Judah76

"and nobody listens to radios anywhere else these days!"

That's not true, sir. Broadcast radio is still a huge medium (although not as frequented by the public as in the 80s & 90s). Major record labels still spend thousands of dollars in air-time for their releases. If this was not so, you and I could release our works on the radio. But we cannot because the Majors still have that medium virtually on lockdown (thus making it expensive for the little guys to enter). An independent artist's friend is still college radio.

Sounds more like Alternative and Punk Rock. The cymbals are a bit too loud. And that weird synth introduction drives the whole song into its own car crash. And the vocals, chiefly the chorus, are sitting in mud beneath the music! Vocals shouldn't sit under the music. This does a disservice to the vocals and makes her sound like Joan Jett (although at Joan's musical zenith).

The overall composition is good. The 30-second right channel pan could be annoying to some listeners. Left channel is too low even for a pan simply because it is a near-30 second stretch. For that reason, this would not be radio-friendly (ever wondered why no song ever played on the radio began with a channel panned?). It would work well in a movie or stage theater, but the pan would still need to be shortened to like 10 seconds. Love the break.

I've heard these vocals before and, yes, they're great. The first half is awesome; the second half lacks symmetry: your piano accompaniment is glitchy and out of tune. Fix that and your track is a heavyweight.

You have too much compression applied. I can hear clipping. The drumline is drowning out the synths & the music is above your vocals making it hard to hear them. The overall harmony is nice tho.

Sounds like a Timbalind hit! For Missy Elliot. Like it a lot. Good running time too.

Music is good. Good job not heavily compressing the vocals (like soooo many others habitually commit in error). The only issue I hear with this song is that the music is "above" the vocals and doesn't invoke a desire to have the song as a "favorite". Try dropping the guitar (or synth, if that's a synth & not guitar)& other non-percussion instruments under the vocals. Let the bassline ride over the vocals. Keep everything else the same (they're fine). Just some listener advice.