thanks for you comment of this time i said goodby to you tracks its a work in progress, the song should be melancolique ¨like sad a bit ¨sorry for my english , and ruff when i arrived at this time or the siger have to tell i have enought, fuck you, this time ,i tell you goodby asshell, i put 2 parts of the song intro and the middle the miss the progressio to the middle and the coda, I DIDNT KNOW YOU, I WENT TO LISTEN YOUR TRACKS AND I WAS IMPRESS BY YOU AND YOUR WORKS, LET ME TELL YOU ITS JUST AMAZING HOW YOU HAVE TALENTS YOU HAVE A GREAT FUTUR LIKE COMPOSOR AND WRITER , IF YOU LIKE COLLABORATION I KNOW YONG SINGER, MY IDEA IS TO MIX SOME OF YOUR TRACK WITH THR VOICE OF JAY IF YOU OK WITH THAT LET ME KNOW
Man i really like this one. Im a sucker for choir sounds, which go really nicely where you put them. Especailly at 2:36.
My only suggestion is maybe add one more type of melody somewhere in the middle, so its not too repetitive, but even as it is, i really like it.
Not sure if you understand what rough draft means but, maybe that's just me. Nothing I post on here will ever be a final product. If you really payed attention you would of heard other mistakes made while hastily recording this track. Looperman members give me an idea on if the song will be a hit or miss. Thus the reason why I post on the Loop. LoL, thanks for the review man.
Definitely love the darker aspect of it more than the "cheesy ass chipmunk bubblegum synth business" as valvedriver puts it haha. Flow is very nice, and overall great job!
Man thank you for stopping by and leaving a review, glad you enjoyed the track, I think vocals sound okies, but did have to adjust slightly so they would go with the track, as I am very limited on vocals in library, but think they work well in the piece....Peace Mosaic...
wow, this is awesome, i love the piano and the synths, and this brings back a lot of memories for some reason, the biggest one being Code Lyoko. (Tv show)
Thanks EyeDye! I'm happy this brought back memories. That puts a smile on my face and lets me know I'm doing something right!
If you think you can come up with some nice lyrics and you're willing to sing on this by all means give it a shot. Would love to hear what you come up with. Send me a pm if you need anything or just want to send me the finish product. I'll help as much as needed.
Thanks Mate,
sorry for this late Answer,but in Meantime i decide to made a little Upgrade on this Track. Drums and some different Transitions musst be done. This takes a little Time so i forget to answer youre Comment.
Nice to know that you like. Maybe you have Time to join the Upgraded Version and tell me what you think.
Wow...im instantly grabbed in, and the Bleep melody takes me even further in. The stories that could be made with this in my mind are endless...amazing work!
amazing work! the flow of everything is great! The tempo changes, the instruments going into the synths.. ahhh, relaxed me and made my head bob all at the same tim
Tim is a good man. He is so used to being bobbed at that he hardly even notices anymore.
Much like the Rain-God in the Hitchhikers Guide series who doesn't know he's a Rain-God, bringing the rain to all the land, no, he thinks that he is a delivery driver who has the worst luck with the weather since it's always raining where he's at. Everywhere he goes, rain.
Anyway, thanks for the listen, and tell Tim I said hi.
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My only suggestion is maybe add one more type of melody somewhere in the middle, so its not too repetitive, but even as it is, i really like it.
Kind regards,
Steve
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Man thank you for stopping by and leaving a review, glad you enjoyed the track, I think vocals sound okies, but did have to adjust slightly so they would go with the track, as I am very limited on vocals in library, but think they work well in the piece....Peace Mosaic...
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Wonder what some vocals could do this?
If you think you can come up with some nice lyrics and you're willing to sing on this by all means give it a shot. Would love to hear what you come up with. Send me a pm if you need anything or just want to send me the finish product. I'll help as much as needed.
Thanks for stopping by, have a nice day :)
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Nice work!
sorry for this late Answer,but in Meantime i decide to made a little Upgrade on this Track. Drums and some different Transitions musst be done. This takes a little Time so i forget to answer youre Comment.
Nice to know that you like. Maybe you have Time to join the Upgraded Version and tell me what you think.
Cheers
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Much like the Rain-God in the Hitchhikers Guide series who doesn't know he's a Rain-God, bringing the rain to all the land, no, he thinks that he is a delivery driver who has the worst luck with the weather since it's always raining where he's at. Everywhere he goes, rain.
Anyway, thanks for the listen, and tell Tim I said hi.
Evan
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