OK, the beat is actually pretty sick. As are some of the lyrics and the flow is really fitting. I can see why your frustrated, the mic quality isn't close to good enough. But I'd take solace in your ability. You have the skill to do it, you just need a better mic.
Don't know what to say really man, nothing I can do about it. I feel for you man, only reason I have a big set up is because I've spent 6 years building up my setup.
You need to hook up with someone thats got a mic and a vocal booth or has a studio link. These links are everywhere man, I don't know where you live so I can't say for sure, but I can say for sure that they'll be someone not too far away from you that has this stuff.
Good to know someone can appreciate Real Talent, I live in New Jersey about 10mins from NYC where I was born and raised.I do look for people I like to network but at the end of the day I don't like to ask anyone for anything,I like to work for it,it should be obvious to know what I need if they have it,but whatever, though it will be a while I will do this from scratch if need be and I will achieve my goals because I do know I have the talent I just gotta keep the drive and I will,I always appreciate the comments,makes me know what I have to focus on the most.
Good track man, if you want to send me the individual elements to this, I'd be up for giving it a shine/mix for you. This is a good track, just needs refining. Get a better mic too fam, it's essential.
Cool idea man, just got to work on your delivery and flow. I know this is a chilled track, but the vocals need a little more power even for a chilled track. The vocal ideas are good man, believe in yourself a little more man, you can do this if you want to.
You got the right ideas with your melodies, just need to refine the production a little. Sounds like you've been listening to Dupstep as well as electro?
MC sounds like MC Chris, or is that you? I've got the same set up at my house fam, duvets nailed to the wall, haha! Works tho. Little Jon still uses a mattress up against a wall at his studio. If it works,it works. If you got any accepallas of this guy, i'm up for doing a remix or too. The beats dope too, really nice.
Very nice track idea man, boost your vocals at 6k to bring them out over the track a little. Or if you want to send me the accapella, I can give it a lift for you. It it you on guitar and drums?
Some really good elements in here, I thought it was going to be a soft rock track when it started. If it were my track I'd expand on the first part with the guitar and the vocals, but that's just me. Keep on it fam.
Some nice stuff, def a little bit of Violent J in there. Stay on your game man, if you want to do this thing you can do it. You got the right idea star.
hell yea Violent J an Shaggy are some tha reasons I started doin what Im doin, but hopefully I've taken that style and refreshed it to be something new an more me, but thanks fer tha compliment, it duz put a smile on my face cuz I really dont think I sound that great, but thanks fer tha review been lookin forward to some creative critisizism so if you can think of anything I need improvement on jus lemme kno, apart from tha beats sjust mosstly looping sometimes Im jus in a hurry to finish songs so the beat movement is ussually minimal haha, thanks again
Some good elements in here, fam. Keep em coming. If you get a chance return the favour and have a listen to some a my Hip Hop. It's not Dirty South, but I think you'll like it.
The voice is a givaway, a bunch of my boys use it to make Dubstep and they're always using that function. I wish I had something that could do that in Logic fam!
I'm not a moderator or anything, don't apologise. It's just nice to know whats what, if they're are loops, if you played it all in yourself. Inspiration for the track, that sort of thing. Will get you more attention/reviews for a start. : p
Fruity Loops? It's a good beat man, really like the weird sample in the background, goes nice with Hip Hop. Check my hip hop stuff when you get a chance.
This sounds like an early Necro beat... Not anything in particular, just the sound of it.
I can see the Necro side in this. But for the "Chris Goodwin" yeah, that was Fruity Loops. I use it every now and then. And I'll definitely check out your stuff.
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Don't know what to say really man, nothing I can do about it. I feel for you man, only reason I have a big set up is because I've spent 6 years building up my setup.
You need to hook up with someone thats got a mic and a vocal booth or has a studio link. These links are everywhere man, I don't know where you live so I can't say for sure, but I can say for sure that they'll be someone not too far away from you that has this stuff.
Good luck to you brother. Keep doing your thing.
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Some good elements in here man, keep on it.
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Good vocals, seriously. Very nice.
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Nice track guys. You should check my Hip Hop tracks when you get a chance, think you'll be feeling them.
Cool, thanks fam. Appreciated.
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Just kiddin. Nice track tho for real man.
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Very nice track man, feeling this one. Sounds like an MPC beat? Is that how you're going on?
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The voice is a givaway, a bunch of my boys use it to make Dubstep and they're always using that function. I wish I had something that could do that in Logic fam!
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Just a tip.
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EDIT: As in, the description. The track itself is nice and full.
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This sounds like an early Necro beat... Not anything in particular, just the sound of it.