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Short and sweet man, good beat with this, Farisha can sing man, good job on this.

Man dude this track is killer, the vocals are a little boxy sounding but other than that it is great. Good job with this one, going to fav it.

Good start to the track, you have a great voice, it goes really well with my guitar loop, I look forward to hearing this one when its finished.

Nice man, this version is great, always like your tracks, always such good quality and very well put together. Keep it up man.

Love the vocals man, they work perfect for this track, good lyrics. Overall this is a great track, going to fav it. Good job man, I am impressed.

Wow this is great, the simplicity of a great vocal and acoustic guitar is simple yet very effective. I love this, everything in this track flows great, and it has a real nice quality to it. Good job on this, going to fav it.

Vocals are a little thin, but other than that this track is fantastic, if you can fatten up the vocals you will be a really great track. You can try doubling the vocals up and panning hard to the right and left, and eq a little as wayne mentioned. Nice job on the guitar, great lyrics, nice voice.

Nice a lot of cool sounds in this, the music really compliments the vocals nicely. Good job with this.

Nice one man, AllenV is amazing, one of the best guitarist on this site. Great track, everything is mixed great.

Love the slide guitar, it really gives the song a lot of character, for a rough draft this sounds pretty good. Good job with this, another great tune!!!!

I like what I am hearing so far, vocals sound real good, and the quality of the them is very good. Look forward to hearing more.

Great track man, I think some good vocals would really take it over the top

Nice track, love some slide guitar. Keep it up,

Interesting mix of sounds, everything works very well together. Has a touch of eighties, and so much more. Great job!

Nice job on this I really like the intro. Nice quality, everything is nice a balanced. Keep it up man.

Good vocals on this, I think the advice given is good advice, just wanted to let you know this is great pop track, I think if fix what has been said the song will be perfect.

REally nice job with this, I love the array of sounds you used in this track, the beat works really well with it as well. Great melodies happening in this man, keep it up.

Another great track man, I like the guitar a lot, really cool picking pattern. Real nice lyrics, overall a real good production. Keep it man, good stuff!!!

Chris I have said it before man, I am jealous of your voice, another great song, going to fav this one as well. Feels like I been waiting forever for a new track, so its nice to hear this one. Always love your work, great lyrics, guitar, and a great quality. Where is your record deal again? If anyone deserves on it is you man. Keep up the good songs man, I'm still a huge fan man!!! Any chance I can get a copy of this one as well?

Kyle

The intro is great, it drew me in right away, love the strings through out, and the beats fits nicely. Good job with this.

not a fan of the intro or lolita sounds, but after that the song takes off it is pretty good, good vocals, a bit of a bono sound.

Nice track man, has a nice laid back feel to it, I picture the dude from Lynyrd Skynyrd busting out onto this track. Nice job on this.

I like what you have done with this so far, keep going on it, the beginning was fine imo. Are you adding vocals, I think it would really the track stand out.

Another great track here, you have one of the best voices on here man. Very clear recording, what kind of mic do you use? Good job man.

Holy s*&t man this is awesome, your vocals are outstanding, very professional sounding track man. Everything about this is great, the lyrics are really good as well. Good job man, keep it up.