Awesome stuff man. Great use of interview vocals. Only one thing, if the first two vox were spaced a little bit more think it would make the whole track flow smoother. But other than this was excellent.
I appreciate the feedback! I wanted to experiment with this track and I knew that uploading it to Looperman would be the best way to get some honest and constructive comments because everyone on this site likes to do their own thing and not be held behind a certain genre!
Enjoyed everything about this track except the vocals at(0:08-0:16) in the beginning over the sample. If you added some type of variation to the hook I think it would improve the track as a whole. Excellent production though. Would definitely be interested in a collaboration if you're interested.
Hey, I appreciate the feedback dude. I shooting for something simple, and the hook was a little lazy... didn't put much effort in it. And sure, I don't mind collaboration. Hit me up when you have a something in mind.
Felt obligated to listen to this, I was born in 94 as well.
Good track, I'll be checking out your mixtape. Now that summer is here I can finally invest in some decent equipment. Have a ton of projects drafted but tuition and books are always bitch. Look forward to a possible collaboration with you in the next few weeks.
Damn homie this is very impressive. Can definitely hear the hunger and ambition in your voice. One of the best lyrical verses I've heard in a while on looperman. Flow & production were superb as well. Continue putting out tracks like this and you'll continue to rise.
Hey SubFreq thanks for the support! Glad you like this piece. Yeah industrial tracks are pretty cool but it's not one of my specialties. In fact this is only the second one I've done so far. Really appreciate the comments and listening in. Peace..... Dan
On my laptop w/o headphones at the moment so I can't judge production but regardless another strong yet simple track. Passive aggressiveness brings out the potential in your vocals for this particular track. Great track man.
Solid bars, really nice track(flow & production). My only recommendation is that when rapping at this pace keep in mind most people don't actively listen to music. Because of this placing emphasis on certain punchlines can be crucial. Other than that this was pretty hardcore man.
Thank you for the listen and the feedback. I'll try to look more at my structuring. I knew some things were funky in it, but didn't take the time to iron it out completely yet. I appreciate the advice.
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