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Good voice and lyrics, the guitar sounds like save tonight by eagle eye cherry, but over all a pretty good song

Nice job with this, great voice, I don't mind autotune by any means, but you have a great voice and should not take away from it. REally good track here, going to fav!!!!

Nice job so far, I really like the guitar tone in this song, keep it up.

Very good track, going to fav this one, love the tone of the guitar and everything really meshes nicely, keep it up.

Killer track man, I going to download this one when you get finished. Everything about this is great. The vocals really compliment each other nicely.

Really nice job covering this song, I like the simplicity of the acoustic and your vocals. Speaking of vocals, very good job, great voice. Keep this one as is in my opinion. Good job with this, well worth the listen.

Good track, some good lyrics would be great with this to take away the repetitiveness I like the change at around 1:14. overall really good and well worth the listen.

I knew I was going to like this one soon as I heard it, good production. Keep it up man.

Really good production on this track man, good as always, I really like some of the effects that you used.

I don't know how I missed this track earlier, but this is great. Everything flows together nicely and really tells a story/sets a scene, which is very powerful in my opinion. Good job with this one.

wow blown away on this, great voice, great lyrics, and the production is really good as well. I really liked this one, going to fav it.

Nice track here, kind of reminds of Kings Of Leon. Good job with this, nice mellow feel to it.

Wow this is ridiculously wonderful man. I love this track, the cello? strings are amazing, really like it man, going to fav.

Hey man I listened to all of your tracks and I think this is my favorite, I'm a huge fan of distorted guitars and rap, so this one appeals to me. Love the flow of the lyrics on this, very catchy, one of the best I have heard on this site. Good job man, I look forward to hearing more from you.

Kyle

I think others have offered the same suggestions I would have, with that being said, I think this version sounds pretty cool, I really like your voice with this, and the guitar is done really well. Keep it up, make a few tweaks and it will be great.

Good track man, good lyrics and a pretty good production as well. I like your voice, goes really well with beats, keep it up man, good stuff here.

Short and sweet man, good beat with this, Farisha can sing man, good job on this.

Man dude this track is killer, the vocals are a little boxy sounding but other than that it is great. Good job with this one, going to fav it.

Good start to the track, you have a great voice, it goes really well with my guitar loop, I look forward to hearing this one when its finished.

Nice man, this version is great, always like your tracks, always such good quality and very well put together. Keep it up man.

Love the vocals man, they work perfect for this track, good lyrics. Overall this is a great track, going to fav it. Good job man, I am impressed.

Wow this is great, the simplicity of a great vocal and acoustic guitar is simple yet very effective. I love this, everything in this track flows great, and it has a real nice quality to it. Good job on this, going to fav it.

Vocals are a little thin, but other than that this track is fantastic, if you can fatten up the vocals you will be a really great track. You can try doubling the vocals up and panning hard to the right and left, and eq a little as wayne mentioned. Nice job on the guitar, great lyrics, nice voice.

Nice a lot of cool sounds in this, the music really compliments the vocals nicely. Good job with this.

Nice one man, AllenV is amazing, one of the best guitarist on this site. Great track, everything is mixed great.