This track is so cool with YOU singing it. The concept of a guy at a club falling in love with the DJ. The concept is outside of the box and original. It shows vulnerability, and that takes courage to display.
This track has "good bones" and you have a wonderful voice. There is a sincerity (not forced) quality in your voice. Don't hid it behind a "vocoder". I know this is the thing for today's music, but I view the use of the vocoder effect as a screen so you cannot hear the true quality of the voice. You have a great quality to yours, show it off!!
As for the song, as I mentioned, it has good bones. All I see lacking in this song is your confidence in your ability. I can hear you are talented, believe in yourself and finish your song!!
Not intending to sound redundant, but this is beautiful! This track is medicinal. I literally feel the tension leaving my body as the track is playing....Wow!
Always been a person willing to help different cause and this was the greatest of all thus far.Reaching out to those in need makes you feel good about yourself because you have the power to change many lives; unforgettable!
The good thing about exploring different environments is that you can discover the most unexpected talents there is.We managed to create artists out of young prisoners who felt like expressing their story through music.This was a gift not only for them but for us also.Much luv for the Fav sweetie :)
This is an "epic" piece. Well orchestrated with a well balanced mix of drama.
The fadeout before entering into the dialog at the end of the song was a little confusing to me. I thought the song was ending. Some may , as myself, when hearing the start of a fadeout, will go to the next song. Just something you may want to consider.
This track reminds me of a recent concert I atteneded. It was Alan Holdsworth, Terry Bozio, and Tony Levin. It was two hours of freeform improv. Awesome!!
Great orchestration and message! It thrills my soul to see youth today using their talents to send a message of hope. There are so many who need to be reminded.
Much luv my sista and as you said; we bring to the table songs for future generations to come.We're actually planning to do a video for this one; i'll keep you updated!
on Feelin Good by Brent88
Great work!!
Twanna
on Hammer Down by AllenV
Great track.
AV
on When You Leave - SpellJammer ft Slap Johnson by AllenV
Twanna
Thanks again so very much...Oh,Spell and Slap appreciates it also : )
Allen
on Dirty V by DFury
on Why Dont We by ImDangerous
Fav'd
on Hands Up by ImDangerous
on My Body by ImDangerous
Other than that, another great track.
Twanna
on The DJ by ImDangerous
Great job again.
on Let Me Know - looking to collab by ImDangerous
As for the song, as I mentioned, it has good bones. All I see lacking in this song is your confidence in your ability. I can hear you are talented, believe in yourself and finish your song!!
I know you will do a great job.
God bless.
on When I touch heaven by nolochemical
Great job.
Twanna
on dream fire by 67Ecosse
Thank you for the experience.
Twanna
on The Rising Sun by 67Ecosse
Great work!!
Twanna
on Chipped Bhudda by Planetjazzbass
Great work.
Twanna
on Genocide ft Los Rakas - Esa Mulata (2008) by MaxJC
Another great job.
Twanna
on Genocide ft Lokoton - Zelba de Cemento by MaxJC
Great track!! fav'd
Twanna
on REALLY BOUT MY by datni33adayz
Twanna
on SO LONG by datni33adayz
Twanna
on Constant Temperature Pump by visionarysoundsystem
Very creative blend of Reggae, Asian, and African vibe. Really enjoyed it!!
Twanna
on If I Die Before I Wake by CrashTheSystem
The fadeout before entering into the dialog at the end of the song was a little confusing to me. I thought the song was ending. Some may , as myself, when hearing the start of a fadeout, will go to the next song. Just something you may want to consider.
Other than that, a very powerful piece.
Twanna
on Soaking Wet by momoracci
Fav'd,
Twanna
on funkytown by momoracci
Great job.
Fav'd,
Twanna
on Circuit Breaker by jfw
Jamie.
on Cairo by jfw
Wow!!
Jamie.
on Scenes from a City by jfw
Brilliant!!
Jamie.
on Struggle Of Mine by MaxJC
You are very talented!
God bless,
Twanna
MJC