Uhhhh, I feel the summertime.. For some reason, and I am probably off base, but i feel Jack Johnson/G. Love/John Butler Trio feel. (I bet you have heard this guys, if not, CHECK EM OUT, You will dig)
Really good. Way better than I can do. lol.
It's hard to say man. It's short, but your use of space is good. Don't lose the space, it adds to your ambiance, in your favor.
Ohh and finally, 78 BPM... well, times that by 3/4, a 1/2? see what you can find? It might work. Go with your feel with samples, but then again, I feel like that guy who is giving financial advice but is always broke, because I am sucking with the looping.
And yah, this is one of the best tracks I have heard on looperman, AND you used loops from Looperman!
I like the mood. Big time. it's like I punch you in the face mood.
Early NIN, meets ministry, meets a punch in the lip.
FUCKING AWESOME GUITAR! HOW DID YOU EQ THAT!? The end progression is the shit.
Delay on the hi-hat? might sound cool as crap.
Oh.. and check out Izotope Ozone... Don't know how compatible it is with FL.. but it has everything you need to make each track sparkle. Takes a large load on the CPU and memory tho. just recommending it. It's like 59 bucks or something, and worth every penny. (Audition has Izotope ingrained in its EQ stuff, but it is a really a live recording program... imo...)
I know a lot of people hate reverb, but this song might become larger with some reverb. Especially on the drums. Plate Reverb.
Please don't think I am ragging, I am just giving you my honest opinion.
(My songs sound waaaaay shittier lol)
Were this the actual full version of the song, I had to edit some of the end, and I did a mild edit and added some more guitar action to it. Here are the lyrics though...
Verse 1 time 1:00
What could I do to make you see
What's left is not much inside me
What could I do to make you know
That there's not much room left to grow
What could I do to make you see
What was once there has left me
What could I do to make you understand
There's not much left to this man
Bridge 1 time 1:48
Everytime I look in your eyes
Something inside me slowly dies
I can I can't I will I won't face me
Everytime I feel those lips
Something inside me loses grip
I can't I can I won't I will give it all to
Chorus time 2:12
You!!!!!!
I can I can't give it you!!!!!!
I will I won't give it to you!!!!!!
I can't give everything
I won't give everything to...
You!!!! to...
You!!!! to...
You!!!!
I already have...
Verse 2 time 3:24
How many times have we played this game
It's like I'm lost inside a name
How many tears must I hide
To make it out of here alive
How many lives must we live
Without another reason to give
Up that little piece in our mind
That lets us live so deprived...
Bridge 2 time 4:12
Everytime I look into my soul
I see something filling this hole
I can I can't I will I won't see me without...
Chorus time 4:23
You!!!!!
I can't see myself without you!
I won't see myself without you!
I gave my everything to...
You are my everything, you are... you are...
You!!! You are...
You!!! You are...
You!!!
And now it all feels right...
End 5:11
I can I can't give it you!
I will I won't give it to you!
I can't see myself without you!
I won't see myself without you!
I am I am you are you are
Everything that is right
I am I am you are you are
Everything that I need
You!!!!
You!!!!
You!!!!
You are all that matters...
I like the airplanes.. good sample use.
I think it's perfect, I would like to hear a pause, and reiterate the voices with an airplane. all down-tempo.. But regardless, this is awesome, inspired me..
The only thing I remember from Chernobyl was something about an elephant (meltdown or structure.. I was young).. and that it was a disaster.. I guess you get that double treatment from the US after the cold war.
I really like the bass on this about a minute and a half in.. I don't like the high pitched whole not sound tho.
But that means nothing compared to the whole, I like this.
Captains name is Peirce. Dick, is his first name... He is from Oahu. Which HE IS not originally from Hawaii, but his mother is actually Filipino. They Eat brains the marines. Brains are good.
Totally. Brain eating Filipino's really piss me off, thinks the self-loathing captain scratching at the door.
Crazy Door lock won't open properly leaving Crazy Captain Dick Pierce stuck in a drunken zombie lull.. For ever.
What's the babies name? I think that would make it a more interesting and personal title.. but keep the (Lets make a toast)
I hear 70's guitar rock all over this... Raise skynyrd from the dead!
I really dig this..
OOOHH and nice ending! That gave me chills....
Cheers!
on Brown Paper Bag by Matney
Really good. Way better than I can do. lol.
It's hard to say man. It's short, but your use of space is good. Don't lose the space, it adds to your ambiance, in your favor.
Ohh and finally, 78 BPM... well, times that by 3/4, a 1/2? see what you can find? It might work. Go with your feel with samples, but then again, I feel like that guy who is giving financial advice but is always broke, because I am sucking with the looping.
And yah, this is one of the best tracks I have heard on looperman, AND you used loops from Looperman!
Elongate. That's all.
on Slowing things down... by bigblondemick
It's really good. With a live ensemble this would own peoples faces.
Add that fuzz guitar solo at the 3 minute mark!! Just play like one note tremelo stuff!! it would sound sick!
on Caz - Full and Slighty Edited by bigblondemick
Early NIN, meets ministry, meets a punch in the lip.
FUCKING AWESOME GUITAR! HOW DID YOU EQ THAT!? The end progression is the shit.
Delay on the hi-hat? might sound cool as crap.
Oh.. and check out Izotope Ozone... Don't know how compatible it is with FL.. but it has everything you need to make each track sparkle. Takes a large load on the CPU and memory tho. just recommending it. It's like 59 bucks or something, and worth every penny. (Audition has Izotope ingrained in its EQ stuff, but it is a really a live recording program... imo...)
I know a lot of people hate reverb, but this song might become larger with some reverb. Especially on the drums. Plate Reverb.
Please don't think I am ragging, I am just giving you my honest opinion.
(My songs sound waaaaay shittier lol)
Verse 1 time 1:00
What could I do to make you see
What's left is not much inside me
What could I do to make you know
That there's not much room left to grow
What could I do to make you see
What was once there has left me
What could I do to make you understand
There's not much left to this man
Bridge 1 time 1:48
Everytime I look in your eyes
Something inside me slowly dies
I can I can't I will I won't face me
Everytime I feel those lips
Something inside me loses grip
I can't I can I won't I will give it all to
Chorus time 2:12
You!!!!!!
I can I can't give it you!!!!!!
I will I won't give it to you!!!!!!
I can't give everything
I won't give everything to...
You!!!! to...
You!!!! to...
You!!!!
I already have...
Verse 2 time 3:24
How many times have we played this game
It's like I'm lost inside a name
How many tears must I hide
To make it out of here alive
How many lives must we live
Without another reason to give
Up that little piece in our mind
That lets us live so deprived...
Bridge 2 time 4:12
Everytime I look into my soul
I see something filling this hole
I can I can't I will I won't see me without...
Chorus time 4:23
You!!!!!
I can't see myself without you!
I won't see myself without you!
I gave my everything to...
You are my everything, you are... you are...
You!!! You are...
You!!! You are...
You!!!
And now it all feels right...
End 5:11
I can I can't give it you!
I will I won't give it to you!
I can't see myself without you!
I won't see myself without you!
I am I am you are you are
Everything that is right
I am I am you are you are
Everything that I need
You!!!!
You!!!!
You!!!!
You are all that matters...
on Chernobyl by Planetjazzbass
I think it's perfect, I would like to hear a pause, and reiterate the voices with an airplane. all down-tempo.. But regardless, this is awesome, inspired me..
The only thing I remember from Chernobyl was something about an elephant (meltdown or structure.. I was young).. and that it was a disaster.. I guess you get that double treatment from the US after the cold war.
But on a lighter note, GOOD WORK!
on Kraken by TheseMetalDays
But that means nothing compared to the whole, I like this.
by the way, i forgot to fav. this.
on Freak out by DJ_JEZZA
Captains name is Peirce. Dick, is his first name... He is from Oahu. Which HE IS not originally from Hawaii, but his mother is actually Filipino. They Eat brains the marines. Brains are good.
Totally. Brain eating Filipino's really piss me off, thinks the self-loathing captain scratching at the door.
Crazy Door lock won't open properly leaving Crazy Captain Dick Pierce stuck in a drunken zombie lull.. For ever.
The end.
Thanks for the laugh and the review :)
DJ_JEZZA
on Collab DJ Fred Val - Soulfull. R.F.F.F. by Soulfull
WHAT HAVE U DONE TO MUSIC?!!!
Keep it up.
Thanks for listening.
Cheers S.
on Hallelujah (Lets make a toast) by irkano
I hear 70's guitar rock all over this... Raise skynyrd from the dead!
I really dig this..
OOOHH and nice ending! That gave me chills....
Cheers!
May I Rock out too? Downloading now.
on Another Slow by ir185017
It feels serious to me.
Any idea's on changes or bridges?
I like it. Keep going!