RampatheSwift

hi i like your make itmusic this melody is so good

Hello!

Hip-hop is not really my style but this sounds enough nice to me. A bit observation : i feel the drums a little too loud, sometimes suppress some other sounds a bit and for a long track, its not enough various to be a lead channel without the chance of boredom (and there is no need for use it that way, there is nice synths and pianos!). However, its just my opinion as a listener - it might be that sounds better now than with more faint drums.

GJ!

Regards, traz

ps : sorry for my bad english

Smooth track, Love the drums.

very fun vibe here. Like a "walk in the park" or something out of a "high school musical" . Still very catchy nice work man. I'm enjoying your style.

Great Track

love the chords. upbeat drumming. cheerful. happy music. simple, sweet. nice little touches here and there - like the bits of vocal chorus. do you think there could be more "presence" in the mix? is there a possibility you could "normalize" the track to bring it up? all the best. look forward to hearing more! regards - Dan

Maybe I have a strange taste in music or something but I didn't find this cheesey at all. It's good, I like it. Those drums are pretty sweet too.

Nice Nice

It's always funny to see how many different style the same 'pella may suggest to producers. I've used the same one in a totally different fashion. Very interesting!

awesome percussion sounds with a killer verb. music is soothing and nice!

I heard nothing wrong with your song my friend. for me, everything is on point. all you have to do now, is believe in yourself because everything starts happening as soon as you start believing in yourself. i love the song, big time. Salute!

very dope

sounds kinda dub stepish..... but I like it!

Yeah, I feel King Crimson in there too. Every heard of Planet P? I think you'd love that band. Big hit some called Why Me? Two perfect albums - Planet P and Pink World. "Only You and Me" "The Strangers" & "The Shepherd" are faves. A true eighties synth master.

I like where yer goin w it. You have a good sense of off-beat rhythms. Maybe being all the way down in NZ helps isolate u from Diznee radio (which has sterilized amerikan muzak perhaps beyond repair) and gives you some opportunity for some original thought.

I think you'd need to do the piece using actual drums live to really hit all that interesting offbeat just right. But cool dude. BTW, I am also a fan of Katie! :-)

Oh that was hilarious. Very strange but ya hafta gamble sometimes to create something new. You should post the lyrics. Didja ever hear the song Three of a Perfect Pair by King Crimson. I think you'd appreciate.

I'm surprised that you're not happy with this, as it's very on point! I only think it could use a little mastering, but the mix sounds pretty good to me! I really like how you used the vocals! Groovy song!

Loving the track mate, keep it up!

I really like it the bass sounds good to me :P

oMG I love this track it was very relaxing I mite jus have to play it agin....keep um comming n great job

dear Paora ,I had heard several usage of this pella of colleague Katiefrom various people , and think neither of them were such attuned true & like this considered harmonized & match with that acapella . very welldone it was & my Fav Mark tells the rest for U ... greatest respects & best wishes my friend.______Behnam

You've heard the term, "the artist is his own worst critic."? It's true. Even if the flaws are blatantly obvious, never give the viewer or listener a check list of what YOU think is wrong. Otherwise, that's all they will focus on. If you just present your work as is and let them take it for what it is, 9 times out of 10, no one will think otherwise. You know the kicks and bass need work, but Joey Baggadonuts on the street doesn't. He's going to think you meant for it to be that way and still like it.

Now, as for the track. It's great. The arrangement, chord progression, and vocals are awesome. The beat is great, and you seamlessly built around the vocals. But, like you've said, the bass and the kick do need some minor adjustments. But not much at all. The feel of the song along with the emotion of the vocals make it a little dirtier and gritty. Maybe some minor EQ adjustments to accent the high ends for more pop and a bit of a razors edge. (At least that's what I would do). Other than that...I really like it. If I heard it on the radio, I'd not only look into who it was, but tell my friends to check it out as well.

Love the ethnic tribal feel this has to it!

I love the mysterious vibe to this!

Would love to hear this when you finish it.!

Im liking what im hearing!

Keep on it man!

Interesting project, wondering for the final version. It's funny how we took totally different direction starting from the same acapella... https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/142531