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sqrtofneg1

Some Imaginary Music
Vancouver, Canada
Joined : 23rd Aug 2016 - 9 years ago
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sqrtofneg1 has posted 115 comments on other peoples tracks.

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sqrtofneg1 6th Jul 2019 18:18 - 6 years ago

on Heaven - S Lullaby by Denjan
Hey!

I really like the whole vibe you were going for with this. The vocal chops sound really good with the effects you have on them. The muted/underwater feeling drums at the beginning fit really well.

Good job overall!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 6th Jul 2019 04:56 - 6 years ago

on falling instrumental by priest39
Hey!

This is some nice RnB vibes you've got here. I like the synths - especially the panning on them. The drums sounded a bit dead / synthetic - maybe some changes in velocity or something like that could help? The strings at 3:00 ish really help add some variation.

Well done!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 6th Jul 2019 01:31 - 6 years ago

on Listen by alpha2
Hey!

This is a really nice chilled out piece. Definitely a fan of the bass. The flute ish part that comes in around 0:44 is really nice. The constant shifting, yet keeping the atmosphere is great.

Well done!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 5th Jul 2019 22:42 - 6 years ago

on Sense - The Olden Ways Act 2 by Sense11
Hey!

This is some really good cinematic atmosphere you have. I really like the smaller details you put in.

Well done!
Sense11
Sense11 replied 6th Jul 2019 - 6 years ago
Thanks a lot for the feedback, I do appreciate it.
Keep up the good work, I enjoy what you are doing.
Ps. Go Canucks!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 5th Jul 2019 21:43 - 6 years ago

on The Purge by KnightHeir
I really like the beat, maybe a full version coming out soon?
Well done!
KnightHeir
KnightHeir replied 5th Jul 2019 - 6 years ago
Hadn't planned on making a full version but if people keep requesting ill definitely think about it. Thanks for stopping by!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 30th Jun 2019 04:00 - 6 years ago

on From Away by HeathAlexander
Hey!

I really liked this. Definitely gave me spacey vibes. I especially liked the female breathing in sound effect. The static in the background added a lot atmospherically.

Well done!
HeathAlexander
HeathAlexander replied 30th Jun 2019 - 6 years ago
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I'm looking forward to the 5th when I can hear your new tracks.
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 28th Jun 2019 20:39 - 6 years ago

on The Dream by itsJaia
Hey!

This is a piece that is really well done, it tells a story. I liked the vocal chops, as well as the intro part.
itsJaia
itsJaia replied 29th Jun 2019 - 6 years ago
Thank you!

I did my best with trying not to make the vocal chops overbearing
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 27th Jun 2019 18:20 - 6 years ago

on IMAGINE by SugarSim
Hey!

I felt that this was really well produced overall. Your builds are well structured. I think the main melody synth could have benefited with some more variety. Also, the ending seems like it is cut off - you should probably fix that.

Overall, well done!
SugarSim
SugarSim replied 28th Jun 2019 - 6 years ago
Thanks man, I appreciate your comment, I will follow your suggestion. ;)
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 25th Jun 2019 05:57 - 6 years ago

on Ambiaunt by DsideK
Hey!

I like how this one sounds! I liked the oscillating of the main chords. The instrument that comes in around 1:06 sounds really nice as well. Overall, nearly 5 minutes is a little long for my taste, but I like how you change it up throughout to keep it fresh to combat that.

Well done!
DsideK
DsideK replied 25th Jun 2019 - 6 years ago
Thanks! That means a lot. Yeah, when making a long song its difficult to keep everyone's attention which is why I tried to change it up. But thanks for the feedback.
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 24th Jun 2019 22:06 - 6 years ago

on In Yours hands by Denjan
Hey!

This is a well structured piece! I really liked the snare, as well as the section at 2:07 ish.

Well done!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 24th Jun 2019 19:12 - 6 years ago

on Summer by Musicbyraven
Hey!
I liked it overall, especially the cheering sound effect. You have some nice variations and overall progression.

Well done!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 22nd Jun 2019 09:44 - 6 years ago

on Escape From Love - Future Bass Remix by miazyo
Hey!
I felt that this was really well produced. The climax wasn't overdone, like many people often do, which sometimes subtract overall because there is too much polyphony, but I think having more of a focus on separate lines at different times help the audience appreciate each of them better.
Well done!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 21st Jun 2019 17:37 - 6 years ago

on Lt Sara Bande by HeathAlexander
Hey!
I found it really well made, especially since most similar tracks lack in variety, whereas yours doesn't. I like that you have clear cut sections. The sound effects that are dispersed throughout are well placed, especially the breathing one.

Well done!
HeathAlexander
HeathAlexander replied 22nd Jun 2019 - 6 years ago
Thank you. I'm glad you like the sound effects. The breathing is one of my favorites and I tend to use it occasionally. It fits a lot of roles.
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 21st Jun 2019 04:27 - 6 years ago

on Falling Stars by Lonelyawxy
Hey!

I felt the choice of the active bass was very interesting, as that's not something you expect in a lo-fi piece like this. To be honest, I felt it didn't fit that well, but I like that you're trying something new. Definitely some nice chilled vibes! The drums are well done especially in my opinion.
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 21st Jun 2019 00:31 - 6 years ago

on Speak Love by alpha2
Hey!

This is some nice arranging of the loops/samples you've got here.
Definitely very groovy, and the piano loop is really pretty. I like the panning you have on some of the drums as well.
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 20th Jun 2019 21:22 - 6 years ago

on GIVE IT ALL TO ME by acesmith
Hey!

Overall, this was a well made track! I would have mixed it so that the lower frequencies were a bit more prominent, but overall good mixing. I felt the woodblocky/rim sound at 1:38 was really nice.

Well done!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 20th Jun 2019 19:32 - 6 years ago

on Dreaming by mulaoff
Hey! I feel like the dreaming aspect that you were going for was well captured in the music!
Well done!
mulaoff
mulaoff replied 22nd Jun 2019 - 6 years ago
thanks, really appreciate it!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 24th Sep 2018 03:28 - 7 years ago

on Coco Puffs - CAP - FULL SONG by tsochai
Hey, it's really cool that you used my track.
I feel that the pitchshift/slowing down was a little bit too much that it distorted the original idea, but if that's what you wanted, good for you.
I think the echo effect/layer effect is too much when it's used through the whole track. Maybe just at a couple parts to give more emphasis would be better? I know you did do more at some parts than other parts, but even more variety would be great imo.
tsochai
tsochai replied 24th Sep 2018 - 7 years ago
i appreciate you comin out and giving me some advice.
i do agree it could become clunky because of the echo / delay.

the layered higher pitch vocals was a last minute decision. it was all plain one track based vocals.
anyways
thanks a lot for the track and advice.
stay tuned for more
thanks
-CAP
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 10th Sep 2018 22:19 - 7 years ago

on Substance - Instrumental by zipbass
This is really nice. Some really interesting, unexpected chords throughout.
Well done!
zipbass
zipbass replied 12th Sep 2018 - 7 years ago
Thank you =)
I will rebuild this track later.
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 5th Sep 2018 02:44 - 7 years ago

on Bxnner - Slow Down by silvester49
This is a really nice piece! I'm guessing you're not Bxnner? If you know him, give him my regards for a really chill song!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 14th Jun 2018 23:11 - 7 years ago

on SoulFul by GoTyBeaTs
Nice one!
The snappy percussion really feels like you're being attacked in a good way.
I really like the piano riff as well.
The ab libs are a nice touch throughout, especially with the echoes and the panning.
I feel that a little more dynamic diversity would have added so much, especially because this is 4+ minutes, a little bit on the long side for something with this little material - 2-3 minutes would be best imo.

Great job!
GoTyBeaTs
GoTyBeaTs replied 15th Jun 2018 - 7 years ago
Thanks for your fdbk sqrt...! I really appreciate it...! ;)
Keep on PLAY!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 13th Jun 2018 01:56 - 7 years ago

on Hold On by AnnFatman
I like it, well done, all of you!
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 12th Jun 2018 04:52 - 7 years ago

on Istambull Dog by BLEEP
C'est une composition tres interessant.
Il y a beaucoup de genres dans cette composition, et tout sont super.
J'aime particulierement la voix a 1:35.

Bravo!
BLEEP
BLEEP replied 12th Jun 2018 - 7 years ago
Hi Sqrtofneg1,

Thanks for your comment in french! for the vocals, of course, i wanted to give this track an oriental direction! Africa is the cradle of the humanity ;)
May be your already heard "No Quarter: Jimmy Page and Robert Plant Unledded" (1994) which influenced me. The music is universal and we should us inspired by this obvious fact. Barriers create the exclusion in a period when on the contrary we have to get closer and live, all, in harmony

Thanks again! friendly,
Bleep
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 11th Jun 2018 19:46 - 7 years ago

on My Space by Alayan10
This is a really nice emotional piece. The soft ticking is great, and so is the sustained strings - they add so much to the atmosphere.
I could definitely see this as music for a movie.
Great job!
Alayan10
Alayan10 replied 11th Jun 2018 - 7 years ago
Thank you!
the ticking represents of course the time, but mostly the way it passes. Slow in moments when nothing happens and more quickly at the most intense moment.
sqrtofneg1
sqrtofneg1 11th Jun 2018 06:23 - 7 years ago

on Anonymous - Main Theme by Trillify
Reminded me of the interstellar theme by Hans Zimmer, with the repeated note. I think it's even the same note, E.
I think it would have been more epic to add more instruments during the climax, but the solo piano might have been something you really wanted to go for, which I respect as well.
Good job!
Trillify
Trillify replied 11th Jun 2018 - 7 years ago
Thank you very much for your feedback!
I really appreciate it and of course I chose to only use a piano and no other instruments. I thought that the sound of a dramatic piano, would fit perfectly the atmosphere which I wanted for this track.
However thank you again for your feedback and I'm glad you like the track!
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