Awesome stuff man. Great use of interview vocals. Only one thing, if the first two vox were spaced a little bit more think it would make the whole track flow smoother. But other than this was excellent.
I appreciate the feedback! I wanted to experiment with this track and I knew that uploading it to Looperman would be the best way to get some honest and constructive comments because everyone on this site likes to do their own thing and not be held behind a certain genre!
Enjoyed everything about this track except the vocals at(0:08-0:16) in the beginning over the sample. If you added some type of variation to the hook I think it would improve the track as a whole. Excellent production though. Would definitely be interested in a collaboration if you're interested.
Hey, I appreciate the feedback dude. I shooting for something simple, and the hook was a little lazy... didn't put much effort in it. And sure, I don't mind collaboration. Hit me up when you have a something in mind.
Felt obligated to listen to this, I was born in 94 as well. Good track, I'll be checking out your mixtape. Now that summer is here I can finally invest in some decent equipment. Have a ton of projects drafted but tuition and books are always bitch. Look forward to a possible collaboration with you in the next few weeks.
Damn homie this is very impressive. Can definitely hear the hunger and ambition in your voice. One of the best lyrical verses I've heard in a while on looperman. Flow & production were superb as well. Continue putting out tracks like this and you'll continue to rise.
Hey SubFreq thanks for the support! Glad you like this piece. Yeah industrial tracks are pretty cool but it's not one of my specialties. In fact this is only the second one I've done so far. Really appreciate the comments and listening in. Peace..... Dan
On my laptop w/o headphones at the moment so I can't judge production but regardless another strong yet simple track. Passive aggressiveness brings out the potential in your vocals for this particular track. Great track man.
Solid bars, really nice track(flow & production). My only recommendation is that when rapping at this pace keep in mind most people don't actively listen to music. Because of this placing emphasis on certain punchlines can be crucial. Other than that this was pretty hardcore man.
Thank you for the listen and the feedback. I'll try to look more at my structuring. I knew some things were funky in it, but didn't take the time to iron it out completely yet. I appreciate the advice.
Commented on Trap VS EDM by DeLaBeatz
here it is, hope we did it some justice
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/159663
Commented on Hip Hop Instrumental by DeLaBeatz
Just finished laying down some vocals with sam on your other track, gonna send em to you
Commented on Hip Hop Instrumental by DeLaBeatz
Another fire track man!!
Commented on Trap VS EDM by DeLaBeatz
Love this- gonna try and see what I can do with it
Commented on The Carnival by StaticProjekt
Very exciting track man. Smooth intro/outro as well.
Commented on Angel and a Demon by Emolyte
First track I've heard from you, let me just say this is extraordinary man. Really good work.
Commented on Radio Illuminati - Ft Professor Griff - Buzzsaw by radioilluminati
Awesome stuff man. Great use of interview vocals. Only one thing, if the first two vox were spaced a little bit more think it would make the whole track flow smoother. But other than this was excellent.
Commented on Fire away - looking for a vocalist by johnnyproducing
Love this. Especially those drums and the piano chords in the middle. Great work!!!
Commented on Stay Back Freestyle by mackeymarshel
Wasn't bad but I don't think the track suited your vocals(or the other way around).
Commented on Who I Are by VicaMOOR
Enjoyed everything about this track except the vocals at(0:08-0:16) in the beginning over the sample. If you added some type of variation to the hook I think it would improve the track as a whole. Excellent production though. Would definitely be interested in a collaboration if you're interested.
Commented on Insurrection Ft Sam French by SamFrench666
Killed me on my own track lol. This is beyond awesome.
Commented on The Sting by DESTERO
This is amazing bro. Wish I could be more specific but it's just a great track. Vocals and production are on point.
Commented on H-R-Z - Fake Me TEASE by HardstyleRythm
Pretty dope intro. Love how it builds up anticipation. Track has a lot of potential. Look forward to hearing it after it has been completed.
Commented on Doing the best I can by benjizo
This is awesome man. If you still need someone to drop something decent on this I might be able to help.
Commented on French Ft SubFre Quinox Prod by JamesEckBeats by SamFrench666
Great job on mixing the tracks man, just posted another one of our joint collabos
https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/156978
Commented on Blvck Davinci-Established 1994 by BlvckDavinci
Felt obligated to listen to this, I was born in 94 as well.
Good track, I'll be checking out your mixtape. Now that summer is here I can finally invest in some decent equipment. Have a ton of projects drafted but tuition and books are always bitch. Look forward to a possible collaboration with you in the next few weeks.
Commented on Radio Illuminati - V2 Feat AMVIS by radioilluminati
Great track as a whole but that verse was incredible.
Commented on Fly Tonite by kaziel
Damn homie this is very impressive. Can definitely hear the hunger and ambition in your voice. One of the best lyrical verses I've heard in a while on looperman. Flow & production were superb as well. Continue putting out tracks like this and you'll continue to rise.
Commented on AWAKENING by dansjoy4
Hardcore track man. Didn't know what to expect since I'm not really familiar with this genre but you did an awesome job. Never gets boring.
Commented on classic by benjizo
very smooth/relaxing track. Sample could be a little louder in the beginning but other than that great job man.
Commented on Android Porn - Brutal Remix by Abilify
Extremely tough track man. Great work bro.
Commented on Sik Style - Dislike me by SikStyle1
On my laptop w/o headphones at the moment so I can't judge production but regardless another strong yet simple track. Passive aggressiveness brings out the potential in your vocals for this particular track. Great track man.
Commented on Flaws I See -BabylonInDreams- by NuriB
Solid bars, really nice track(flow & production). My only recommendation is that when rapping at this pace keep in mind most people don't actively listen to music. Because of this placing emphasis on certain punchlines can be crucial. Other than that this was pretty hardcore man.
Commented on Catastrophe by HazestarzHypnotic1
Not what I was expecting, it was actually a lot better. That hook/chorus is amazing, even more so since it's hype music.
Commented on Enlighten by ToneSeta
Dope indeed. I could see why it would be a difficult track to cover. Not bad at all bro.