I love finding tracks inspired by pieces of literature! This one's got a foreboding atmosphere to be sure, and I suspect parallels Bradbury's theme as well (it's been a long, long time since I read it). Really great job of creating an "uncertain" environment with the sounds you chose!
Yeah, the Tao of Moment(s). The simplicity here is really difficult to achieve, and you've hit it perfectly. This has such beautiful sounds and you really have captured That Moment. Sweet.
I appreciate the laid back nature of this track. It has tremendous potential. There are a couple of elements that, in my opinion, would make this a stronger track. 1. A more consistent melodic motif. Not something overwhelming really, but something that when I (or any listener) hear it, I want to hear it again. This might be considered a melodic hook, but I am not suggesting that it is something that needs to be "poppy", just something that stands out enough that it anchors the flow of the music. 2. The other element that would benefit from some polish and consideration is the percussion. I kept hearing something more dynamic happening in the background, even though it was not actually happening. Think about adding some deceptive percussive elements, things that are subtle but noticeable. This will help out a lot with the repetitious nature of the rhythm track. These are merely suggestions, and I would never presume to know what you like to hear and listen to, I can only speak for myself in this area. I really enjoy this track, so it is worth my time to throw out a couple of ideas for you. Peace, Six
thank you very much for your feedback. If there were some kind of rating system for feedbacks, yours would be on top. Some of your suggestions sound most considerable and some of them might be argued against. But as a whole your feedback gave me a lot to think about.
A i like thiz track right here itz like sum OST muzik 4 Tha Mack... I Could c thiz as and interlude beat or 1 i burn grapez 2 u kno.... I follow thee same rule bra KISS.... Keep up the hard work...
Ohhh...Sininen hetki...that just got welded into my frontal lobe....What a fitting description for that time of day.....this track is in tune with the celestial mechanics involved with the Blue moment...very Zen and undoubtedly atmospheric...quite beautiful!....lovely work cheers planet :)
You are a composer who makes soundscapes to moving images. You can "see" in your music. When I get more time I shall be checking out more of your tracks.
Your description of the track really reflected how this made me feel. In spite of the sense of calm your sounds produced, I couldn't help but feel as if something bad was bound to happen. The fact that no intense sounds busted out towards the end or anywhere made me feel like I was lucky to escape intact. Great ambiance in this.
to me this felt super depressed, just me but it was like one of those songs you would play a brutal game like manhunt to. you seriously seriously have something cool going here. i really thought it was cool and its faved by me now good and crazy!
I think you captured what you set out to capture if your were going for an aquatic feel. I could meditate to this song. I may have to have my wife listen to this. She is a big Yoga buff... Great song.
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