Twanna1

Refusing to live by others expectations

Sacramento, United States

Joined : 25th Nov 2007 - 17 years ago

Last Online : 2nd Aug 2024 - 1 year ago

Twanna1 comments on tracks

Twanna1 has posted 93 comments on other peoples tracks.

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Twanna1 5th May 2011 18:22 - 14 years ago

on And Now by DJSchmeeJ

Had me up and dancin'!!! What would have really been cool, would have been a real sweet bridge before you ended it.

Other than that...it was jumpin':-)

Twanna1 5th May 2011 18:10 - 14 years ago

on No Solution by DanielGtrman

Another beautiful instrumental. I could feel the story the lead guitar was telling. I really enjoy listening to a guitarist who speak through their guitar rather than playing a lot of scale runs. The ending also seems to convey the name of the song, "No Solution".

Great job.

Twanna

Twanna1 5th May 2011 17:54 - 14 years ago

on Flamenco Latino by DanielGtrman

This is beautiful! You are a very talented guitarist. Wow!!! Fav'd.

DanielGtrman replied Unknown

Thanks Twanna for dropping by and giving this track of mine a listen and review, appreciated

Twanna1 26th Apr 2011 22:38 - 14 years ago

on WHY studio mix by yeshintae

Beautiful song. I recognized the piano before I read the description. Minor2go/aka Martin is fantastic. I used his tracks on this: https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/102070.

Had you considered vocals on this? I would love to take a stab at it.

Have a great one.

Twanna

yeshintae replied Unknown

Always looking for good vocals!
Hit me up at me email yeshintae@hotmail.com

Enjoying your track list so far ;)

Much Respect from LA

Twanna1 24th Apr 2011 06:22 - 14 years ago

on Hirogenium Feat Effluence - Turn by Hirogenium

Great track and production!! The Effluence's acapella and beat set the tone for the track.

Great job!

Twanna

Hirogenium replied Unknown

Thanks a lot, Twanna! Thank you for listening. I'm pleased you like it. :)

Twanna1 21st Apr 2011 20:36 - 14 years ago

on Dream of a Gypsy of outofeden by acidic

Great groove...you can definitely hear and feel the vintage "West Coast" flava..

Good Job!!

Twanna

Twanna1 21st Apr 2011 20:33 - 14 years ago

on The Pacific by SimonVHimmel

Hello SimonVHimmel:

I really enjoyed the tract, but do this...envision yourself in a club....what would keep you movin'? A strong heartbeat keeps the dancers on the floor. Then add some flavor on top of the beat...then bring it back down...let it simmer for a little while, then bring it back up again. All the while keeping that heartbeat strong and hard. You don't want the crowd to leave the floor before the song ends. Keep'em movin'.

Have a great one.

Twanna

Twanna1 11th Apr 2011 15:52 - 14 years ago

on it is ever Weekend by zappo

Love the funk of this. Your style puts in the mind of a dear friend of mine, Howard Wales. Check him out: http://howardwales.com/

Great job!!

zappo replied Unknown

thanks man for your review

Twanna1 5th Apr 2011 20:50 - 14 years ago

on Yume by jettoki

Hello Jettoki. There is no sweeter gift to give to someone than a piece of your soul expressed through music.

I noticed the intro was 20 seconds long before the body of the music started. You could add a little beat at the 10 seconds to introduce the body of the song. Here's an example of what I was talking about. It is a track of mine call "My Lament"

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/99716

Other than that...Great job!!!

Best wishes for your endeavor.

Twanna

jettoki replied Unknown

thank you for the advice, i listened to your song and i know what you mean now, I'ma gonna try adding some "spice" to my intro :)

thanks for your kind review and for helping me on my way to being creative

greetings from hamburg
jettoki

Twanna1 3rd Apr 2011 02:47 - 14 years ago

on GPS by JesseFick

Brilliant!! Statement well stated. Fav'd it.

Have a great one!

Twanna1 2nd Apr 2011 21:41 - 14 years ago

on Element by LeftArmy

Great track. Very nice how you introduced the orchestration after the piano. Love the energy.

Twanna

LeftArmy replied Unknown

Thanks for the review! :)

Twanna1 1st Apr 2011 16:43 - 14 years ago

on DJSCRATCH by theFISHface

Good morning theFISHface. Here is the link to what I was talking about. http://www.taxi.com/ I receive there newsletter where they solicit for music for various entertainment entities.

God bless.

Twanna

theFISHface replied Unknown

thanks Twanna1, i'll be sure to check it out!

cheers
theFISHface

Twanna1 30th Mar 2011 04:04 - 14 years ago

on Change ur wayz by sirrmineyez

Great message. Great feel. Unfortunately, I could not understand all of the words. The music overpowered your vocals. I got the just of the song from the description.

When I am laying down a vocal track, I try to really enunciate my words, being my voice is so deep so there is clarity as I sing the phrase. I learned this from my Dad. He would always say, "If they cannot understand what you are singing, they will not get the song."

Just a little direction.

Have a blessed week.

Twanna

sirrmineyez replied Unknown

Hi T,u r so right,being new to this game, its ok to learn from ur mistakes.Sometimes i think the tune of the track will draw the listener before they may realise the message in the vocals.Might be a bit backwards aye?Iv gotta sort out my levels and balance the sound.Iam really grateful for any advice you can give me and i will keep in mind what ur Dad had passed on to you,God Bless ya T.

Twanna1 30th Mar 2011 03:59 - 14 years ago

on Long Road by sirrmineyez

Beautiful song. I could not understand the rap part though. The song has a heart-felt message and it will bless those who hear it if they could understand what is being said. Other than that, beautiful.

Have a blessed week.

Twanna

sirrmineyez replied Unknown

Hey T,thanks for the reply.I know my bro wasnt 100% in it,but he had just written that 30min prior to puttin it on loopy.But he has done a proper version that i havent even heard yet.Hes given me the Zoom mrs1044 back but wit no power lead.Never mind,ive just been playin with the ableton on my new apple lappy i just got and man i thought the Zoom was complicated.So if you got any tips on ableton live 8,i sure could do wit som.But the sound is awesom.Oh i got ur reply via email in regards to masterpiece,thanks.I really luv that song,oh and being Maori which is a native from New Zealand(lol)is where Tino aatahua comes from(very beautiful)Hey, it was cool 2 catch up T.Catch ya later.Bless ya

Twanna1 30th Mar 2011 03:10 - 14 years ago

on DJSCRATCH by theFISHface

Hey FISHface...love the energy of this track. While I was listening to it, I envisioned CSI as they are running some type of testing in the lab. You should submit this to TAXI. If you have not seen the show CSI, check it out and you will see what I mean.

Have a great one!!

theFISHface replied Unknown

What do you mean by TAXI?

Peace and Jesus
theFIShface

Twanna1 22nd Mar 2011 00:53 - 14 years ago

on OS Funk w NS FX - DJJPA by DJJPA

Hey DJJPA, just finished listening to your track. Love the groove. The bass has a great tone and is "Old Skool" funk. You are headed in a sweet direction. Keep your momentum going. Great beginnings!

DJJPA replied Unknown

I appreciate your time and ear. I'm just getting serious with something I've played around with all my life. Music. And if I can keep getting input from others with some experience, such as yourself I think I can bring it all together. Again thanks for the listen and encouragement.

Twanna1 16th Feb 2010 19:25 - 15 years ago

on Unintended Justice Instrumental by DustHill

Hey Dusty... Thank you so much for the kind words. I would be honored for you to upload "I Am Your Masterpiece" to your website player. As I mentioned before, the tracks you made available was the partial inspiration for the song. The Lord was the primary.

Do you have another email I can contact you through?

Mine is twannaturner1@yahoo.com.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Twanna

P.S. I updated the previous review in attempts to contact you. Guess that was not necessary:-)

DustHill replied Unknown

hey twanna :) wow fast replier good to seee :) hihi ehhm can u send me the mp3 of that song I am Your Masterpiece to my e-mail: official@dusthill.net --> many thanks! greetz from dusthill

Twanna1 15th Feb 2010 21:18 - 15 years ago

on Unintended Justice Instrumental by DustHill

DustHill replied Unknown

hi there twanna thx alot for the kind review I just sent ya a message :) cheerz dusty

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