Tiltedbeats

that was very interesting!

personally the tunes changes to much for me, you have so many different melodies mix in there! that potentially could be other tracks! i liked certain parts a lot! but i can't say i liked the vocals, sorry!

id love to do a remix of it! however id only use a few of the several melodies you put in there, and make it darker.

well done mate!!
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B.S

really enjoyed this piece!
very clubby!!!
isn't holly's voice great???, love it!!! (rhetorical LOL)

sweet as beats, needs some filler synths in there, maybe some pads.

wicked though ;)

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B.S

nice track mate!

it is very beats focused in parts, the switches are good!
well done.

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B.S

good effort man,

there is much to love here!
im a fan of those beats ;) but then again im a sucker for any hip-hop beat!

well done!
B.S

well done mate, this is nice!

you've definately got some talent behind ya! i started loving music around your age too, i can only imagine what you will be like in a few years time.

keep it up bud ;)
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B.S

surprised nobody has reviewed this yet, i love it! you guys sure busted a move with this one! love the string stabs in there, and the lead synth, really feels as though you are moving!

sick ending as well!!

great tuneage guys, keep collabing if this is what you guys turn out!

ima d/l and fav this piece!

keep it coming!
B.S

yep this track is pretty sweet mate!

yer totally agree with ryckio, but there is a point where you can't keep refining, because you just get to critical of it, so once your happy with it just leave it!

but yer, i like the tune, its simple and has great elements in it. ditto to eshar, id bust a move on this baby HAHAHA

keep it up mate!
B.S

this is great! I've got to hand it to ya, musically perfect. all aspects of a great tune are covered! beats are great, and all other individual melodies come together and form this amazing sound!

very well done mate ;)
FAVED d-_-b
B.S

this is not a bad effort for your first tune! i congratulate you on that, can't wait to hear more from you and see you grow :)

well done, stay creative and most of all enjoy yourself!

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B.S

love the background synths, and all round good effort here!
maybe, make the tune run for a few more minutes, i would drop it again (traditional DnB has 2 drops) this is quite good other than that!

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B.S

i heard the original 4 gray walls pella not so long ago, and the first second i heard the voice i was like 'sickkkk' love the voice and tone of it, awesome chill music.

i have this picture in my head of a guy, in a car, window down, with his elbow leaning on the window, bopping his head and singing the tune. HAHAHHA

sweet vibes mate!

PS: just curious where you got that intro sample from, of the guy getting into the car. because i heard something quite similar on a Stanton warriors tune, a bit different, but similar! both gives the tune a great mood :)

love all three parts you got here mate ;)
especially the 1st, like you say, 'it has a nice ring to it' totally agree!

REPLAY ;)

easy soft DnB, great sounds here mate, and professional usage of that sitar and flute ;) compliments each other very well!

yer this is a pretty sweet tune you got here mate. was not expecting that beat drop @ 10 seconds, but after listening to it again, it fits quite well. well done mate, sick tune!

this is wicked man!
im working on a dubstep tune now at the moment. it's good to have another dubsteper here, keep it coming mate.

PEACE!
B.S

nice tune, i agree with Fergal, the riff is top stuff! great sequencing, and all round good sounds to my ears!

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B.S

yeahhh, this is well good!!! bass-line is wicked, great sounds here! 2 thumbs up!

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B.S

masterpiece, not much else you can say, the beats are sequenced perfectly with so much variety, i would love to know how many different beat samples were used. overall, love it, so smooth and all melodies compliment the beats very well!

would love to hear the whole tune in its entirety!
big ups mate!

B.S

vintage alright, this is a treasure, its great!
love the snares :) so old school now, but not back then, how music has changed ayeee!!! this is great stuff!

B.S

wooow man, this is deep. i can feel the pure emotion. love the beats, the mild piano, the expression in the lyrics, and the way they convey your feelings ! all in all, great track.

yep, great track mate!

simple, yet so effective, love the arp'd sounds, beats and breezy atmospheric synths. good job

yep another great tune!

love the melodies in there. they compliment each other very well. i don't care if you used that FL studio drum loop sample, it sounds perfect in this tune! there is some real potential in you, good luck with your future musical efforts! keep me informed.

deffs faving this!! ;)

hi

first of all, i think the tune is great!
although i do agree with Alividlife, once the mastering is done, it will be a masterpiece :)

as Alividlife says droping the Db will help loads, also i believe you should learn to equalize the frequencies, this will further counter the clipping and/or overlapping.

personally i find it easiest to solo your melodies and use a frequency analyzer plugin, to get a clearer view of what frequency range each part of your tune is running at. and based on that you can figure out where parts a conflicting, and if they are conflicting you then adjust the certain part using an EQ plugin.

having said this, it is important that you do the research, because there is always more to learn :)

hope that helps!

anyways, good luck, and... yep im also a fan :) very chilled sounds and catchy melodies here, can't wait to here the collab!!!

im not the one for listening to house, but i don't mind this tune at all:) easy to listen to, and all round good blend of sounds! well done!