreciated-thanks
Really nice sound, laid back and mellow...I think of sitting somewhere after a long day, watching the sun wind down and just listening to this. At small parts, some of the notes in the synths were off beat slightly but would pick up the pace. Good track!
Excellent track, I can tell you took your time with this!! Very crisp sound, extremely awesome synth work, cool beat and great sound effects...nothing more to say other than great job!-David
Thank you!! Taking time on a track is most definitely the key to making a track acceptable haha. I'm gonna have to go back to all my others and bring them up to this level of production. Really glad you enjoyed this one! I'll swing by your page and check out your stuff as well. Cheers!
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