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Very cool track, I like the beginning, sounds like the pretty woman riff. Vocals kick in and really round out the track. Thanks for sharing!

Good beat to this, all the sounds mesh nicely together. Good job!

Nice track man, the vocals are awesome! Good vibe to the track! Thanks for sharing.

Nice mix of sounds, has a nice professional quality to it.

Nice chilled out track, the nylon string guitar has a nice clean sound.

Nice job on this track, everything sounds good. Good lyrics

Good track, it's really well produced. Vocals sound great, good job on this and thanks for sharing!

Hey great vocals, I really like your voice and really enjoy all your tracks. Good job man, keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.

Kyle

Wow very nice track. A lot of emotion in the track, it really grabs the listener and keeps them interested in the track. Good job and thanks for sharing.

Kyle

Hey Mark good job on this track, you definitely gave this a nice modernization. Track is well produced as well. Thanks for sharing with us.

Kyle

Nice job on the vocals, they really good with the track, keep it up.

Kyle

Great job man, I love the vocals, you have an awesome voice. I do wish the song was longer, its an awesome song that I want to listen to longer. Keep up the good work, this is good stuff.

Kyle

Nice mix of sounds you got going here, everything compliments each other nicely. Keep it up!

Kyle

Hey good track man, you have a good country tone to your voice which I think is awesome. Overall production is great on the track, thanks for sharing.

Kyle

Wow man, I'm a big country fan and I think you did great on this, reminds me of 90's era track. Great vocals and the production is awesome as well, your vocals really sit up front on this, thanks for sharing.

Kyle

Hey Orlando nice job on this, its a nice mix of sounds that compliment each other pretty well. Good job and thanks for sharing.

Kyle

Wow man this is great, everything meshes nicely and compliments each they way that it should. Overall good track man, thanks for sharing.

Kyle

Nice track, it has a nice mix of sounds that compliment each other nicely. Good job on this.

Kyle

This is great man, lyrics are fantastic, and voice is great. Everything in this track really compliments everything nicely. I could easily listen to this one over and over again. Thanks for sharing!!

Kyle

Now this is my kind of track man, speaks some real truth. The track has great emotion to it, everything is well balanced. I will be coming to listen to this one again, a fav for sure, I would download it if it were available. Nice job and thanks for sharing this!!!

Kyle

Nice sounding track, this has a lot of potential if its further progressed. Good job on this and thanks for sharing.

Kyle

Hey good track man, saw your post in the forums. I like everything I am hearing, I'm listening on cheap headphones and they are not picking up any clipping. Nice mix of sounds and I get where you are coming from with your approach. Thanks for sharing this!!

Kyle

Great track, its nice by itself and really nice with the Valkyries vocals. Thanks for sharing!!

Good start to a track, too bad you won't finish it, it has lots of potential. Good vocals as well, compliments the music well.

The music was good, the lyrics were awful and over done by every other "rap" artist already. Just look in the news, most people are getting sick of people being disrespectful and the general downward direction this world is heading. Your words are only adding to the negativity that is over taking everything. Honestly, the lyrics are childish and don't paint a very good portrait of your self. If you are serious about making music and trying to make a name for yourself try coming up with lyrics that don't have so much swearing and negativity towards people. Think of it this way, is this a song you would want your Mom, Sister, Grandmother to hear, I would hope not. I think you have a lot of potential if you apply it in a better way. Anyway, this is not original and relies on shock value, which has no value these days. Not trying to be a jerk....just honest like you asked.